Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a student of our university, who often spend my spare time in our library. Generally speaking, our library provides quite good service. However, I still have some suggestions for you to upgrade the quality of your service.
To begin with, I would like you to prolong the open time. In the daytime, most students are having classes. To continue, some books are too old/ are out of date. It would be better if you could replace them with updated materials.
I sincerely hope to have a comfortable library. And I would be highly grateful if you could take my suggestions into consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
古人云:“秋风秋雨愁煞人。”我却言:秋独有一番风味。在四季中,你非凡得像一个过客。你没有春的姹紫嫣红;没有夏的热情奔放;没有冬的柔情似水。但我知道,你带给了农民伯伯丰收时脸上洋溢的喜悦。你带给了漫山遍野的树木一张泼墨画,将它们染的透红、金黄。秋姑娘,你是四季中最含蓄的一抹红。
你是从一树落叶开始的……它们洒满了街道、山谷、大街小巷、漫山遍野,有红、有黄、有绿、杂沓纷乱。而它们的母亲——树,静静地站在路旁,在夕阳与我之间,它可真红,红得通透,红得纯净,红的认真,没有一丝杂色,是那么晶莹,像六七岁的乡下女孩,穿着崭新的红袄,满身喜气,脸上露出羞涩的绯红,迎接新年一般。的确,它们迎来了你——秋。
你来了,大地上嫣红点点,接下来就是无处不在的金黄。杨树,桦树,爆竹柳儿,它们的叶子都在你的怀抱中变黄。这儿、那儿,耸起一树树高高的金塔,样白蜡换上金色的舞裙,一阵瑟瑟秋风吹来,那金色的枫叶飘舞着挣脱了它的怀抱,争先恐后投入大地妈妈的怀里。这儿、那儿,轰然炸开一片片焰火,山腰上,马路旁,树梢上的那一点红总是那么醒目。
瞧!南飞的大雁领队,杜鹃、云雀相继而至,天空空了;
瞧!红娘子领着鱼儿潜入水底,无从寻踪,水流空了;
瞧!枫叶从枝条坠落,枝条空了;
开得正盛的菊花也禁不住“化作春泥”了。
当人们下意识地舔衣时,秋啊,你去哪儿?
我知道,春去了,藏进了夏的梦里。夏呢,被你揽入怀中。而你,难道要被冬幽闭在宫里吗?
秋啊,我望不见你了……
你是一个纯情少女,脸上一抹绯红,身穿一袭黄裙,清爽而不失淡雅,你的微笑迷人却含蓄而矜持,是那么、那么叫人思恋……
四级英语很快就要到来了,英语是占据重要的部分,快来看看下面的范文及写作指导吧。
下面请看一篇漫画式命题的作文预测题:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should express your views on the impact of air pollution. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
【参考模板范文】
The Impact of Air Pollution
The cartoon vividly reveals the phenomenon of air pollution or the decline of air quality. In the cartoon we can see the air pollution is so serious that the earth can't bear it.
What exactly contribute to this phenomenon? Possible reasons can be listed as follows: firstly, vehicle exhaust gases could be one of the most leading causes. With the improvement of economy and people's living standard, urban inhabitants in mounting numbers own their private cars. More automobiles will inevitably generate more exhaust gases. Additionally, household appliances widely used in cities also release a great amount of carbon dioxide gases, which further intensifies air pollution. Last but not least, many factories around the cities emit large quantities of untreated poisonous gases, which should also be responsible for the decline of air quality.
Definitely, air pollution will exert a detrimental impact on many aspects of people's life. For example, many diseases such as cough, skin problem and lung cancer are caused by it. Perhaps it is high time that we should adopt some measures to solve the problem of air pollution.
英语漫画作文写作指导
第一、读图审题
四级漫画作文中的漫画通常反映一个社会现象或生活哲理,要求考生根据自己对漫画的理解来写作。因此,要写好四级漫画作文,审题格外重要。考生在下笔之前要仔细看漫画,弄清漫画的寓意,这是文章切题的保证。此外,在本次四级考试的三道写作题中,Directions部分都给出了写作内容的大致方向,这也为考生把握漫画寓意提供了帮助。下面笔者就来逐一梳理2013年6月四级作文的三幅漫画及其传达的寓意。
第二、谋篇布局
在把握文章的主旨之后,考生就可以构思整篇文章的架构了。四级漫画作文的写作可以分为下面三个段落。
第一段:开门见山,简要描述一下漫画内容,并指出漫画的寓意。描述漫画内容是为了揭示其中的寓意,是手段而不是目的,所以描述要简洁明快,一般来说一句话足矣。需要提醒考生的是,写作的Directions部分虽然给出了大致的写作主题,但是也要求考生对漫画进行简要描述,因此考生切不可抛开漫画内容直接展开议论。
第二段:表达考生对漫画寓意的看法,这是文章的重心所在。比如,就第一道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段阐述阅读文学作品的重要性;就第二道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段论述为什么凡事必须从小事做起;就第三道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段论述掌握基本技能的重要性。
第三段:指出漫画的寓意对大学生的教育意义,或者提出解决问题的建议。考生需要注意的是,结尾段一般并不需要实质性的分析,其主要作用是总结和升华,使文章结构完整。所以结尾段的写作要简明扼要,点到即止。
第三、论证方法
漫画作文的\'第二段要表达考生对漫画寓意的看法,这是文章的核心段落,也是作文字数达到要求的关键。因此,考生在这一段要浓墨重彩,写深、写透。在写这一段时,考生要尽量摆事实、讲道理,避免空泛的议论。针对这一核心段落,笔者在此推荐以下三种展开议论的常用方法,希望对考生有所启发。
1.条分缕析
在写作第二段时,考生可以从2~3个方面对观点展开论述,这种写法可使文章显得层次清楚、条理清晰。例如,本次四级作文第一道题目的第二段需要阐述阅读文学作品的重要性,考生就可以从以下两个方面展开:第一,相对于电子媒体,文学阅读更能培养人的想象力;第二,阅读文学作品能够帮助我们更好地了解社会。请参考下面的范文。
There wasa time when children could relish (欣赏/ 也可以使用appreciate 替换 literature. But childrentoday can enjoy the sounds and action on a TV or computer screen. “So why bother reading?” some ask. The reasonis obvious: It enriches our imagination. When we read apiece of literature, we are living the life of RobinHood or starting an adventure with Tom Sawyer. In addition, literature is the mirror of society,whether it be poetry, drama or fiction. We know thesociety better through literature.
2.举例论证
如果漫画所传达的是抽象的人生哲理,那么考生在论述时最好能举出具体的事例,尽量避免空洞的说教。比如,就本次四级作文第二道题目而言,考生可以在第二段中举出一些成功人士如何从小事做起的例子。笔者下面提供的范文中用到的是哈兰·桑德斯上校从一个小吃店做起,最后缔造出遍布全球的肯德基快餐帝国的例子,用以证明只有从小事做起,才能成就大事。请看下面的范文。
Everything is smallbefore it is big. A good example is KFC. In 1930 Colonel Harland Sanders beganserving food to his service station customers in Corbin, a city in Kentucky. He fried chicken in his own kitchen andperfected his secret recipe there. From the small roadside eatery, he went on to build an empire of fast food.
3.类比论证
如果漫画中的寓意不容易通过具体的事例来证明,那么考生还可以使用类比论证的方法,即通过打比方来论证一个抽象的道理。比如,对于本次四级作文的第三道题目,考生可以在第二段中用学习打篮球的过程来打比方。学习打篮球时,只有先学会了投球、运球、传球这些基本技能,才能进一步学习高难度的技能。以此类推,无论做任何事情,只有掌握了基本的技能,才可能取得更大的成功。此外,考生还可以举出统计数字,用具体的研究结果来证明论点。请看下面的范文。
Simple as they mayseem, basic skills serve as the first link in the chain of success. Thisis analogous to learning to play basketball. If shooting, dribbling and passing are not mastered,learning advanced skills will become difficult, if notimpossible. A growing body of research has also documented that such basicskills as reading, writing and computing are highlycorrelated with success later in life. A 2012 study surveyed 300 CEOs ofFortune 500 companies and found that 87% attributed part of their success tothe basic skills they learned in primary school.
秋天,最先是触碰到的。一阵微风拂过,你的手就触碰到了那隐藏在闷热中的一丝凉意。
夏天的威风,是一点点地被秋消磨光的,早晨和傍晚,凉意在空气里蔓延,天上那刺眼的太阳,仿佛已不再产生炎热,风,开始刮了,夏天已无力招架秋的攻击。
但夏天仍与秋天顽强斗争,早晨一过,太阳又威力四射,空气又闷热起来了,仿佛先前的凉意只是你的错觉罢了,夏天还没结束呢。不过,夏天毕竟要衰竭了。
蝉,逐渐稀少。当你发觉时,蝉鸣已从树上消失,好像一夜之间,那些歌唱家,就从这个世界上销声匿迹了,使人觉得心中空荡荡的。夏天,已经衰落了。
此时,夏天仅存的,便是那一些树木、花朵和小草了,但它们也撑不了几天,树上已经出现了黄色,小花枯萎了,小草的草尖也渐渐失去了光芒,这些改变,仅仅是开始,不出几天,树叶将变得多彩起来,红的、黄的、棕的,就好像谁给树叶上了颜料,而这,正是秋的手笔,当树叶流落下时,你可能才发现,原来,秋天已经到了。
那些树叶,像是一只只小鸟,从树上飞下来,轻轻巧巧地降落在地面上,陷入了沉睡,当人从树下来过,那些仍在树上的“小鸟”,便又可能飞到人的身上,像是美丽的装饰。
秋天打败了夏天,就开始了自己的\'生活,抬头看一看,那一群一群的大雁,正是秋天的使者,带着秋天,飞往其他地方。
秋天,正如一只大手,抚摸着大地,让大地一片丰收,呈现出新的一番气象。
© 2022 xuexicn.net,All Rights Reserved.