to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
在曲阳公园,每天六点不到就已经有不少的大爷大妈在晨练了,看到那些上了年纪的大爷大妈就看了到就视乎看到了未来自己的那个年纪的身体质量和精神状态,很多的大爷大妈都是沿着健康小道“快走”,他们的这种走在我们看来非常的慢,但是这已经是那些被人推着轮椅出来呼吸新鲜空气偶尔停下从轮椅上站起来动两下的那些大爷大妈所羡慕的,也有为数不多的大爷大妈能够跑起来,虽然比不上年轻人,但是看的出来,身体非常的健硕,打太极的姿势和力道等都非常的好,也有些大爷会在那里聊聊天或是拉二胡,写毛笔字,打羽毛球打网球放风筝等,每天你读能看到一对老夫妻用个小推车拉着很多的猫粮去喂公园里那些野猫,看到每天都有那么几对老夫妻阿婆陪着阿公慢走或是阿公搀扶着阿婆晨练,我想一个人对人生都会积极向上起来。在晨练的很多大爷大妈中有的退休教授,有的是政府高干或是国营事业单位退休老干部,总之,这些人中很多都是很多现在年轻人追求的,但是退休了,离职了,这些人都在和生命赛跑,人生最后那十年或是二十年,他们没有差别,都在斗争一个共同的敌人。他们中也有些“老顽固”,一个阿公每天都会点两支烟边走边在公园里抽着,同行的大爷大妈经常碎碎念这些,大爷好像一直都坚持如此,也有些大爷早起来公园是来聊天的,并不晨练,打着扇子说着时事,貌似也很惬意。
早上六点其实已经有些太阳了,但是不大,公园里树木还是很茂密的,现在也很难去理解以前每天八点多起床然后去公司是什么样的状态,偶尔也很怀念上小学中学那个时间总是能起的很早然后去学校,有时还经常第一个到班上的,大学那个温床把很多原本严格要求自己的年轻人给腐化的,睡懒觉,逃课,不管在什么样层次的学校,睡懒觉,是一个非常普遍的现象,自己也会但是不多,那个时候有很多的学生工作或是课总是早上第一节,仔细想来自己睡懒觉还真的不多在学校期间。工作了准点上班也偶尔踩红线让同事打卡也已经是很早以前的事情了。
人是不是真到了那个点了才会注意自己的那个状态,很少会提前预防的。比如自己,在咨询了很多已经在医院工作的同学对之前身体不是非常舒服的状态后他们给出的强烈建议说要多运动才开始下决心始运动的,事实收获了一些东西,坚持这个夏天,今年的冬天,2012也就过去了,不是么!
如果你也是和我一样身体开始有些不是特别给力了,开始运动吧,晨练或是打打球,总归是动起来,每天7。5个小时或是8个小时的坐着我们会面临越来越多的问题,我已经体会到没有健康的身体的痛苦了,你们开始提前预防吧,真的开始了,就开始了……
一周前,有人和我说,我对自己的要求太高,所以有时会很纠结或是压力很大,事实不是,我只是没有办法敷衍自己,没有办法让自己内心将就,如果不认真过生活,我们还能认真做什么呢?
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
是那样的坚持,让我选择持续;是那样的努力,让我的双脚没有理由停下来;是那样的意志,让我的.汗没有白流。当我快看到终点时,彷彿全世界的人都在等我,为我鼓掌,当时我全身已经被汗水淋透,双脚也又热又痛,不过我的意识还清醒着,我只知道:终点就在眼前,我要 超越昨天的我!这一刻的成就,让昔日的累通通忘掉,从前的辛苦,似乎都在这一刻,一幕幕的映在脑海里……。
“想参加马拉松比赛的同学,请自动站起来。”想当时不是自愿的我,被同学硬拉起来时,还满脸的不高兴,或许当时只是因为怕累吧!很快的,第二天就开始集训了:今天先跑五圈、明天就跑七圈、后天跑十圈….以此类推。我们每天都在进步、每天都在成长,即使累,也要把最后一圈跑完。慢慢的,我开始喜欢跑步,并给自己订 了一个目标:“今日事,今日毕。”今天不流汗,就不休息。后来老师为了让我们真正跑步的感觉,用心的规划了一条车辆较为稀少的马路,整整三公里。我还记得第一次跑是二十一分十一秒,第二次十八分十八秒,第三 次十六分三十七秒……。一次比一次更努力,让我品尝到了“真正运动的滋味”。
其实好几次想要放弃,但是一想到:如今已经跑了这么远的路,如果现在放弃,那先前的努力不就都白费了吗?靠着这份坚强的意志力,我的脚始终没有停下来,他们像节拍器般的有秩序:“一二、一二。”同时也更卖力的向前跨一大步,因为每跑一步,就代表需跑的路程越少;每跑一步,就代表离成功越近。 渐渐的,我们都成了耐跑的选手,辛苦的涂老师也耐心的陪我们跑。这一切的努 力,都是为了这天的比赛,所以每个人都很拼命,想为校争光,不想辜负老师们的期望。
终于:“预备,开跑!”一声强而有力的声音从耳边响起,所有的选手像脱 缰的野马般迫不及待的往前冲了起来,这一刻,大地似乎也跟着动了起来……。现在,一张编号写着“第十七名”的牌子在我的手中,虽然几乎被手心的汗水浸湿了,不过我很兴奋、也很满足,在太阳的照射下,我知道:自己做到了!
古人云“持之以恒”,余以为然。
——题记
窗外的小雨缠绵地下着,敲打着坚硬的地面,看到这情景,我不禁有些陶醉。当梦想这位导师再次出现在我的考卷上,神秘地问我,它需要什么?我的回答并不睿智,但是却充满了理性。
梦想需要坚持。
翻开历史的卷轴,踏入古人的世界。一位愁容满面的男子向我走来。“问君能有几多愁?恰似一江春水向东流。”他的浅唱低吟,不禁让我有几分哀伤。他就是李煜。“国家亡命了,你难过吗?”我问道。“何止难过!全都怪我不能坚持防守啊!敌军攻城前夜,我以为王气在我这里,便疏忽了防御……”说罢,他怅然离开。如今,他的江山不在,龙椅不在,朱颜不在。是因为没有坚持,铸就了如今的叹息。
合上书,我不仅仅感受到了李煜的郁闷忧伤。让我感触更深的还是他那一番话。梦想需要坚持,这话一点不错。
坚持是火,正在燃烧的火;
坚持是风,正在弄舞的风;
坚持是诗,正被书写的诗。
坚持像火一般,描绘了梦坚持自己的梦想,因为梦想需要坚持来实现。漫漫人生路,不如意者十有八九。怨天尤人,无济于事。只有在拼搏过程中,不断坚持不断进取,不断超越,才能让我们的人生道路更加宽阔,才能让我们的生命更加美丽、绚烂。
想之路沿途的风光。
梦想、坚持、超越,我们只有处理好这三者的关系,才能让我们的未来大放异彩,无限希望!
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