答题分析:
1.还原情境
“杨柳岸,晓风残月”一共才七个字,乍一看,给人无从下手的感觉。其实,要求扩写的诗词名句一般都出自同学们非常熟悉的课本,题目本身已经给了同学们解题的隐性已知条件——诗句的情境因素。
做题时首先应该还原诗句的情境,通过回忆全诗或全词弄清该情境包含的三项内容:时间、地点、人物,然后就可以确定解题的切入点,根据自身的爱好和特长扩写了。
此外,还原情境还可以避免张冠李戴、自相矛盾的错误出现。比如,有的同学把“杨柳岸”扩写得春光旖旎、春意盎然,如果在还原情境时,想到词中写的是深秋清晨的景物,就能避免这样的\'失误了。
本题在还原情境后可得出如下结果:时间——深秋清晨;地点——某个泊船的渡口;人物——离别情人的“愁人”。
2.构设画境
古诗词中的很多名句,如“明月松间照,清泉石上流”“日暮苍山远,天寒白屋贫”等都具有强烈的画面感。“杨柳岸,晓风残月”虽仅七字,但七字中包含一近一远两个画面,极有层次,且符合情理。作者由近及远,先描摹岸边“杨柳”,后绘写天际“残月”,完全符合人视物的顺序及习惯。
扩写时,应充分尊重作者的构设,将画面一个个有序展开,突出景物描写的顺序感、方位感、画面感。依据作者思路来布设写景的顺序和画面,不仅可以减少答题构思的时间,而且能使答题更准确更到位。
3. 表现意境
古诗词非常强调意境。要使有意境,就要在诗中的景物描写中融入或明或暗、或隐或显的感情。而扩写题往往都有“不得改变原诗(词)意境”的要求,因而首先要原诗所蕴涵的感情,然后将这种感情融入扩写中。原诗感情为悲;扩写文字感情即定调为悲;原诗感情为喜,扩写即定调为喜,二者绝对不能冲突、矛盾。
对例题,同学们应该细心体会“残”字所蕴涵的丰富情感,挖掘出作者借此表达的情愫,并在扩写中表现出来。
参考答案: 秋日清晨的寒意,唤醒了因畅饮离情而酩酊的词人。渡口已不是昨日的渡口,情人的身影也早已不见。杨柳依旧是昨日的杨柳,只是少了被柳枝牵萦的裙裾。飘零的衰黄柳叶,带着如泪的清露,沾上词人的衣襟,也沾上词人的心魂。晓风微起,似纤纤玉手分开密密的柳烟,一弓残月映入词人的眼帘。那是离人苍白的面容和孤寂的眼?
最后,我认为同学们应该在复习时熟读乃至背诵教材中的诗词,并试着翻译诗词中的经典写景名句,以增强文言、现代语言之间的转换能力,从而提高自己扩写古诗词名句的能力。
对例题,同学们应该细心体会“残”字所蕴涵的丰富情感,挖掘出作者借此表达的情愫,并在扩写中表现出来。
一般疑问句、否定句
1.Lindaoftendoesherhomeworkafterschool.(改为一般疑问句
________Lindaoften________herhomeworkafterschool?
2.Marysentherfriendacardtowishhimahappybirthday.(改为一般疑问句
Maryherfriendacardtowishhimahappybirthday?
3.Hisfatherknowssomethingabouthowtocreatecomicstrips.(改为否定句
Hisfather_________know_________abouthowtocreatecomicstrips.
4.MyhusbandhasneversentflowerstohismotheronMother’sDay.(改为一般疑问句_________yourhusband_________sentflowerstohismotheronMother’sDay?
5.Weshalldonatemoneyandclothestothosewhoneedhelp.(改为一般疑问句)____________we___________moneyandclothestothosewhoneedhelp?
6.Iwanttosendthisletterbyexpressmail.(改为一般疑问句
__________you__________tosendthisletterbyexpressmail?
7.BothmysisterandIlikereadingcomicstrips.(改为否定句
_______ofus_______readingcomicstrips.
8.Mary’sfathertoldherhowtosolvetheproblemimmediately.(改为否定句
Mary’sfather__________________herhowtosolvetheproblemimmediately.
9.TheGreeksoldierscapturedtheTrojansthroughatrickatlast.(改为一般疑问句
____________theGreeksoldiers____________theTrojansthroughatrickatlast?
10.Martinhastowalktoschoolearlyinthemorning.(改为否定句)
Martin____________towalktoschoolearlyinthemorning.
11.Kittyhaspianolessonsatweekends.(改为一般疑问句
Kittypianolessonsatweekends?
12.Theremovalmanputthewashingmachinenexttothefridge.(改为否定句
Theremovalman________________thewashingmachinenexttothefridge
13.Peterhasalreadyfinishedhisproject.(改为否定句
Peter________finishedhisproject________.
14.Bothofthetwinslikepopmusic.(改为否定句
______ofthetwins______popmusic.
15.KatehasalreadyboughtacatfromMr.Wo’spetshop.(改为否定句
Kate__________boughtacarfromMr.Wo’spetshop__________.
16.Samdrovetoworkyesterdaymorning.(改为否定句
Sam__________________toworkyesterdaymorning.
17.Brucehastolookafterhislittlebrotheratweekends.(改为一般疑问句
_________Bruce_________tolookafterhislittlebrotheratweekends?18.Mylittlesondidsomereadingbeforegoingtobedlastnight.(改为一般疑问句)___________yourlittleson_____________anyreadingbeforegoingtobed?
同义句
1.Theolderhegets,themoreforgetfulhebecomes.(保持原句意思)
Hebecomesmoreforgetful________________.
2.Sarahcan’tunderstandtheFrenchfilm.Cindycan’tunderstandit,either.(合并为一句
________Sarah________CindycanunderstandtheFrenchfilm.Itwas________cold________thedrivercouldn’tgettheenginestarted.3.Itwastoocoldforthedrivertogettheenginestarted.(保持句意基本不变
4.Alicedoessportsafterschool.Bendoessportsafterschool,too.(保持句意不变)Alicedoesportsafterschool.____________Ben.
5.Thefirewassofierce(凶猛的thatnobodycouldenterthebuildingtorescuepeople.(保持句意基本不变
Thefirewas_________fiercefor_________toenterthebuildingtorescuepeople.
6.Maryfinishedherwork.Thenshewenthome.(合并为一句)
Mary___________gohome_________shefinishedherwork.
7.Ifyouareverycareful,youwillmakefewmistakes(保持句意基本不变
The__________carefulyouare,the__________mistakesyouwillmake.
8.Nancydoesn’twanttoownacar.Alandoesn’twanttowonacar,either.(合并为一句__________Nancy__________Alanwantstoownacar.
9.Usethelinkmethodsothatyoucanimproveourmemory.(改为简单句
Usethelinkmethod__________________toimproveourmemory.
10.Youwillbeunhealthyifyoudon’tdoexerciseregularly.(保持句意基本不变
Youwillbeunhealthy_________you_________exerciseregularly.
11.Tokeeptheroomclean,weneedtowashpetdogsregularly.(保持句意基本不变
Weneedto
washpetdogsregularly________________________wecankeeptheroomclean.
12.Iwillcallthepoliceifthatnoisedoesn’tstopsoon.(保持句意基本不变
Iwillcallthepolice____________thatnoise____________soon.
13.Theicecreamwillmelt,soyou’dbetterputitinthefridgeatonce.(保持句意基本不变Theicecreamwillmelt______you______putitinthefridgeatonce.
14.LittleTomatetoomanychocolates.Hehadtoothache.(两句合并为一句
LittleTomate_________manychocolates_________hehadtoothache.
15.ThemagazineyouarereadingisJane’s.(保持句意基本不变
Themagazineyouarereading______________Jane.
16.Ericdidthesciencetestmostquicklyinourclass.(保持句意基本不变
Ericdidthesciencetest________________thananyotherstudentinourclass.
17.Ifyoudon’tcleanyourteethregularly,youwillgettoothache.(保持句意基本不变You________gettoothache________youcleanyourteethregularly.
18.Peterwillgotojail.Johnwillnotgotojail.(合并成一句
Peterwillgotojail____________John.
19.We’veaskedmymothertolookafterthekidswhenweareaway.(保持句意基本不变We’veaskedmymotherto____________________thekidswhenweareaway.
20.DetectiveKenexaminedtheroomcarefullyinordertofindsomeclues.(保持句意基本不变
DetectiveKenexaminedtheroomcarefully____________________hecouldfindsomeclues.
21.Iboughtmyprivatecartenyearsago.(保持句意基本不变
I__________________myprivatecarfortenyears.
22.Takethemaglevtrain,oryouwillbelatefortheplane.(保持句意基本不变
You_________belatefortheplane_________youtakethemaglevtrain.23.Jackwasverytall.Hewasabletoreachthebookontheshelf.(保持句意基本不变Jackwas_________________________toreachthebookontheshelf.
1.TheterribleearthquakedestroyedmanyhousesinWenchuanin2008.(改为被动语态ManyhousesinWenchuan________________bytheterribleearthquakein2008.
2.Abigfiredamagedahigh-risebuildinginShanghaitwomonthsago.(改为被动语态
Ahigh-risebuilding________________byabigfireinShanghaitwomonthsago.
3.Youwritealltheanswersontheanswersheet.(改成被动语态
Alltheanswers____________ontheanswersheet.
4.Thegovernmenthelpedthevictimsofthe11.15Fire.(改为被动语态)
The____________ofthe11.15Fire____________helpedbythegovernment.
5.Thereporterwillinterviewthewinnerof“China’sgotTalent”thisevening.(改为被动语态Thewinnerof“China’sgotTalent”will____________________bythereporterthisevening.
6.MyfriendJoneswrotesomearticlesaboutmemorylastmonth.(改为被动语态
Somearticlesaboutmemory______________bymyfriendJoneslastmonth.
7.Wegavetwopandas,KaiKaiandXinXintoMacaoasagiftlastyear.(改为被动语态Twopandas,KaiKaiandXinXin__________________toMacaoasagiftlastyear.
8.Wecancompletetheworkaheadoftime.(改为被动语态
Theworkcan________________________aheadoftime.
9.Mr.LichosetenstudentstotakepartintheEnglishreadingcontestlastweek.(改被动)
Tenstudents______________totakepartintheEnglishreadingcontestbyMr.Lilastweek.
10.Paulmadethreemodelplaneslastyear.(改为被动语态
Threemodelplanes______________byPaullastyear.
11.Myfatheroftenusesacomputerinhiswork.(改为被动语态
Acomputer________often________inmyfather’swork.
12.Recently,peoplefoundahugeegginachickenhouseinEngland.(改成被动语态Recently,ahugeegg____________inachickenhouseinEngland.
13.Theartistswillpaintmorebeautifulpicturesinthefuture.(改为被动语态)
Morebeautifulpictureswill____________________bytheartistsinthefuture.
14.WewillbuildmoreundergroundlinesinShanghaiinthefuture.(改为被动语态
Moreundergroundlineswill________________inShanghaiinthefuture.
15.WecanseepapercuttinginmanypartsofChinaduringtheSpringFestival.(改被动
Papercuttingcan__________________inmanypartsofChinaduringtheSpringFestival.16.Theythrewsomerubbishintotheriveratnightdaysago.(改为被动语态
Somerubbish______________________intotheriveratnightdaysago.
(对划线部分提问
________________isShanghaiNo.1DepartmentStoreopen?
2.(对划线部分提问________________hasLucyworkedinthiscompanysinceshegraduated?(对划线部分提问)__________________youinterviewsomeofherneighbors?对划线部分提问
__________________thelittleboygetupearlyinthemorning?
5.BobpreparedfortheNewYear’(对划线部分提问)______________________BobpreparefortheNewYear’spartyofourclass?
6(对划线部分提问
____________________didtheShanghaiWorldExpolast?
7.对划线部分提问
______________theoldmanandhiswifelivetwentyyearsago?
8.(对划线部分提问
__________________Alicecompletethesciencetestinyourclass?(对划线部分提问
________________________havetheylivedinHongKong?就划线部分提问__________mycousinsoftenkeepintouchwiththeirfriends?对划线部分提问______________Aliceboughtsomepaperflowers?
12.Cheng’eII(划线部分提问
________________didChang’eIIRockettraveltothemoon?(对划线部分提问
____________istheirnewcompanyfromthecitycenter?对划线部分提问____________________hasUncleDaminusedcormorantstocatchfish?
15.John’对划线部分提问__________________isJohngoingtomeettheexchangestudentsfromtheUS?
16.isheldforababy’sfirst-monthbirthday.(对划线部分提问
__________________heldforababy’sfirst-monthbirthdayinChineseculture?对划线部分提问
_______________________isitfromheretothePeople'sSquare?
最后,我认为同学们应该在复习时熟读乃至背诵教材中的诗词,并试着翻译诗词中的经典写景名句,以增强文言、现代语言之间的转换能力,从而提高自己扩写古诗词名句的能力。
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