记得在我三年级的时候,我和我的同桌,曾经发生过一次矛盾。 那天上午第一节课,我正在认认真真地的写作业,我的同桌他就闲的没事干了,他想了一个坏主意,于是他就偷偷摸摸地把我的铅笔盒给藏起来,过了一会我的字写错了,我正在找橡皮,我往抽屉一看,呀!我的铅笔盒怎不见了?正当我非常焦急的时候,我看到同桌不由地在旁边笑了起来,我想会不会是他偷了我的铅笔盒?我对他说:“你能够看看你的抽屉吗?”他顿时紧张了起来,看他的表情就知到一定是他,我偏和他大吵了起来。他的脸涨得比红苹果还红,满眼充满了怒火,双手握得紧紧的,活象一头发怒的小狮子,似乎恨不得一口把我给吞了,我害怕极了。事后,我跟他道了歉,他也跟我道了歉,我们两个和好如初了。
这件事让我知道了同学之间要和平共处,有困难时要互相帮助。
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
记得去年刚开学,就在二年级同学中挑选演员,准备在校庆时表演“中国功夫”,我光荣地入选了,当老师叫到:“耿宗泽”时,高兴得我一蹦三尺高,从那以后我们进行了几个月的艰苦训练。
每天早上我七点准时到校,舞蹈老师教我们基本动作。每个动作都要反复练上几十遍,或者是上百遍。开始同学们都很认真,吴老师一声“压腿”,大家都用自己的 身子使劲下压。不一会儿豆大的汗珠流下来了,可谁也不叫一声苦。渐渐地,时间长了感到腰酸,腿疼,有些顶不住了,真想找个机会不练了。
一天早晨起来,我头有些疼,便对妈妈说:“妈妈,今天早上我不想练了,您给我请个假吧。”“孩子,做事要有毅力,不能半途而废。”妈妈说得是对的。“走,妈妈,别迟到。”说完,我背起书包让妈妈带我去。
经过严冬酷夏的考验,我终于熟练地掌握了“中国功夫”的每一个动作,几次排练都非常成功。艰苦的训练锻炼了我的身体,使我更健康了;它又磨练了我的毅力,也让我学会了做事有始有终。
人民大会堂校庆“中国功夫”的'表演给我带来了快乐,我知道成功演出是我们每个同学用辛勤汗水换来的。今天我终于懂得了台上十分钟,台下十年功的道理。我还要坚持锻炼下去,用健康的身体去迎接2008年在北京举行的奥运会。
点评:本文以“我”参加“中国功夫”表演为线索,写入选、练习及表演给自己带来的快乐。从快乐中享受健康。文章条理清楚。 小作者重点描写了不怕苦,不怕累,在艰苦训练中锻炼,并从中颇深。认识到做事要有毅力,只有用辛勤的汗水才能换来快乐,换来健康;悟出台上十分钟,台下十年功的道理。 文章以“台上演员一个骑马蹲裆式的精彩亮相,台下全校师生响起了热烈的掌声”开头。这种倒叙的形式,引起读者的兴趣,这对于一个三年小同学来说实属不易。 全文语言生动,流畅,有趣,是一篇值得学习借鉴的好文章。
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
学校的大门可以自由变换形状和颜色,让我们每天进校都有一种新鲜感。每间教室都是各种各样的地方,有的是山洞,有的是太空仓,有的是小茅屋、有的是鸟语花香,山青水秀的原野……同学们在这种环境下学习,一定会心旷神怡并且会全神贯注地听讲。
学校不仅外观美丽,而且都是高科技,老师想讲什么内容,屏幕上就会出现关于这类知识的图片和文字,而且,我们每个人的课桌就是一台可升降的电脑,上课时升起,做作业时就收到课桌下面了。有这样的设备,同学们的学习成绩一定稳步提升!
学校的操场是多功能的,可以变成正规的`足球场,一转又可变成两个篮球场。到了夏天,中间一打开,顶蓬升起,下面自然是一个遮挡太阳的游泳池,可供我们在水中嬉戏。
美丽不仅指外观和高新科技,还有人素质的美丽,到这所学校任教的老师必须通过电脑测试,老师的智商要达标,而且个个都是无所不晓的能人,上知天文,下知地理,能回答学生各种各样的问题。学生那当然也不能例外,也要经过严格筛选,要品行端正,热爱学习的孩子才能入学。这所学校允许孩子犯错,但每个错误,每人只能犯一下,因为这里一台神奇的电脑,会准确的记录着,没有人能逃过他过“眼睛”,而且一定要知错必改。否则会遭到“魔法扫帚”的惩罚,那就是挠痒痒,你肯定受不了。
虽然这样的学校现在没有,可是,说不定通过我们的努力,20年后就能创造出这么“美丽、神奇”的学校呢
There are many students smoking in senior high school, the reason may be that they think they look cool or appear to be more mature while having a cigarette at hand.But there are a lot of reasons not to smoke. Smoking does harm to our health.It is dangerous to our heart and lung. A lot of diseases are caused by cigarettes.Cigarettes also have terrible smell.The seconghand smoke can also be dangerous to the others who stand around you. Therefore, no smoking in public is a strict regulation in many countries. And the most important thing is that once you come into addicitive,it's hard to get rid of it. So,we must keep far from the cigarette——for everybody's health.
高中里有很多学生吸烟,原因可能是他们觉得手中有一支烟看上去很酷或者显得更成熟。但是,不吸烟的原因有很多。吸烟有害我们的健康,对我们的心脏和肺很危险。很多疾病都是由香烟引起的,而且烟的味道不好闻。二手烟对周围的.人也很危险。因此,公共场所禁止吸烟是很多国家的一项严厉规定。最重要的是,一旦你上瘾了就很难戒掉了。所以,为了每个人的健康,我们必须远离香烟。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
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