三角公园座落在霍林河大街和红星路的丁字路口处,由于公园的形状成三角形所以叫三角公园。
公园的中心是一个小广场,你可别小看这广场。早晨太阳还没有露出笑脸,许许多多晨
炼的人们就来到广场上了。于是广场上就热闹了啦。看吧:打羽毛球的,双方你不让我,我不让你。球在空中飞来飞去,被盯得很紧;做操的,随着优美的音乐旋律,有规律地挥舞手臂,扭动着身姿,令人羡慕不已。舞剑的,一会风卷荷叶,一会白鹤亮翅。舞得如同行云流水,但自然而有力。观看的人们发出啧啧的赞叹声。
广场的'东面有两排高大的白杨树,树下是一些体育器材……单杠上有人在做引体向上;双杠上在前后摆动身体;滑梯上孩子们上上下下,那欢乐的叫喊声,不时地在小小的公园里回荡着……
广场的北面,是两个东西相连的大花坛,花坛里开满了各种各样的花,串红一朵挨着一朵鲜艳无比,地雷花个个张开大口笑迎朝阳,还有许多我叫不出名字的小花,他们你不让我,我不让你,争奇斗艳。怒放的鲜花引来了蜜蜂和蝴蝶,蜜蜂一会儿落在串红花上,一会儿又落在地雷花上。蝴蝶呢?也不示弱,在花间翩翩起舞,永远不知疲倦……
广场的西面、南面是松树和杨树。树下有许多小石凳,人们坐在小石凳上,有的下棋,有的聊天,还有的在谈论着国家大事……
啊!多么可爱的三角公园。你鲜花盛开,绿树成阴,热闹非凡。我渴望你的明天更加可爱。
《三角地》书已经合上很久了,可书里的一个故事一向回荡在我脑海里…。
主人公阿雏出身在一个贫穷的渔民家庭里,他父母和村民们在一次出海中翻船了,村里的人各自逃命,但是阿雏的父母却没有逃上岸。阿雏从此跟着祖母生活。
之后,当阿雏明白大狗的爸爸本来有机会救他爸爸,但是他不但没有救,只顾自己逃命,还在村民面前炫耀自己逃命的“聪明”。阿雏很生气,心里充满了恨,看谁都不顺眼。他欺负同学,想办法捣乱村里人,从此他变坏了。我觉得每个人遇到这样的事都会很生气,甚至愤怒,因为大狗的爸爸太自私,只顾自己逃命,不顾别人的生死,他失去了人性本该具有的善良。他已经错误一次,他就应弥补自己的过错,去照顾一下阿雏的生活,让阿雏体会到虽然失去了父母,但生活中依然能体会到家庭的温暖。他就不会变坏,心里就不会恨村里人,但是大狗的爸爸没有这样做。
正当我书中的主人翁扼腕叹息是,故事的结尾让我有了新的认识,阿雏并没有一向这样做恶下去,其实他的心灵还是纯洁的。
一次,阿雏把大狗带到一个孤岛上,想解气,但是当他看到大狗很饿、很难受时,触动了他心底的善良,他找来了野鸭蛋,给大狗;他看大狗冷,就把自己的衣服给大狗穿;他看大狗还是很饿,又去给大狗抓野鸭,但他再也没有从河里起来…。他并没有因为大狗的父亲当时自私的行为而耿耿于怀,而是用自己的生命来拯救他的“朋友”——大狗,他这种大爱无私的境界深深地打动了我,阿雏是一个好孩子,他的单纯、善良、仁爱正是当今社会最需要的,却也是最缺少。
如果大狗的爸爸当初塞给阿雏爸爸的不是手电筒,而是自己的手;
如果大狗的爸爸在村民面前不是炫耀自己逃命的“智慧”,而是说出自己自私逃命的内疚;
如果大狗的爸爸和村民们都能把阿雏当成自己家的孩子,多给他一点关怀,一点爱;
如果阿雏在捣乱犯错时,村民们能告诉阿雏,失去的亲情虽然不能找回来。但生活中的爱仍然存在……。。那么,阿雏就不会老是在村里捣乱,就不会对全村人都怀有仇恨,就不会带大狗去芦苇地,他也不会失去年轻的生命……
生命是最重要的,是神圣的,善良也是我们人应有的本性,失去了善良,也就等于失去了生命!我们就应学习阿雏身上的善良,在别人有困难时,要及时帮忙别人。就像我们的现实生活,同学之间互相帮忙,相互团结,因此我们的生活充满了爱,我们生活在一个温暖的群众中。
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
Expert tips on how to prevent avian influenza H7N9 collated by current argument data dictionary
1.平时加强体育锻炼,多休息,避免过度劳累,不吸烟,勤洗手;注意个人卫生,打喷嚏或咳嗽时掩住口鼻。
1 usually strengthen physical exercise, rest more, avoid excessive overworked, do not smoke, wash their hands; pay attention to personal hygiene, when sneezing or coughing and cover your nose and mouth.
2.保持室内清洁,使用消毒液清洗的地毯,避免使用难以清洗的地毯,保持地面、天花板、家具及墙壁清洁,确保排水道通畅;保持室内空气流通,应每天开窗换气两次,每次至少10分钟,或使用抽气扇保持空气流通;尽量少去 空气不流通的场所。
2 keep the room clean, use disinfectant cleaning carpets, avoid the use of hard to clean the carpet, keep the floor, ceiling, furniture and walls clean, to ensure smooth drainage channel; maintains the indoor air circulation, ventilation windows should be at least two times a day, 10 minutes each time, or use a fan to keep air circulation; as little as possible to airless places.
3.注意饮食卫生,进食禽肉、蛋类要彻底煮熟,加工、保存食物时要注意生、熟分开;养成良好的卫生习惯,搞好厨房卫生,不生食禽肉和内脏。解剖活(死家禽、家畜及其制品后要彻底洗手。
3, pay attention to food hygiene, eating meat, eggs should be thoroughly cooked, processing, preservation of food to the attention of raw, cooked separately; develop good health habits, good kitchen hygiene, do not eat raw poultry meat and offal. Anatomy of living (dead to wash hands thoroughly, livestock and poultry products.
同时,在户外洗手不方便的时候,可以使用免洗洗手液,随身携带,随时随地隔离病菌,呵护您的健康。
At the same time, when the outdoor hand-washing is not convenient, can use hand sanitizer, carry whenever and wherever possible, isolate the pathogen, take care of your health.
4.发现疫情时,应尽量避免与禽类接触;公众特别是儿童应避免密切接触家禽和野禽。
4 found in the epidemic, should avoid contact with poultry; the public especially children should avoid close contact with poultry and wild birds.
5.注意生活用具的消毒处理。禽流感病毒不耐热,100°C下一分钟即可灭活。对干燥、紫外线照射、汞、氯等常用消毒药都很敏感。
5 pay attention to disinfection and living appliances. Avian influenza viruses do not heat, 100 ° C, one minute can be inact
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
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