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四级作文常考的传统节日【一】

【例句】

5.He spent 4 hours in doing his homework yesterday.

It took him 4 hours his homework yesterday.

6.It seems that they like pop music.

They to like pop music.

【正确答案】5.to do6.seem

【规律分析】这部分要求了解代词it在句子中的各种用法。it在英语中是个相当活跃的.代词，它可以作形式主语、形式宾语和引导强调句等。

四级作文常考的传统节日【二】

4月的一天，教科学的冯老师给大家全班每人发了一颗葵花籽，让大家回家将来找个花盆种出来，观察种子成长的过程写观察日记。回家将来，我就找来一个大花盆，把葵花籽种了进来。可是一连10多天过去了，别说葵花种子发芽了，就连草都没有长出一棵来。

不懂种花的母亲说：”你天天浇那样多水，可能葵花籽已经淹死了，看到我伤心的样子，母亲就翻出大家去年采集的牵牛花的种子撒在了我的花盆里。从那将来，我也很少去管它们，这些牵牛花的生命力还真是强大啊！无论是干枯的环境还是湿润的环境它们都顽强的成长着。说来也奇怪，自从牵牛花拼命发芽疯狂向上长的时候，我的向日葵也冒出来了。它们像是在比赛似的一个劲地向上窜。后来，它们做了好朋友，牵牛花伸出无数条芊芊玉手盘在向日葵的颈上，再也分不开了。

早上母亲在阳台晾服装。我则跑到阳台帮忙。就在我向阳台角落里一瞥的刹那间，我仿佛看到一朵小喇叭对我绽开了笑脸。再仔细一看，可不是，我的牵牛花不知晓何时已经开花了。有3朵呢！在稠密的绿叶之间，3朵淡蓝色的牵牛花绽开了一个个小喇叭的形状，煞是惹人青睐。我忍不住摸摸这一朵又碰碰那一朵。爱不释手了！

中午的时候，我又去看它，却发现这3朵牵牛花睡觉啦！它们一个个收起喇叭状的花瓣，只留下一个个长约2厘米长的花梗。这是为何呢？难道它真的休眠了？我问母亲，母亲说她也不懂，让我一个人上网查查答案。

原来，牵牛花在清晨4、5点钟的时候就会开花，由于它的花又大又薄，并且花中含丰富的水分，当太阳照射到时，花里的水分慢慢就蒸发干了。花儿便凋谢了。原来它的花如此短暂。

四级作文常考的传统节日【三】

【例句】

3.The room is empty.

There is in the room.

4.What can I do for you？

anything I can do for you？

【正确答案】3.nothing4.Is there

【规律分析】这部分要求了解 there be 句型的基本结构，注意系动词be在不同语境下的变化形式。

四级作文常考的传统节日【四】

Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.

So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.

In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.

首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。

第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….

第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….

第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….

其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。

段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。

统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。

连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。

完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。

再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。

1. It has been shown that … …

类似句型：It is known to us that … …

It is said that … …

It is reported that … …

It is controversial that … …

2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。

3. enable v. 使…能够

I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.

4. in that = because

表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：

The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.

此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：

Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。

最后，提纯范文“措辞”。

1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。

2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的

形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions

a multitude of

a great deal of

a large amount of

plenty of

many a

3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。

I argue that … …

I maintain that … …

I claim that … …

I insist that … … = I think that … …

I hold that … …

I assert that … …

I assume that … …

4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的

hold negative view = hold opposite opinions

5. phenomenon n. 现象

social phenomenon 社会现象

natural phenomenon 自然现象

6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever

(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever

在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：

1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会

2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会

3. 我的看法

Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.

However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.

In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.