五年级中秋英语小作文80字【一】
记得那一天，忠诚的信使——电话，报来了一条可怕的消息：“外婆生病了！还咳出了血！”这个消息像雷霆霹雳一样在空中划过！一点儿也没有心理准备的妈妈，立刻被击垮了。她变成了泪人儿，吃饭的时候哭，睡觉的时候哭，整日以泪洗面！
和外婆在一起的一幕幕像放电影似的，在我脑海里回放：外婆抱我，亲我，给我做我最爱吃的，给我玩最好玩的，让我看最热闹的……妈妈说：“轩，你还记得吗？那天在爷爷的生日宴上，你在台上主持，那么自信、那么优秀，外婆被你的表现给震住了。她拉着我的.手悄悄地对我说：伟丽，孩子是我们的希望，今天他用自己的努力，证明了自己一点儿也不比别人差，或许，他现在很平凡，但谁能说平凡中不孕育着伟大呢！”听完妈妈的讲述，我已经坐立不安，妈妈看着我已经湿润的眼眶，安抚着我，一边啜泣一边说：“外婆会平平安安的，没事的，锦轩！”
我坐在妈妈的汽车里，怀着急切的思念，想要马上就见到外婆。车子一路颠簸着，开到了外婆家，妈妈显得有些激动，三步并作两步地走着。刚来到家门口，外公就立刻迎了出来，一边和妈妈寒暄着一边拉着我的小手给我递过来许多好吃的。“妈，妈——”妈妈喊着外婆，外婆从房间里传来轻微的呼唤声，妈妈急切地走进去，亲切地问：“妈！怎么样了，化疗以后身体怎样了，有没有不舒服啊？”
我注意到外婆的气色虽然不怎么好，但是精神状态还可以，本来无精打采的眼神，现在变得活络了。问完了一些情况，妈妈就开始帮外公扫地、烧饭、洗衣……大家还一起欢快地进餐，和和睦睦的，一丁点也看不出谁生病了。
中秋节象征着平安和团圆，人们可以通过中秋节来互相祝福。我们期待外婆早日康复！
但愿人长久，千里共婵娟！
五年级中秋英语小作文80字【二】
中秋节一大早，我家里来了许多客人。妈妈忙着跟客人端早餐，爸爸忙着给客人倒茶。妈妈闲我碍手碍脚，甩上一句：“玩电脑去。”我高兴得手舞足蹈，脚底像安了风火轮一样，“嗖”的一下到了电脑桌前。
我和姐姐玩得正起劲，突然妈妈吆喝道：“大家吃饭噢!”“我来了!”我兴冲冲地说，“有什么好菜?”我一看，啊!有鸭肉、菠菜、火腿肠，还有我最喜欢的土豆丝饼、精肉紫菜汤……一位伯伯站起来，喜笑颜开地说：“祝各位兄长万事如意，工资疯长。祝杜中天学习进步，天天向上!”我笑了起来，端起可乐杯，兴奋地说：“干杯!祝你们身体健康......”全家其乐融融，笑声在餐厅回荡。
晚上终于来了!我和哥哥姐姐们一边吃月饼，一边赏月。月亮蒙着轻纱，像一个害羞的.小姑娘。过了一会，她才慢慢地露出了美丽的脸庞，向人们打招呼。我在吃橘汁月饼时，月饼里的汁一下溅到了姐姐脸上，我们捧腹大笑。
每逢佳节倍思亲。我望着皎洁的明月，不禁想起了在远方的外婆外公、奶奶爷爷……
难忘中秋!
中秋难忘!
五年级中秋英语小作文80字【三】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：
互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：
五年级中秋英语小作文80字【四】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
