昨天,我们在老师的带领下观看了《背起爸爸上学》这部电影。影片真实,质朴,没有曲折的剧情,却令我难忘,因为这部影片让我清楚的知道了不止母爱是伟大的,血浓于水的父爱也是伟大。
影片主人公石娃出生在贫苦的农民家中,母亲很早就去世了。父亲无法支撑他和姐姐一起上学,只供的起一个孩子读书,他爸爸利用水瓢旋转来选定供石娃或他姐姐读书,最终水瓢指向了石娃。就这样姐姐辍学在家劳动,而石娃可以继续学业。
上学不久后,石娃因为亲眼见到一个同班的小女孩在每天上学都要走过的浅河里淹死了,他很恐惧,不敢过河,瞒着家人逃学了几天,被爸爸发现后,爸爸打了他一顿,石娃依然是不敢过河,爸爸只好背着他去上学。就这样,爸爸每天背着石娃淌过村外的那条和河,风雨无阻从不间断。
因为家中贫困,只好把姐姐嫁给了一个比石娃还要矮的人,换来了一笔礼金,用来继续供石娃上学。石娃没负家人所期望,他得了全国奥林匹克化学一等奖,令爸爸和姐姐都很开心。
石娃的努力没有白费,他收到了录取通知书。但是爸爸不幸中了风,非常需要人照顾。石娃本想瞒着爸爸不去读书,留下来照顾爸爸,可是,他爸爸在无意中看到了那份通知书。石娃爸爸为了不连累石娃,在深夜偷偷的投井去了,石娃发现了,立刻救了爸爸上来,最后决定了背爸爸去上学。
石娃的经历与艰辛让我非常感动。他在那么恶劣的条件下,依然那么坚强,努力的学习,同时把自己的父亲放在第一位。而我们的生活这么幸福,却从来没有考虑过父母的艰辛。我们应该好好珍惜现在的生活,好好学习长大报答我们的父母!
当我看完《背着爸爸去上学》这部电影时,我为石娃的悲惨遭遇十分同情。
这是一个真实的故事。主人公石娃从小失去了母亲的关爱;只能和姐姐,父亲相依为命。又由于他家庭条件并不富裕。他和姐姐之中只能一个人上学,而另一个人要辍学。自后通过铜勺决定石娃上学,而姐姐找毫不情愿的辍学了,但她并没有怨恨爸爸的决定。
光阴似箭,在艰难困苦中长大。但要于石娃昂贵的学费。姐姐只好嫁人。从而来帮石娃挣学费。石娃经过刻苦努力,考取了师范学校,但不幸的是他的父亲却因为中风而瘫痪了。面对着录取通知适合瘫痪的父亲。石娃首先放弃了去学习。他不是一个人去上学,而是被背起亲去上学。
看了这部电影,我感受很多。石娃终于从艰难困苦中走了过来。我不禁想到如果我遇到了和石娃一样的事情,我会怎么做呢?肯定是我不如石娃那么勇敢,那么坚强。石娃他背起爸爸去上学。那并不是什么惊天动地得壮举,只是一些平凡而琐碎的小事,但他奋勇拼搏、自强自立的精神和坚韧不拔的顽强意志却深深地打动了我,使我增加了克服困难,努力进取的勇气和力量。
我们是祖国的新一代,将来要肩负着建设国家的重任。所以我们要有乐观进取,百折不挠的精神,不能因为前进的道路上遇到了挫折和困难就丧失了信心和勇气。那么我们必须学习,全面提高自己的能力。只要像石娃这样的人才能做生活的强者,做建设祖国有用之人。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
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