关于爱心的中考英语作文【一】
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人到真实可信，如身临其境。如：
The other day， I was driving along the street。 Suddenly， a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella， for it was raining hard。 On the way， he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her， but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的'，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：
In my summer holidays， I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework， reading an English novel， watching TV and doing some housework， I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach， the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while， a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red， not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea， just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：
I was in the kitchen， and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整：
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door， I asked， "Who?" No reply。 After a while， I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It＇s you。" I said， quite released。
关于爱心的中考英语作文【二】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
关于爱心的中考英语作文【三】
鱼儿感谢大海，雄鹰感谢蓝天，小草感谢大地，花儿感谢雨露，我拿什么感谢你，我的爸爸、妈妈、老师还有伟大的祖国母亲?
作为中国少年，我们生在幸福里，长在阳光下，我们看见的是笑脸，感受到的是温暖，可大家想过没有，我们在幸福地接受一切给予的同时又拿什么来回馈他人呢?感恩不仅要心存感激，还要见行动，见实效!
寒假的时候，爸爸、妈妈带我回山东老家看爷爷、奶奶。一路上我看见好吃的就要吃，看见好玩的就让爸爸妈妈拿钱来买。妈妈总是满足我的各种要求，但最后总是不忘说一句：“儿子，可不是所有的孩子都像你这么幸福，要感恩!”我呶呶嘴说：“大家都这样!我们有的同学还上上海、北京去玩呢，真小气!”来到爷爷奶奶家时，我都懵了。还是偏僻的山村，依旧那么贫穷。村里的路都是尘土，一走一脚灰。光秃秃的石头山上是农民伯伯一锹一锹挖出的梯田。爸爸说，爷爷就是这样一担一担挑着化肥、水、籽种运上山种地，秋天又是一担一担把小米、花生运下山换钱，辛苦忙碌了一年，有时就挣一两千块钱，听到这，我心里羞愧极了。我想，我一定要好好学习，长大了挣很多很多钱孝顺爷爷奶奶、爸爸妈妈。感谢他们一直以来对我地关怀与付出。
别看这个山村小、闭塞，可是听说这里特别出人才。听长辈们说，西石门村就有考上国务院的，当时公务员全国第一，现在是北京的大官，为了感激乡亲们，还给村里修了一座桥。现在这座桥还在方便大家的生活。村里的孩子学习条件可艰苦了，课外书很少，学习桌也没有，灯泡特别暗，很多同学都近视了，有的人还在为上学的学费而发愁。相比之下，我幸福极了。不但上学免收学杂费，而且县里还给我们创造了非常好的学习条件：老师用电脑教学，内容新鲜有趣;校服特别好看，女生穿上像公主，男生穿上像王子;拉杆箱书包一背起来，那就是两字“真酷”!我告诉伙伴们，这些都是县里免费发给我们的，他们都不相信。就连青岛的好伙伴阳阳都羡慕地对我说：“你们的校服真漂亮，还不花钱;我们的校服不怎么好看，还得花很多钱呢!”我幸福，我是嘉荫的学生;我感恩，长大后要用我的实际行动回报我的老师、我的家乡!
感恩少年，从我做起!看见老人跌倒在地上，毫不犹豫地上前扶一把;看见别人需要帮助，伸出我们的援手;爸爸妈妈累了，给他们捶捶背、洗洗脚;不乱扔果皮纸屑，不乱涂乱画;不打架骂人，争当文明学生。我们还要努力学习，树立伟大的理想，为中华之崛起而读书!少年智则国智，少年强则国强，少年雄于地球则国雄于地球，中国的未来靠我们去创造!同学们，让我们心怀感恩，在建设伟大祖国的征途中共同努力吧!
关于爱心的中考英语作文【四】
Children's finally here, it is our holiday, but imagine the children also accompanied by together, everybody is more excited.
Children on this day, white clouds float over the blue sky, the children also have made a hot air balloon, they sit together on yourself a hot-air balloon, extremely happy! Balloon flying high, and finally flew to the sky, the children are in the sky holiday, the children sit on clouds, umpa jump, like a frisky little monkey.
Playing children, suddenly to rain cats and dogs, the children of the balloon has stalled, baiyun sister swept away by the wind, the children fell into despair. Is a time of crisis, a group of dragonflies sister and sister flew caught the children, and the safety of the children to the ground.
On the ground, only butterflies woven into a rainbow "lei", the children wear a wreath, some like a fairy, some like a warrior.
Play tired, the children fell asleep between full of fragrance of flowers.
Children's good play my imagination, to one day be able to live in such a children's day.
