在写作时我们同样需要注意词汇搭配的问题,下面让我们来看一个雅思写作的常见句子:
Advertisements have influences on people.
相信所有备考过关于广告和传播话题的烤鸭对这个句子都不会陌生对不对,那么我们现在开始试着扩句。
2. Many schools demand the students wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality. What is your opinion?
3. Some people believe that pet animals such as cats and dogs cannot be kept in the cities, especially in busy modern cities. Do you agree or disagree?
4. Nowadays, teenagers cause a lot of social problems due to lack of discipline. Some people think that parents should spend more time staying with their children. Do you agree or disagree?
5. Nowadays, many children have their part-time jobs. Some people say that doing part-time jobs is useful, but others argue that children should enjoy their childhood. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
6. Some people think if students want to learn a foreign language, it is advisable for them to learn it in the native countries where the language is actually spoken. Whats your opinion? Give your reasons.
7. In some countries, there are women taking the positions of police officers, while some people believe that women are not suitable to work in the police force. DO you agree or disagree? Write your reasons and give examples in your experience.
不能过于空洞,也不能脱离现时,否则就失去了举例的意义。
太多专业数据会给人捏造的痕迹,缺乏真实性。考官会质疑数据的出处。
例:A survey indicates that the number of people smoking has increased to as high as 65 percent in China.(一项调查显示。。。)
"65%"让文章看起来有些假,有捏造的嫌疑。"A survey"又不够具有代表性。
商人看起来又饿又累。所以,拉姆和希亚邀请他和他们一起吃午餐。“但是,我们有三个人,怎么分这八块面包呢。”拉姆有些为难。“我们把面包放在一起,再把每个面包切成均等的三块。”希亚建议到。把面包吃完后,商人要给他们钱,他们又不好推辞,就收下了。
待商人离开后,两个人一数金额的数量是:八个。“八个金币,两个人,我们就每人四个金币。”拉姆说到。“这不公平!”希亚大声反驳道,“我有五块面包,你只有三块,所以,我应该拿五块,你只能拿三块。” 拉姆不想争吵,但他也不想让希亚拿五块金币。“我们去找村长来决定吧他是个公正的人。”拉姆说。
他们来到村长毛尔维的家,把整个事情告诉了他。毛尔维想了很久,最后说:“分配这笔钱的公平办法,就是希亚拿七个金币,拉姆那一个。”“什么?”拉姆尖叫道。“为什么我该得的`七个?”希亚也觉得非常奇怪。当毛尔维把他分配的理由解释清楚后,拉姆和希亚都没有对这个分配再提出意见。这真是一个公平的裁决呀!
毛尔维决定只给拉姆一个金币,而给西亚七块,是因为,商人吃的八块面包中,只有一块是从拉姆的面包中来的,而其余七块都是希亚的,如果商人吃的八块面包中四块是拉姆的,四块是希亚的,或者还有其他的情形,那又该怎么办呢?如果你把所有的可能都考虑到了然后在计算,你会发现,结果仍然是相同的。
所谓议论文,最关键之处在于论述得当。支持句应使主题句更加令人信服,令考生的想法更加鲜明的呈现在考官面前。然而,中国考生在论述时往往存在一些误区:
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