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九年级中学生英语作文中考【一】

1。头绪分明，脉络清楚

写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2。突出中心，详略得当

在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：

One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。

When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。

I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3。用活语言，准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文：

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。

修改后：

The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。

"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。

"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。

"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。

九年级中学生英语作文中考【二】

萧萧夏日，雨声的暴雨中，记得是在放学回家的路上，雨像泼像倒。我恰好身无分文，又忘带雨伞，陷入了暴雨的陷阱中，在站在一家小卖部的屋檐下。

此时，我已经全身湿透，自然十分焦急，不知如何是好。西风劲，聋薄衣。我犹如一只暂时无家可归的“寄居蟹”一样狼狈不堪，只可以躲在别人围墙的房檐下，真是寄人篱下呀！可这大雨什么时候停呀？过不了多久，我就会着凉的呀！想着想着，我打了一个大喷嚏，街边果树上花开了，可我哪有心情去观赏那些“千朵万朵压枝低”的美景。透过茫茫雨帘，老天爷根本没有停下来的意思。不如一口气跑回家吧！我撒开腿，在雨中跑着跑着。忽然听见后面有脚步声，这时雨也不淋下来了。我回过头来一看，居然是一位不认识的胖阿姨，她用一把小伞帮我挡雨。

我停止了奔跑，她笑着问我：“下雨天，你为什么不带雨伞啊，小朋友？”我把事情的经过告诉了阿姨，她微笑着说：“她可以送我回家。”一路上，阿姨把雨伞往我这边倾斜，只见阿姨的半边身子都被雨水淋湿了。这时，一阵手机铃声响起，阿姨听了电话，微笑着对我说：“我有点事，先走了！”她把雨伞和一张10块给了我。我拿着雨伞和10块钱，愣了一会儿，才回过神来。我想对阿姨说声：“谢谢”，可她已经走远了。我望着阿姨得背影越来越远，感觉越来越高大。我被阿姨得所作所为感动了。水珠从我的脸上淌下来，又热又咸，不知是雨还是我自己的泪……

不过是一位素未相识的路人，这位阿姨却可以这样帮助我，她用爱心烘干了我这颗潮湿的心。

九年级中学生英语作文中考【三】

整体感知文章。

九年级中学生英语作文中考【四】

I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.