初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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今天,学校组织三至六年级去汝湖的德育基地开展实践活动,这着实让我兴奋、高兴。
八点钟,广播响起了,我们迈着整齐的脚步,走向操场集合,上了大巴车,沿途一路美丽的风景,似乎诉说着德育基地的快乐。
到了实践基地,首先映入眼帘的是四个苍劲有力的大字——教育基地,接着看到一排穿着迷彩服的解放军叔叔列队等候我们的到来。也拉开了我们今天实践活动的序幕。我们班被命名为“十九连”,在教官的带领下我们开始了基本训练,这让我们感受到了——苦。
烈日当空,我们分成四列,按教官的要求站的笔直,同学们热得大汗淋漓,心里比吃黄连还苦,且也不敢吭声。教官似乎从我们的表情察觉到了,严肃的说:“同学们,你们是蓬勃的少年,是祖国的希望,一定需要锻炼好自己的意志,别怕苦!坚持就是胜利!”我们听完后立刻两手加紧大腿,大家又添了一份信心和力量。
在教官的'细心教导下我们的队列整整齐齐,自我感觉都有了点军人的味道。接下来教官带我们去扩展训练,过铁索桥。一看这铁索桥让我感觉到了——怕。
这铁索桥架在一条十多米宽的河面上,桥看似一个长长的摇篮,两边扶手和底部是由几条铁索构成的,桥面铺上了一块块木板,木板与木板之间有一定的空隙,所以远远望去让我感到有些害怕。要过桥了,几位大胆的女生先走。她们刚走几步就开始大叫起来,桥身也开始摇晃起来,我更害怕了。“不要做胆小鬼!”在我心里有着这样一个声音在催促着我前行,对!大胆点,按照教官说的,扶好两边的铁索,一块一块的木板踏稳,不要踏空就没问题了。我鼓足勇气迈进了脚步,一步,两步,三步……在摇晃中,在勇气下,我成功的走过了这座铁索桥!好开心!
伴着时间的脚步,快中午了,为了让我们感受母亲平日的辛苦,知道感恩,这次活动特地安排我们自己动手煮饭吃。来到了野炊的地方,那场面让我感到了——忙。
同学们一来到自己的“工作台”就忙活起来,有的洗菜,有的淘米煲饭,有的洗锅,有的生火……个个忙得不可开交。一会切菜声,炒菜声,交流经验的讨论声都汇集在一起,奏响了一首美妙的交响曲。三十分钟后,在大家的努力下,一桌香喷喷的饭菜做出来了,虽然有些同学变成了大花脸,但大家吃得很开心,笑得很灿烂。是啊,这是我们自己劳动的成果,特别甘甜、美味。从而也让我们感觉到了妈妈日复一日,年复一年的对我们的付出,母亲对我们的爱,尽在不言中。
“纸上谈来终觉浅,绝知此事要躬行。”这次实践活动让我受益匪浅,使我懂得了做人要懂得感恩;让我明白了,如果在胜利前却步,往往会拥抱失败;如果在苦难时坚持,常常会获得新的成功。我期待下一次的实践活动。
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
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