春节到了,真是热闹:看春晚;放鞭炮;吃团圆饭;发红包……趁着假期,奶奶,爸爸,妈妈和我出发去寻访慈溪观海卫的锦堂师范旧址。
锦堂师范历史悠久人材辈出,旧址基本还保存完好,我们看到的原址是在光绪丁未年由实业家吴锦堂先生回家乡捐巨资建造的;
百年时光流逝,当年的许多富豪都如过眼烟云,不再有人记得,但是发下大愿心尊师重教的吴锦堂先生却永远会被我们铭记。
旧址中的花园便是“锦园”了。顺着一条小径绕过假山和池塘,忽然,一股幽香飘进了我的鼻子。细细地闻,夹杂着红梅的气息和腊梅的清香。心想:下一个转角,又会有怎样的惊喜呢?
又一个转弯后,十几棵梅树出现在眼前:宫粉梅排成一列,它们的枝条弯弯的,梅花开得正热闹,这里一朵,那儿一簇。我一只手托住枝条,仔细观察:宫粉梅的花瓣是圆形的,下部有许多淡棕色的细小萼片。一阵大风吹过,粉色的花瓣纷纷掉落,就像下了一场清香的花瓣雨!
另外的一列都是一人多高的腊梅树,腊梅花开得十分有规律。细小的枝条上每隔几厘米,便开出两朵小花。“梅花香自苦寒来”,在百花凋落的寒冷冬季,只有梅花独自开放,清香扑鼻。“咦!”奶奶,妈妈和我异口同声地喊到。眼前的一棵宫粉梅和第三棵腊梅树的枝条缠绕在一起,真是别有风趣!我心想:腊梅和宫粉梅真是绝配啊!如果将这两种梅花一起插在花瓶中,送与亲友,必定是新年最好的礼物和祝福!“咔嚓”奶奶和我被手机定格,我们的笑容和共同度过的美好时光都会一直保留在照片中!
这是让我记忆深刻的一次游览,也是一次奇特的寻访古迹之旅,就象我和奶奶的合影,会被永远珍藏在我心中!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
我是在我的家乡过春节。春节很有意思,小朋友都穿新衣服,新鞋子。家家户户吃饺子,挂灯笼,贴春联,放鞭炮。我天天玩儿的很开心。我还帮爸爸贴春联,帮妈妈包饺子,帮奶奶烧香,点蜡烛,帮爷爷收拾院子。我学回了打羽一毛一球,学会了骑自行车。过年我能吃很多好吃的东西,有肉,有鸡,有鹅,有菜,还有很多饺子。
大年初一早上,我穿上新衣服,早早起床给爷爷,奶奶拜年。爸爸起来放鞭炮,到处都是炮声,一直到天亮还响的不停。大年初二去姥姥家拜年,姥爷还给我压岁钱。我还去找我最好的朋友玩,他的名字叫李云浩,我们买玩具玩儿,看电视,还放炮,开心极了。
我很喜欢过春节,我希望天天能过春节,过一次春节我长大一岁,这是一件多么美好的事情呀!
The Spring Festival, Chinese New Year,is the most important festival for all of us. All family members get together on New Year'Eve to have a big meal.At the same time, everyone celebrates to each other.At about 12 o'clock,some parents and children light crackers.The whole sky is lighted brightly. We may watch the fireworks excitedly.How busy it is!
On the first early moring of one year, many senior citizen get up early and they stick the reversed Fu or hang some couplets on the front door. Some house's windows are sticked on red paper cutlings.
The Chinese New Year lasts fifteen days. So during the fifteen days, we always visit our relatives from door to door. At that time, children are the happiest because they can get many red packets form their parents,grandparents, uncles, aunts and so on. The last day of the Chinese New Year is another festival. It names the Lantern Festival.
So the Chinese New Year comes to the end.
盼啊!盼啊!终于盼来了我国的传统佳节-春节!
这天清早,小朋友们个个穿戴一新,蹦蹦跳跳地来到小区里玩耍、放鞭炮。啊!小区也换上了节日的盛装。各家各户的大人们在忙碌地张贴春联,挂着大红灯笼……
中午时分,爸爸妈妈也开始在厨房里忙着做饺子和美味佳肴。我在客厅里玩着妈妈给我买的玩具,不知不觉中,爸爸妈妈就把一桌丰盛的晚宴准备好了,爸爸拿着一串鞭炮在门外噼哩啪啦地放起来了,一家人围着桌子喜气洋洋,爸爸妈妈喝着红酒,我喝着饮料,吃着爸爸妈妈精心准备的菜肴,相互说着祝福的话语,首先我说:“祝爸爸妈妈身体健康!工作顺利!”然后,爸爸妈妈同时祝福我:“健康成长,好好学习!”一家人其乐融融,脸上洋溢着幸福的笑容。
夜晚,室外不时传来阵阵地烟花鞭炮声,我也按捺不住兴奋的心情,和爸爸去楼顶放起了烟花,大约快到24时,整个城市鞭炮声响成一片,烟花把整个城市的夜空增添得更美丽。
中国有许多的传统的节日,比如:端午节、中秋节、元宵节……,而我最喜欢的是春节。因为每到春节,人们喜帖春联,敲锣打鼓,热闹非凡。这时是我们孩子最高兴的时候,每个人脸上都洋溢着笑容。
年三十的早晨,我和妈妈兴高采烈地去街上买东西准备做年夜饭。街道上处处张灯结彩,十分热闹。路上来来回回的车,就像一条条长龙,也比以往更多了。远远望去,家家户户门上有的贴着“到福”,有的挂着灯笼,还有的贴着对联。一走进商场,这真是人山人海啊!人们穿着节日的盛装,相互讨论着买什么年货,你一言,我一语,为春节喜庆的气氛画上了一笔油彩。
晚上,全家人相聚在一起吃年夜饭。男女老少欢聚一堂,在一片欢声笑语中共享新春之乐。吃好饭后,只听外面一声巨响,我连忙向窗外望去,“是烟花!”我激动地说道。烟花怒放,有的像一朵朵盛开的七彩之花;有的就像一场浪漫的流星雨;有的像一条又一条的闪电,还有的……“这实在美丽极了!”我不禁感叹道。等到晚上八点整,全家一起在电视机前看春节联欢晚会。在搞笑的相声,令人感动的小品,优美动听的歌曲中倒数着大年初一的到来。零时一过,外面爆竹齐鸣,声响阵阵,那是多么激动人心呀!我想,此时此刻,全国人民都在欢呼吧。
大年初一,男女老少穿戴一新。妈妈走到我的床边,亲切地对我说:“奕奕,快起床啦!我们今天去外婆家拜年。”听完后,我赶紧穿好衣服,心里一直乐着。心想:哈哈,到外婆家不但可以见到亲友,还能和表哥一起玩耍。过了一会儿,我们就出发了……
到了外婆家,只见外公和外婆忙的团团转。一会儿***鸡啦,一会儿洗菜啦,一会儿泡茶啦……到了中午,亲友们都到齐了,大家一起说笑着吃午饭。在饭桌上,他们相互关怀着。我看到一大桌又满又丰盛的菜,迫不及待地从包里拿出照相机给这些美味佳肴拍起照片来。这时,小姨说:“也给我们拍几张吧!”我拿着相机,对好镜头,“咔嚓”几下,一股暖流涌入心间,亲情是多么可贵呀!大人们平时工作那么忙,一年到头才相聚几次而已。午饭过后,姨夫在谈话中提起这几天山上有很多春笋,就提议去山上挖笋。大家都认为是个好主意。我们带着挖笋的工具,乘着车来到附近的山上挖笋。
到了山上,姨夫告诉我们一些能挖到又大又粗的笋的方法。于是,我们就分成二组进行比赛,看哪组挖的笋多。大家都不甘示弱,努力寻找着目标,我好不容易挖到一个,却被表哥抢去了。我只好埋着头再次寻找。时间一分一秒过去了,两组都挖到很多笋,队员们为此都付出了辛勤的汗水,所以打成了平手。
回去的路上,虽然大家都感到很累,但这是一次非常有意义的实践。初一就这样过去了,可过的很充实。那初二呢……
春节,是个喜庆的节日,是个充满爱的节日,更是个令人难忘的节日。在这个节日里,我更能体会到人世间的亲情。春节经历伴随着我成长,让我对它有了更深刻的了解。那你们的春节经历又是怎样的呢?
六年级:王奕
一年一度的新春佳节是我最盼望的。今年,我度过了一个不一样的春节。
我们在爸爸的带领下如期到达了美丽的海滨城市——威海。一到那里,我就感受到了浓浓的年味。大街小巷都被打扫得干干净净,红通通的灯笼随处可见,宽阔的街道上行驶着贴着“福”字的汽车,街上到处是穿新衣、戴新帽、笑容满面的行人。
威海三面环海,海的周边是沙滩,远远望去,金色的沙滩就像给大海围上了围脖。沙滩上人山人海,吆喝声、嬉笑声响成一片。小朋友们在大人的带领下挖螃蟹、捡贝壳、搭城堡等,玩得不亦乐乎。我禁不住他们笑容的诱惑,也加入其中。我踩上沙滩,软软的、松松的,还不时发出“沙沙”的声音,直到玩累了才罢休。
那里的海水清清的,一望无边。几只海鸥站在海水较浅的地方,低头盯着海面,好像在欣赏自己美丽的倒影,还有几只海鸥时而翱翔在空中,时而低飞在海面,好像在欢庆春节。
我们参观了中外闻名的甲午战争陈列馆、甲午战争博物馆、刘公岛博览园等。这些地方让我感觉到今天幸福生活的来之不易和现在科技的发达。爸爸还告诉我,刘公岛是威海市海上天然屏障,在国防上具有重要的意义。
春节能够出去逛逛,饱览美丽的风景真是不错。盼望着,下一个春节早点到来。
我喜欢热闹的六一儿童节,我喜欢粽子飘香的端午节,但我最喜欢能收到红包的春节。
今天是大年三十。大清早,爸爸就扯着嗓子叫道:“快起床,过年了。”老妈也来了个河东狮吼,把我从被窝里给吓了出来。我不满的说:“干嘛这么早就起来,再睡会。”爸爸妈妈异口同声地说:“今天过年,咱们一起回老家过年。”我这才恍然大悟:“哦,知道了,你们先刷牙,我马上起来。”
匆匆的穿衣、刷牙、洗脸之后,我们没来的及吃早餐,就出发了。爸爸开着新买的小轿车,带着我们开向了的老家。想着能看到慈祥的奶奶,和幽默的爷爷,我激动不已。路上的风景美丽极了,道路旁的小花小草对我微笑,此时的我快乐的像一只小鸟,眼里的一切事物都美好无比。
“嘟嘟——”爸爸按了按喇叭,到了老家。我看到了表姐、表哥,兴高采烈的和他们玩起了游戏。等家人都到齐的时候,天也渐渐黑下来。“噼里啪啦,噼里啪啦......”老爸到门前的院子里,点燃了一串鞭炮,把我们的耳朵都快炸聋了。“嗖......啪”我点燃烟花的引线,一束五颜六色的烟花飞上天空,炸开来,将夜空点亮。鞭炮和烟花的声音合起来像一首动人的小夜曲。
放完鞭炮和烟花,我们就开始吃期待已久的团圆饭了。勤劳的妈妈烧了一桌子的好菜,有鱼头火锅、红烧肉、百味鸡、年糕、五香酱牛肉......我馋得口水直流三千尺。老妈刚说:“开饭。”我立马狼吞虎咽起来。吃完了,我摸摸皮球似的肚子,对老爸说:“恭喜发财,红包拿来。”老爸听了放下筷子,从口袋里拿出了一个大红包。我接过来用手摸一摸,发现里面有很多“毛爷爷”。我喜出望外,收好红包后,提着灯笼和小伙伴玩耍去了。
我喜欢过年,你们呢?
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