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第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
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第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
网络啊,你是高科技、现代化的象征,按说,和你在一起,我会收获知识和快乐,可是,你却让我失去了太多太多——
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“爸爸,学校收资料费,要27块钱。”我对爸爸说。爸爸听了后,颇感不满地问我:“上周不是才交了18元资料费吗?”我心里害怕起来,生怕爸爸知道我在欺骗他,生怕爸爸知道我是骗钱上网,支支吾吾着不知怎么回答爸爸的问题,但爸爸还是从他的兜里掏出了27元钱递给我,说:“到校就交给老师,可不要丢了啊!”……网络啊,请你看看,和你在一起,我失去了比金钱还要宝贵的诚实。
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英语课上了还不到十分钟,我就没有了一点精神。我清楚,这是我与A在网络玩了一整夜游戏的结果。心里面虽然强迫自己要拿出点精神,但却管不住自己,慢慢地我就将头靠在课桌上睡着了。当然,英语老师没有忘记当着全班同学的面狠狠地批评我一番,外带罚站两节课的时间……网络啊,请你看看,和你在一起,我失去了比金钱还宝贵的人格尊严。
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我的朋友B被外校的C打了一顿,B将这件事情告诉我们,我们都非常气愤,商量着如何解决这个问题。D说:“不如我们学学网络游戏中的办法,一伙人联合起来收拾收拾C。”这个建议获得了我们一致的同意。于是,放学后,我们组织了六个人在路上截住了C,对他进行穷追猛打,直至将C打得头破血流、肋骨折断……网络啊,请你看看,和你在一起,我失去了比金钱还宝贵的善良品格。
网络啊,虽说你是高科技、现代化的象征,但你让我们失去了太多宝贵的东西!我恳请你想一个良方,让我和你在一起的时候,只收获知识和快乐,不要再失去所剩无几的财富!
你的身影时常在我的梦中出现,你的声音在我的.耳畔萦绕,你的轮廓在我的眼前闪过,你是谁?我好想和你在一起!
我反复地和你在梦中相遇,好似有一股无形的力量推动着我靠近你,想仔细看清黑暗中你的样子,但我看不清楚什么,只有一双或是温柔的、或是慈爱的、或是严厉的眼睛在我的面前闪烁。靠近你,我冰冷的心会温暖起来,郁闷的心就会开朗起来,彷徨的心会坚定起来,那种感觉真是美妙至极!
我不停地追寻着你,想要抓住你,和你在一起。但我不能够——
“当,当,当”,敲门声将我拉回到现实世界中来,妈妈端着牛奶走进来,看到我趴在书桌前睡着了,不禁心疼地说:“学累了吧,那就再多休息一会吧。”我心不在焉地答应了一声,就在妈妈转身离开的那一瞬间,我突然发现,妈妈的身影多么像我梦中的你呀!就在这个时候,外婆也轻手轻脚地走进了我的房间,对我说:“不要把自己身体学坏了呀,赶紧出去玩一会儿!”说完,收拾起我的房间来,临走时顺手把我的脏衣服带了出去。这时,我忽然觉得外婆的身影也好似梦中人呢!我糊涂了,用力地甩甩头,想把乱七八糟的思绪里清楚。“小A,你的电话!”正在客厅里为我修理复读机的爸爸隔着房间的门对我喊,我急急忙忙地跑去接电话,哦,原来是老师打过来的。“AA,这次调研虽然不理想,但不要气馁,只要仔细分析原因,对症下药,我相我若有所思地回到了房间,坐了下来,静静地想着。我终于获得了答案,梦中人,我在生活中找到了你!你是我的亲人、老师、朋友,你给了我不尽的关爱、鼓励和帮助!你的爱护、信任和期望是我前进的动力,和你们在一起,我真的很幸福。
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第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下
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第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构
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第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street。 Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard。 On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的',这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red, not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply。 After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It's you。" I said, quite released。
Country Garden and Me
On the way from Panyu City to Shunde City and approaching the conjunction point of both cities, a big advertisement board of the infamous Country Garden will catch your eyes. And on the board, a lovely girl gently holds a little white pigeon.
She looks at everybody with a sweet smile. Who is this girl? Let me tell you later. Country Garden is located at the Beijao town, Shunde City of Guangdong Province. Ten years ago when my Dad and Mom took me as a baby to Guangzhou, it was a wasteland here. But what does this piece of wasteland look like nowadays? Country Garden has been developed and enlarged rapidly on the ground of this land, and a great number of high-quality houses and apartments have been built up within the garden. Over the past decade, other nine country gardens with various unique designs have been erasing around the great city of Guangzhou. The construction and management of several gardens have engaged the devoted contributions from my Dad and Mom.
Country Garden has grown up together with me, and I am one of the witnesses of its growth and development.
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第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文:
第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
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