要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
狗的孩子们长大后都走了,狗的老伴也走了,狗把家也卖了。
狗出远门时,把冰箱里的食物都拿走了,它走呀走。遇到了猪,帮猪实现了当明星的愿望。在一个夜深人静的时候,狗又来到一所小学,在学校里睡觉。第二天早晨,狗被狗熊校长当成了新来的老师,狗就将计就计,它教学不拘泥于成法,让孩子们在实践中学习知识,成为孩子们最喜欢的老师。但是狗当老师的事情不幸被教育局知道了,警察也来了。我觉得大家真的误会狗了!
Hi! Boys and girls! My name is kelly,I am 12 years old. I am a student. I study at XiShan Primary School.I am in Class 1,Grade 5.I have three good teachers. They are Mr Lai, Miss Huang and Miss Lu.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
这本书主要讲了:狗的老伴死了,孩子也走了,此时孤零零的狗决定走出门外,到又大又辽阔的世界里去。他首先遇到了作弊猪,圆了他的当明星的梦想。跟猪分别后,进错了一所学校,又被熊校长任当成了代任老师,无可奈何下,狗只好当了下去。因为狗的教学方法很特别,让孩子们体验在其中,所以孩子们都很喜欢他。但是这种情况并没持续很久,因为狗冒充老师被警察局发现了,所以狗成了通缉人物。幸亏有大家帮忙,狗才能脱离危险。因此熊校长也被撤了职,就跟着狗开始了逃亡生活。熊对教育现状不满,想通过从政来改变这一切,于是就妆办成一位妇女参加议员竞选,可不幸被政敌看出来了。关键时刻狗不惜一切地将熊给救出来,带着闯荡世界的种种心情,带着熊一起回到了自己的家乡。
读完这本书之后,让我受益匪浅。尤其是当时狗奋不顾身地将熊解救出来,让我十分感动,熊帮助了他,他也帮助了熊,这种乐于助人的精神值得我们去学习。如果你帮助了别人,别人也会来帮助你的。大家都来伸出援助之手,去帮助你身边的人吧!别人也将会来帮助你的!
How time flies! Three years has passed. I will graduate from junior high school. I will enter a new school to study. What will my new head teacher be like?I imagine that she/he is not only young but also beautiful/handsome. She/He maybe both patient with us and kind to us. She/He is also strict with us. I hope she/he is outgoing. She/He can understand us and make friends with us. If she/he likes doing sports, we can play together after class. She/He can get moreknowledge from her/him.I am looking forward to seeing her/him!
我的新班主任
时间过得真快!三年过去了。我将从初中毕业。我将进入一所新学校学习。我的新班主任会是什么样的\'人?
我想她/他不仅年轻,而且漂亮/英俊。她/他也许对我们既有耐心又对我们很好。她/他对我们也很严格。我希望她/他是外向的。她/他能理解我们并与我们交朋友。如果她/他喜欢运动,我们课后可以一起玩。她/他可以从她/他那里获得更多的知识。
我期待着见到她/他!
假期看了《狗来了》这本书,我看到一只善良、勇敢、有爱心的老狗。
在外面闯荡的日子,老狗凭着自己的聪明,帮助了许许多多的小动物,他的真诚付出换来了很多的朋友。最让我敬佩的是,老狗和熊一起逃亡时,遇到的重重困难,他不仅从不气馁,还非常乐观,勇于挑战的精神,深深的印在我的脑子里。
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