Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
还记得年少狂妄的你吗?还记得那时的你扬言说过,要闯遍天下,游览世界各地的美景,去踏遍森林,去登上世界之巅,去攀登那高山。去大海深潜,看那海底的大千世界,去看那新奇美丽的蔚蓝的深海。你说过,要走遍世界上的每一个地方。
可现在呢?还没来得及实现,就被这个小小的挫折给打败了吗?你可真令我失望啊!
你说过你很彷徨,你说过你很迷茫。你说过你一直在思索,寻找着答案。可是呢,你一直没有找到答案,没有找到你所坚持的原因。你不知道,你现在所做的这些,是正确的还是错误的?
记得你刚踏入中学那会吗?不知是什么改变了你,不知是什么狐狗朋友带坏了你,不知是你自己本性就不好,还是青春的躁动,让你走上这条短轨。
你放弃了你的学业,将它狠狠的踩在脚下。那时候等你从没想过,有一天你会把它重新拾起来,重新擦拭,让它重新回到你身边的第一位。现在的你,珍惜这剩下的十几天。上课时的你认真在听讲,可遇到的那些化学,英语科目中的\'复杂符号,各种复杂的单词,你的眼皮却忍不住想要垂下,脑袋晕沉沉的。
你是想要放弃了吗?又要打退堂鼓了吗?
于是你又开始怀疑你自己了。好不容易从断轨中逃离,踏上征途,就遇上了这么一大片荆棘。你有些后悔,后悔自己出发的太晚了。如果自己早点出发,就不会碰上暴雨,也不会遇上这片荆棘。你后悔没有学好数学,后悔没有学好英语。对!你不甘心!不甘心就这么被他们说阻挡了你前进的路。
你开始披荆斩刺,即使浑身伤痛,你也要克服这道难关。因为你知道,你的人生,处处都有重重关卡。数学英语对于你来说,这只是第二道,既然你都已经闯过这第一关了,那么第二关也会通过的。
我相信你,加油!
希望以后等你面对这些挫折,面对这些困难,面对这人生的一道道关卡时,你可以继续走的从容,无畏。带着自信,抛去压力,走过这些人生的关卡。
愿你以后,浑身光芒,做自己的太阳不去借别人的光。
加油!
你好!
还记得年少狂妄的你吗?还记得那时的你扬言说过,要闯遍天下,游览世界各地的美景,去踏遍森林,去登上世界之巅,去攀登那高山。去大海深潜,看那海底的大千世界,去看那新奇美丽的蔚蓝的深海。你说过,要走遍世界上的每一个地方。
可现在呢?还没来得及实现,就被这个小小的挫折给打败了吗?你可真令我失望啊!
你说过你很彷徨,你说过你很迷茫。你说过你一直在思索,寻找着答案。可是呢,你一直没有找到答案,没有找到你所坚持的原因。你不知道,你现在所做的这些,是正确的还是错误的.?
记得你刚踏入中学那会吗?不知是什么改变了你,不知是什么狐狗朋友带坏了你,不知是你自己本性就不好,还是青春的躁动,让你走上这条短轨。
你放弃了你的学业,将它狠狠的踩在脚下。那时候等你从没想过,有一天你会把它重新拾起来,重新擦拭,让它重新回到你身边的第一位。现在的你,珍惜这剩下的十几天。上课时的你认真在听讲,可遇到的那些化学,英语科目中的复杂符号,各种复杂的单词,你的眼皮却忍不住想要垂下,脑袋晕沉沉的。
你是想要放弃了吗?又要打退堂鼓了吗?
于是你又开始怀疑你自己了。好不容易从断轨中逃离,踏上征途,就遇上了这么一大片荆棘。你有些后悔,后悔自己出发的太晚了。如果自己早点出发,就不会碰上暴雨,也不会遇上这片荆棘。你后悔没有学好数学,后悔没有学好英语。对!你不甘心!不甘心就这么被他们说阻挡了你前进的路。
你开始披荆斩刺,即使浑身伤痛,你也要克服这道难关。因为你知道,你的人生,处处都有重重关卡。数学英语对于你来说,这只是第二道,既然你都已经闯过这第一关了,那么第二关也会通过的。
我相信你,加油!
希望以后等你面对这些挫折,面对这些困难,面对这人生的一道道关卡时,你可以继续走的从容,无畏。带着自信,抛去压力,走过这些人生的关卡。
愿你以后,浑身光芒,做自己的太阳不去借别人的光。
2018.6.2
中考即将来临,加油!
Dear July,
Hello,I am Dick! I am good looking with curly hair.I wear a pair of glasses because I study hard!I am a bit tall .My dream is becoming a teacher.Because I want to work with students.And my hobby is reading.
Let me introduce(介绍my family.I have a warm family.The members (成员of my family are my mom,dad,and I.My mom is very beautiful and she is kind to (对某人慈祥me.My dad is very strict(严厉的 and I am afaid of(害怕某人 him.We are all good with(和某人相处得好 anyone.
What about you and your family?Please write me a letter soon!
Yours
Dick
以前的你,也就是现在的我,是一个有着许多梦想的孩子。不知这些梦想,你实现了吗?
我很好奇,你是不是已经成为了一位足球明星?因为我现在的梦想里有一项,那就是也要成为一名足球健将。我虽然做其它事有点笨手笨脚,但玩足球毫不含糊。希望你是梅西、罗纳尔多和小罗纳尔多合体的“加强版”,代表中国队出征,踢出中国足球的威风。如果确实是这样的话,那现在的我,就提前为你感到骄傲和自豪。
我还非常想知道你有多帅,多高。现在的我,自我感觉还算是一位很帅气的小男孩——虽然有些瘦弱,像豆芽菜似的。我决心坚持体育锻炼,让自己变得壮实一些,成为一个阳光、健美的男子汉。
你也许是一位经营有道、富可敌国的老板,或是一位著作等身、名满天下的作家,又或许是一名知识渊博、桃李满天下的老师,还有可能是叱咤风云的赛车手……这些都可以,只要你拥有自强不息的精神,用心去奋斗,人生就会步步走向辉煌。
你有没有一位聪慧贤淑的.好妻子呢?有没有一个淘气顽皮又天真烂漫、活泼可爱的孩子呢?写到这里,我都有点不好意思了。看来,我真的要努力才行,为你打下扎实的基础,好让你更好地为人夫,为人父。
20年后的我,请你认真看看这封儿时的自己写的信吧!看完之后,希望能引起你最美好的回忆与怀念!
祝你
健康快乐
充满幻想的简**
Dear wu Yanzu:
You are my favourite superstar.I am addicited to your films and some other works.Our teacher asked us to write a letter to a superstar. You come to mine mind firstly. I am inertested in a question.That is why you are not good at our mother tongue.I am anxious to eat your cooking.It must be taste good.Oh i can not wait.How I wish I could taste it at once. You hurt your nose in an accident.I am very wooried about that,can I have a look at your nose.Yang Qianhua is a so good singer.You two look like a couple,and you will be good lovers.
Yours
XXX
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