游戏开始了,老师让我们写出时间、地点、人物、事件。写完后,老师让四 个人分别说时间、地点、人物和事件,并把说出来的连成一句话。第一排说:“在即将喷发的火山口干坏事。”第二排说:“星期天,我和爸爸去游泳馆买 菜。”说完后,大家笑得前仰后合。有的.笑得直喊肚子疼,有的笑得眼泪都要流出来了,还有的笑得一口水吐到别人身上。我也忍不住笑,心想:“怎么会在 喷发的火山口干坏事呢?到底是谁和他爸去游泳馆买菜呢?”
开始写了,我的心还沉浸在这个有趣的游戏中。
简评:写出了游戏的过程,尤其是写出了游戏的场面、同学们的神态和动作,“有的……有的……还有的……”用得很好。
Father's Day
Yesterday was Father's Day. I had planned to give my father a present. But I didn't remember it until in the morning.It was too late to post a card to him. So I decided to buy something. When I was in the department store. I found it was not easy for me to choose something right for him. Suddenly I
got an idea. I ran home and opened my computer. I made a beautiful card and mailed him through the Internet. then I began to make supper. When father came home, he was very glad to find a big meal on the table. then I asked him to check his e-mail. He was amazed to find a beautiful card in his e-mail-box.
What a wonderful surprise!
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