Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
“蓝蓝的天上白云飘……”多么好听的一首歌啊!但是它比不上我们美丽的大自然:小鸟清脆的歌声,把人们叫醒;一起来便闻到一股浓郁的花香,原来是桃花开了;站在大门口,无数新绿抓人眼球……这么美的景色谁不爱呀?可是,为了自己的利益,很多人抓捕动物、砍伐植物。
人们都说鳄鱼可怕,但很多人***了它,吃它的肉;人们都说小狗可爱,但饭店出现了狗肉火锅这道菜;人们都说小鸟惹人爱,但它永远是猎人的目标;人们都说杜鹃美丽,但几乎每一个人都会“手下不留情”的.摘去几多;人们都说玫瑰美中带险,但不少人冒着刺的危险,去摘一朵,当情人节礼物;人们都说牡丹艳得耀眼,但不少人拿它卖钱;人们都说银杏珍贵,可不少人砍伐它,让他不能继续茁壮成长;人们都说枞树漂亮,但很多人为了圣诞节,拿它做圣诞树;人们都说美人松令人陶醉,但他在木材市场很常见……为什么要这么对待着些小生命呢?答案只有一个——人类的私心太强了。
要是世界上没有钱这种东西,人们不吃荤食,只吃对我们有害的东西就好了。可是这是不可能的,现在我们只能从一花一草、一树一木开始保护,从一鸟一兽开是保护。
保护地球,从我做起,从小做起。
今日,你还能听见小鸟那美妙的声音吗?你还能看见那满地的翠绿吗?你还能看见那清澈的河水吗?如今,地球已经不复从前了,她正在一步一步的衰弱,这是为什么呢?因为我们这些贪心的人类。
因为我们的贪婪,旅行鸟灭绝了。因为我们不可满足的心,鲨鱼被捕获了。你看看那一些灭绝或死亡的动物,不都是我们的“功劳”吗?
地球不属于我们每个人,谁也没有权利去伤害她。她是我们共有的,需要我们共同的呵护、关爱。
水资源是供我们利用的,不是供我们浪费的。现在有多少人因缺少水资源而死的,只有现在去珍惜水、爱护水才能保证不发生这些事情。所以从今天起,大家要做到不浪费水,并监视身边的人做到节约用水。
大家生活中一定有很多可回收垃圾吧,如:电池、纸张……不都属于以上一类吗?所以,大家在生活中一定要做大垃圾分类啊!因为这样,才能保证回收站的人把该回收的垃圾给回收。
大家买东西时都喜欢用塑料袋吧?是啊,塑料袋既方便又美观,谁不爱用啊!可是,你知道塑料袋到底多么不环保吗?它自然分解需要二百年以上,还污染水源和土壤塑料袋不容易分解,一百年都不会腐烂;如果埋在土里,就会破坏土壤的质量;如果把它丢在大海里,鱼儿们一不小心吃了,消化不良,就会死亡……现在知道它的危害了吧?所以希望大家少用塑料袋。
环保听起来是件大事,但是他就在我们身边。需要我们仔细观察,进行修改。说它离我们进,触手可及。说它离我们远,它又不会来靠近我们,需要我们去接近它。
我们只有一个地球,她需要我们的爱护。让我们一起环保,让昔日鸟栖虫居的日子回来吧!
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