要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
这是我听到的最难受的话,就像龙应台所说的那样,渐渐地明白到,所谓父母子女一场,就是在一次次离别时看着她他的背影渐行渐远,而他用他的背影告诉你,不必追。
我们教会他仇恨,我们教会他宽容,我们教会他单纯,我们教会他们我们所恐惧,我们所愤怒,我们所拥有。
但不管是什么,我们都教会他爱。
因为爱才会滋生的仇恨,因为爱才会滋生的单纯,爱包容任何事物,不分种族。它会导致悲剧,会导致战争,会导致轮回,但这些事务皆因爱而生,否则不会有这个故事。
不会有术士去养育一条龙,不会有龙无论何地何时都称做爸爸的那个人,不会有龙在怒吼下去毁掉,去毁灭,在烟尘中留下灰烬,不会有一个四处游历又归去却再次一无所有的人,不会有那只愤怒的理智的.成为遥远天空的一颗星的龙,不会有那么一条龙,却在懵懂无知时,背叛了最亲的人。
我们不能一味地教孩子善良,因为善良不仅仅是单纯,单纯的背面便是毁灭。我们不能教他们仇恨,我们的明亮的双眼会失去它的意义。
树欲静而风不止,子欲养而亲不待。
这是我最爱的结局,因为当我们累了困了想家时,
那个人已经不在了。
他不会在沙滩上等到夕阳西下,尽管他那么怕水,他不会再在门口在冷风下等待,即使背后便是温暖的壁炉,他不会再说farewell my son,因为他们已没有机会了。
旦行旦坦荡,且行且珍惜,世界如此之大,却再也寻觅不到你存在过的痕迹,我们一生都能如此幸运的一些人,也在无奈的失去。
今天,我们在阅读班举行了一次朗读比赛。
走进阅读班,老师等到同学都到齐了以后,便对我们说:“同学们,今天我们举行一次朗读比赛。”话音刚落,我们大家便欢呼雀跃起来,老师又讲清了比赛规则,先是以小组为单位,一张桌读一篇课文,可以获得三等奖,然后是自愿参加,两个人一人读一句话读一篇课文,可以获得二等奖,接着是参加一个人读完一篇文章的比赛,可以获得一等奖,最后是在参加独自朗读中的同学选出几名最优秀的获得特等奖。
比赛开始了,第一轮比赛的同学们各个都十分卖力,读的都十分激情,老师表扬了大家认为最优秀的小组。
第二轮比赛,同学们都踊跃参加,终于到我了,我和胡樱航读一篇文章,虽然用尽了全力,但是效果不是太好,老师还是表扬了我们。
第三轮比赛了,我犹豫了一会儿,然后胆怯地举起小手,等待着老师念谁的名字,“曲超凡!”天哪,那一刹那,我的心跳加快了许多,我满头大汗的走到前面,用尽全身的力气,激情昂扬的读完最后一篇文章,然后大汗淋漓地走回座位,但是,其他几位同学也表现的十分优秀,他们读的越好,我的压力就越大,脸上的汗就越多,要选举特等奖了,我的心跳加快,谁会这么幸运地选上特等奖呢?会是谁呢?我好奇地猜测着……“特等奖是——曲超凡和商竞达!”那一刻,惊讶和兴奋充满了我的心……
我最难忘的是第一次参与朗诵竞赛。
三年级校园举行语文竞赛,每一班都要引荐人选参与,由于我素日体现生动、在讲堂中讲话积极,因而教师引荐我参与朗诵竞赛。听到这项消息,我是又惊又喜,由于能代表班级是一项荣誉,可是我却不知道要怎么朗诵?看着竞赛规矩,更是一头雾水,只好回家去讨救兵。
到了家,妈妈为我解说完朗诵规矩后,就开端忙了起来,由于她觉得这是一件重要的事。我在旁看得不可思议,仅仅个小小的竞赛,何须这样借题发挥呢?妈妈对我说:“要细心的预备每一件事,才会有丰厚的收成。”
接着,妈妈带我去访问一位对朗诵有研讨的阿姨,辅导我朗诵的技巧。阿姨说我读得不错,可是声响沙哑,并不合适朗诵,瞬间,我的心境就像从蓝蓝的天空掉到黑漆漆的山沟里,可是阿姨又说:“只需你再接再厉,也有可能会得名喔!”通过阿姨的辅导,我朗诵的姿态越来越有姿势,连妈妈都敬服不已。
我还请教校园语文社的马教师,马教师对我的要求很严厉,要我留意许多事情,例如:发音的办法、稿子摆放的方位、服装要穿戴整齐……等,听得我头昏眼花。通过这两位朗诵高手的锻炼,我发现我一向在前进,可是最大的功臣仍是我的妈妈。妈妈期望我能成为朗诵选手,所以一向尽力的帮我操练、预备,比我还严重,好像是她要去竞赛呢!
竞赛当天,由于是下午竞赛,所以早上绑的头发,现已有点杂乱。我和其他同学去竞赛前,班上的同学和教师都一同为咱们加油打气,到了赛场,我的心境好杂乱:有时好振奋,我总算能够体现我的实力;有时好忧虑,深怕自己不会得名。我想起今日早上出门前妈妈对我说的一句话:“不要惧怕,只需竭尽全力就好,没得名也不要紧。”想到这句话,我的决心增加了许多。轮到我抽题了,抽好题今后,我细心地阅览一遍,把不会的字全部都查好了,我静静的坐在周围,安静地的朗诵着。总算该我上台了,我的心境真是难以形容,一开端尽管很严重,可是念到一半时,就不会那么严重了。下了台之后,我开端自我检讨,发现我在朗诵时读错了一些字,所以应该被扣了很多分吧!可是我想我现已尽全力了,这是我能够做到的,若这次没得名,下次我就要愈加尽力才行。
通过这次竞赛,让我学到许多名贵的经历,你知道我这次成果怎么吗?悄悄的通知你,我得到了第一名,当我看到成果时,我整个人快乐地要飞上了天。颁奖时,我心想:通过这么多地尽力,我总算有丰厚的收成了。这次的竞赛真是一个难忘的经历啊!期望下次我能愈加尽力能够体现得更超卓。
Hi! Boys and girls! My name is kelly,I am 12 years old. I am a student. I study at XiShan Primary School.I am in Class 1,Grade 5.I have three good teachers. They are Mr Lai, Miss Huang and Miss Lu.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
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