DearAmy:
How are you? I guess it’spretty tiring to correct all that homework, I wonder if there areany shortcuts?
As a new teacher for ourclass, I think maybe you would like to know a few things about ourclass.
Um…… firstly, maybe you would like a real goodassistant. I recommend agirl, her English name is Amy too, Amy Lin. She’s really good atprocessing details, and, yes, carrying stuff (but not too much.She does everything really fast, and can leave enough timeleft.
Secondly, you might need a student-tutor, astudent that teaches other students. Well, I think a student whichhas “maths-craze” called Eric well be fit for the job. Hecan get good English grades as well, also, he loves helping otherswith their studies. He wears black and blue rimmed glasses all daylong, and maybe you know him. Many boys treat him as a boss, andare willing to listen to him.
Thirdly, perhaps you’re alsolooking for a student which can entertain the class and makeEnglish classes more interesting (a class clown. Then I recommendLeo, he jokes all day long, has a great sense of humor and crazyimagination. But he isn’t a classic good student, so perhapssometimes you’ll get a bit annoyed.
It’sabout ten! Maybe I’ll have to leave the rest for nexttime.
Bestwishes!
Alyssa
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Different people have different views on_____.Some people think that_____,whereas others aegue that __________.
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the opinion that ___________.For one thing,I firmly believe that ___________.For another,_____________.Just think of________,who/which_______.
Taking all these factors into consideration,we may safely come to the conclusion that______.Only if_______can we _______,just as the saying goes,________________.
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In recent years there have been many reports of ________.It turns a new chapter of _________in China,and will have far-reaching effects in the forthcoming years.
The biggest benefit,in my eyes,is that_______.In addition,_______.Finally,______________.
Apart from the benefits mentioned above,we should also face several unavoidable challenges.In the first place,_____________.In the second place,________.What’s more,_______________.In summary,we should_______________.
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Nowadays more and more ______are commonly and widely used in everyday life,ranging from __________to_____________.
The popularity of _______will have a great influence on ______.On the one hand,_________.On the other hand,__________.
To conclude,____________are just like a double-edged sword.With them we may________.However,one point should be kept in mind that we should make sensible use,always being a master instead of slaving of them.
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因为……所以……,由于……因此……,既然……那么……
接下来请欣赏《六国论》中一段精彩论述:
六国破灭,非兵不利,战不善,弊在赂秦。赂秦而力亏,破灭之道也。或曰:“六国互丧,率赂秦耶?”曰:“不赂者以赂者丧,盖失强援,不能独完。故曰‘弊在赂秦’也!”
此段论述,作者仅仅用了一个关联词语“故”却体现出严密的逻辑思维,让人无懈可击。作者开头就指出中心论点“六国破灭,非兵不利,战不善,弊在赂秦。赂秦而力亏,破灭之道也”,但也有几个国家并非如此,于是作者就退一步提出“不赂者以赂者丧,盖失强援,不能独完”的\'分论点,最后用一“故”字做出因果判断,让人信服。
其实我们不难发现,在运用关联词语的本身就是在说理,而此种说理不是材料的简单罗列堆砌,而是通过严密逻辑思维或假设、或因果推断、或条件推断来阐述自己要表达的观点。鲁迅先生的杂文是极富逻辑思辨的,《灯下漫笔》可见一斑:
任凭你爱排场的学者们怎样铺张,修史时候设些什么“汉族发祥时代”“汉族发达时代”“汉族中兴时代”的好题目,好意诚然是可感的,但措辞太绕弯子了。有更直截了当的说法在这里——
一,想做奴隶而不得的时代;
二,暂时做稳了奴隶的时代。
这一种循环,也就是“先儒”之所谓“一治一乱”;那些作乱人物,从后日的“臣民”看来,是给“主子”清道辟路的,所以说:“为圣天子驱除云尔。”现在入了那一时代,我也不了然。但看国学家的崇奉国粹,文学家的赞叹固有文明,道学家的热心复古,可见于现状都已不满了。然而我们究竟正向着那一条路走呢?百姓是一遇到莫名其妙的战争,稍富的迁进租界,妇孺则避入教堂里去了,因为那些地方都比较的“稳”,暂不至于想做奴隶而不得。总而言之,复古的,避难的,无智愚贤不肖,似乎都已神往于三百年前的太平盛世,就是“暂时做稳了奴隶的时代”了。
区区几段文字,却连用了好几个关联词语,并列、转折、因果,说理层层递进,不乏辛辣讽刺。
在平时训练的时候,我们不妨多多开动脑筋,不要简单去思考问题,而要多问几个为什么,想想前因后果,懂得迂回曲折,思维的成熟是离不开思考的。记得,一次课上我要学生用关联词词语写一段有关“弯曲”的语句,一位女生写道:
人生当中,比我们强大的对手不胜枚举,所以适当的弯曲有时也是一种明智的选择。弯曲不是耻辱和无能,不是阿谀逢迎、摧眉折腰,而是让我们了悟身后还有另一条路可以选择,这是一种人生境界。
此段话,貌似简短,其实却包涵了思辨色彩,读来令人深思。
最后请欣赏湖北高考满分作文《大隐隐于市》:
古人有言:小隐隐于山,大隐隐于市。
在我们的印象中,只是仙人道士必傍山而居,不闻世事。蔡志忠曾以漫画对此作了解释:仙,“人”在“山”旁则为仙;“山”中之“人”真仙也。看来,
古时造字便点明了其中真意。
傍山而居,和山水融为一体,这本来就是不食人间烟火的象征,偏又练就一身道行,渗透了无尽禅意,方才以道入土,归隐于山。千百年来,文人墨客莫不对此动了凡心。其中,陶渊明便是这样一个典型,当他一篇《桃花源记》出世,那颗厌倦仕途,向往幻想中的桃花源的心也就出世了。是的,他想要的是归隐,是闲适,是宁静的生活,可是如果不是官场失意,怀才不遇,桃花源这么一个避难所就要永远与他绝缘,并远离世俗而绝迹于他未来纯朴的生活。
Hello, we are XX tourism company, we have you and your 2 children 4 to set up tourist routes for you to choose.
From Beijing to Shanghai\'s tourist routes, you can go play in Shanghai Zoo, which has its own characteristics is a large-scale integrated Zoo. Then you can also go to Shanghai, Nanjing Pedestrian Street shopping, it is a shopper\'s paradise.
From Beijing to Changsha tourist routes, you can go play Changsha Window of the World, which is a new development in an amusement park. Then you can go take a look at Pinghu Tang and Wangfujing, one of the very many. Yuelu Mountain is you have to go to a place, from the top you can see the whole Changsha.
From Beijing to Guangzhou\'s tourist routes, you can go a long long amusement park to play, and that there are many excellent recreational facilities, so that you will not regret it. You can also go to Hong Kong the world\'s wildlife, which is currently China\'s largest imitation of the Wild Animal Park. Guangzhou\'s food is delicious, you will like.
From Beijing to Guilin tourism line, you can go to the famous Lijiang River, sitting on the boat to enjoy the beautiful scenery, and then can go to Yinzi Yan, it was China\'s first large cavern 4. Guilin Yang Shuo in the line of Yang Renjie shopping and you will be a good place to eat. That you will not feel the same with Chinese characteristics.
I hope you are happy to play China
Yours
XXX
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