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第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
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第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文:
第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
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第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构
一.问题的提出
每个家庭中的孩子都是宝贝,说一不二,随着电视、计算机的普及,我们祖国花朵的娇嫩的眼睛受到了袭击,现在,在我们班里,大多数的同学都患有近视,而且部分同学的近视情况十分严重,有的同学视力甚至低于了4.5,这也许给他们以后的生活、学习以及工作带来很多的不便。为了保护视力,预防视力,我对本班同学的近视情况做了一次调查。
二.调查方法
(1通过上网,看一些有关科学用眼和眼睛保健方面的资料,了解什么是近视,及近视产生的原因。
(2通过访问,了解本班同学的近视状况,以及近三年同学视力不良的发展趋势。
(3通过与本人交谈、调查,走访家长的形式,掌握眼睛近视同学的学习及生活上的习惯。
三.调查情况的资料整理
1近视眼(myopia也称短视眼,因为这种眼只能看近不能看远。这种眼在休息时,从无限远处来的平行光,经过眼的屈光系折光之后,在视网膜之前集合成焦点,在视网膜上则结成不清楚的象。远视力明显降低,但近视力尚正常。
2本班有39名同学,无先天性遗传近视,后天近视的8人,近视同学比列占全班的3分之2.较前几年比,近视率有明显增高趋势。
3多数同学不注意用眼卫生,不科学用眼。写字时离书本太近;长时间用眼不休息造成视觉疲劳;长时间看电视,在光线太强或太暗的环境下看书,连续长时间使用带你脑等。
四.结论
1近视眼是由于晶状体的曲度过大,远处来的光线形成的物象落在视网膜的前。因此看不清远处的东西。如果有近视的你,可以戴凹透镜加以纤正。
2近视眼的形成主要是由于不注意用眼卫生,长时间用眼疲劳造成的,如,看书姿势不正确,近距离看书、写字、不注意休息等。高度近视还可能与遗传有关。
3.为了同学的视力,我查找了有关的书籍,发现近视眼是可以预防的:(一读书、写字姿势要端正,眼睛和书本的距离要保持一市尺。(二要认真做眼保操,定期检查视力。(三连续看书、看电视或使用电脑1小时后要休息一下,或者向远处眺望一会。(四每天晚上坚持滴眼药水。(五多吃水果、蔬菜。除了要做到以上的5要,还要做以下的三不要:(一不在光线暗弱和阳光直射下看书、写字。(二不躺着看书。(三不走路看书。
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