中考英语日记作文

中考英语日记作文

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中考英语日记作文

中考英语日记作文【一】

今天我读了《笑猫日记》这本书,它出自儿童作家杨红樱神奇的笔下。故事内容是这样的:

在一座城市里,住着一只会笑的猫,叫笑猫。一天,他发现公园的白塔上,有一只高贵无比的虎皮猫,站在高处眺望,从此他就深深的爱上了白塔上的虎皮猫。可是,虎皮猫突然失踪了。于是笑猫踏上了寻找虎皮猫的征程……

经过千辛万苦,终于在古老的钟楼中找到了虎皮猫,虎皮猫为了让人们祈祷幸福,天天晚上敲钟,耳朵被钟声震聋了。老老鼠告诉笑猫,在西方有一座美丽的蓝山,上面有一种兔耳朵草能医治耳聋。笑猫马上动身前往蓝山,旅途中他遇到了巨大的山蜘蛛、凶猛的母老虎、残暴的花公豹,它们都被笑猫的真情打动了。这一路,笑猫走的义无反顾,终于采到了兔耳朵草,却被几只贪吃的兔子吃掉了,活了几万年的绿毛龟说:“只要心中有爱就会有奇迹出现。”于是笑猫又回到了钟楼,天天给虎皮猫讲它俩的故事,奇迹真的终于出现了,虎皮猫的耳朵真的恢复了,可以听见声音了。它俩举行了盛大的草坪婚礼,从此过上了幸福美满的生活。

读到这我的眼睛情不自禁的流出感动的泪花。对!绿毛龟说的没错,“只要心中有爱就会有奇迹出现”。爱的力量是巨大的,文中的笑猫,为了爱,宁愿付出自己的生命,我们要热爱生活中的每一个人爱家人,爱老师,爱朋友……怀有一颗感恩的心,我们身边的动物虽然小,但他的力量是巨大的无穷的,因为它们的心中也有爱。

爱,是什么呢?就是关心关爱身边得每一个人,让别人幸福,自己也就幸福。

中考英语日记作文【二】

暑假里,我读了《笑猫日记》,这套书的作者是杨红樱,这套书总共有二十三本,其中我最喜欢的就是《樱花巷的秘密》这一本。

一天,笑猫和球球在起跑加油站与万年龟见面了。万年龟是被那些受苦的孩子引来的,它一到这个地方就觉得不舒服。因为孩子们要在这个加油站扎上36针,虽然针扎在孩子的身上,却痛在万年龟的心里。笑猫对万年龟说:“起跑线加油站表面上看起来是让笨小孩通过扎针吃药的方式变得更加的聪明,其实这些都是骗人的。这个站长以前是卖棉花糖的,他告诉人们笨是一种病,而且可以通过扎针吃药治愈”。那些望子成龙的家长为了让自己的孩子变得更加的聪明,就掏钱把小孩送到这里治疗。给孩子们吃的药叫“智慧汤”,其实是用生姜和可乐熬成的,给孩子们扎的针叫“聪明针”,其实就是普通的针灸。

看完后,我非常的愤怒,这些家长为了不让自己的孩子输在起跑线上,竟然相信了这个加油站,想借助外力使小孩变得更加的聪明,其实这是违反自然发展规律的。聪明有遗传的原因,我想更重要的是靠后天的努力。骗子就是利用用心良苦的家长望子成龙的心理,使他们一步一步上当受骗。

世上没有“聪明针”,也没有“智慧汤”。

中考英语日记作文【三】

1。 叙述的人称

英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人到真实可信,如身临其境。如:

The other day, I was driving along the street。 Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。

用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:

Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard。 On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。

2。 动词的时态

在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的',这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。

3。 叙述的顺序

记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。

4。 叙述的过渡

过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:

In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。

The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red, not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。

What a moving and unforgettable scene!

5。 叙述与对话

引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:

I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。

这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:

I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply。 After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It's you。" I said, quite released。

中考英语日记作文【四】

这个暑假,我仔细地读了两本书,一本是《大宇神秘惊奇》,另一本叫《绿狗山庄》。《大宇神秘惊奇》神奇而又恐怖,吓得我心惊肉跳。绿狗山庄里的`男主人自私自利,为了完成一百件绿狗雕塑,剥夺一百只狗的快乐和自由。这两本书都十分好看,但是我还是喜欢看《绿狗山庄》。

当最后一朵荷花在瑟瑟的秋风中凋谢后,菊花开了。我喜欢菊花,它虽然不如春天的花娇艳,却有傲霜的风骨。这是出自《绿狗山庄》中的一段,我非常喜欢这段话。从这里看出,菊花非常坚定。当然,我也喜欢荷花的出淤泥而不染的品格。

我仿佛和马小跳一起来到秘密山洞,耳朵里仿佛听到山洞外传来的阵阵脚步声。先是张达的“赶去救火一样”的跑步声,紧接着是毛超的“轻飘飘”的跑步声,最后是唐飞的一串串“沉闷”的跑步声。原来,不一样的人,脚步声也不一样啊!

当我读到笑猫用自己的勇气和智慧,在它热心的朋友们的帮助下,终于救出了这一百只生活在噩梦中的绿狗时,我悬在半空的心终于放下了,我真替它们高兴!我佩服笑猫的智慧和勇气,这正是我所缺乏的。以后我在学习上一定要积极思考、勤动脑筋,大胆举手,敢于发言,用自信和勇气书写自己的人生!

中考英语日记作文【五】

1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚

写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2。 突出中心,详略得当

在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:

One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。

When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。

I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3。 用活语言,准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文:

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。

修改后:

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。

"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。

"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。

"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。

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