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第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
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第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
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第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
寒假到了,我们全家决定到徐州玩。
怀着兴奋的`心情上了车,在煎熬了5个小时的高速行程后,映入眼帘的是大大小小的建筑。数不胜数的高楼大厦让我为之一振。“酷!”我高兴地跳起舞来。
“孩子,我们马上就到汉王兵马俑馆啦!”爸爸亲切地说。“哦耶!”我像一支离弦的箭冲了进去。
我被眼前的景象迷住了:高高矮矮的松树笔直地站着,活像一个个士兵;小河里的水清澈见底,鱼儿时而浮出水面跟孩子们打招呼呢;更引人注目的是立在山顶上的一座高塔,一眼望不到头。
我们一路上谈笑风生,不一会儿就走到了汉王纪念馆。里面的雕像精彩纷呈:大将手持宝剑,威风凛凛;宫女翩翩起舞,窈窕多姿;各类兵器让我大饱眼福……爸爸说:“这些画蕴藏着很深的意思,回家我一定要搞清楚!”
第二站——兵马俑博物馆。见识了举世闻名的金缕玉衣。“好精美的艺术品啊!“我们全家一起尖叫道。听讲解员介绍,这是用金丝串接的玉片,再镶在一块儿,经过很多道工序制成。我的眼前仿佛浮现出古代的能工巧匠埋头工作的场景。再往里走,大大小小的兵马俑展现在我眼前,气势十足;大型兵佣手握钢枪,忠实地守护着主帅,简直就是一大奇迹!一股自豪感油然而生……
参观完兵马俑,我们又进行了登山的旅程。山路很陡峭,我们费了九牛二虎之力才到达了山顶。一座高塔赫然眼前,拾级而上,不知不觉来到顶层的“幸福大钟”旁。我敲响了大钟,心里无比高兴。
这次的徐州之旅增长了我的见识,以后我还要去游览祖国的大好河山!
和煦的春风把我们送到美丽的珠山公园。 一进珠山公园,便可以见到鹤鸣台。鹤鸣台面对着音乐厅,站在那里,偶尔可以听到音乐厅传来的歌曲,令人心旷神怡。
从鹤鸣台一直向前走,便可以见到生机勃勃的.百草坛了。百草坛,顾名思义,就是一个50米左右的花坛,花坛里有着成千盈百得花草树木。走进百草坛,那五彩斑斓的花朵千姿百态,婀娜多姿。花坛上有一只只蝴蝶,在翩翩起舞;一只只蜜蜂在采着花蜜。真像是走进了一个花的世界。在花坛中间还有一棵参天大树,它苍劲挺拔,它高达8米多,吸引了不少前来参观的游客。
从百草坛往上走,再过一条马路,就到达了天师岭。我随着一条石铺的羊肠小道走上去,在树梢间,隐约看见了一条瀑布挂在眼前,宛如一条白绸子从织布机上泄下来,蔚为壮观。而在瀑布底部,却有着不一样的景色:人们有的蹲下来,撩一把水过来洗洗脸,有的把脚伸进潭水里,让鱼儿尽情地为自己挠痒痒,还有的用手与鱼儿们嬉戏玩耍。在瀑布旁,有一排层层叠叠,错落有致的石块,它们像一群群绵羊,向我们走来。 这时我注意到,湖边有一个下沉廊道。我走进去,简直惊呆了,我仿佛走进了一个海底世界。那里鱼儿种类繁多,琳琅满目,让你眼花缭乱。它似乎有一种魔法,把你的目光吸过去,目不转眼地盯着它,欣赏着它绚丽美妙的舞姿。我迟疑了一会儿,才缓过来,不禁感叹:“啊!这里是如此的美丽,如此的奇妙!”
徐州最美的地方就是南湖,而珠山则是南湖中璀璨的明珠!我爱你——珠山!
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第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street。 Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard。 On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的',这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red, not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply。 After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It's you。" I said, quite released。
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第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构
有一天,小明拿着两个陶瓷盘子去装西瓜,是为了招待来他家玩的小强。结果,地上有水,小明为了保持平衡不摔跤,一不小心就把陶瓷盘子摔烂了。他们两个人非常着急,把妈妈的陶瓷盘子摔烂了,应该怎么办?
小明正要把摔烂的陶瓷盘子扔到垃圾桶,站在一旁的小强说:“等一下,我们可以好好利用这两个陶瓷盘子,把它们变废为宝。”小明想了想:也可以,要不然摔坏妈妈的陶瓷盘子,妈妈也会心痛,把他们变废为宝还有用。于是他们想:把陶瓷盘子用来做什么好呢?小强突然跳起来高兴的对着小明说:“我们可以比赛在陶瓷盘子上画画,看谁画得好,怎么样?”小明想了想,兴奋的说:“好吧,我们可以把他们变为装饰品。”
于是,小强就迫不及待的去小明的书桌上拿了水彩和笔。他们想了想,不知道应该画什么。小强看了看两个陶瓷盘子的形状像鱼,就说:“我们画鱼吧!”说着,他们就拿起画笔画了起来。
画完了,他们把自己画好的鱼挂在墙上,他们互相看了看对方的作品,觉得都很不错,小明说:“这一次就算我们打了一个平手,下一次绝对要分出胜负来!”
妈妈回到了家,看到了他们画的鱼,不但没有骂他们,还表扬了他们,说:“你们这样废物利用非常环保,没有用的东西又有它的利用价值了!”
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第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文:
第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
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