一年级作文批改语【一】
"Treasure ink garden" this name is how to come, I asked my father and mother, but they are not too clear, so I found the Internet to treasure the edge of the ink garden. The package at temple was built in the Qing Dynasty Jiaqing years, is enshrined in the light Song Ming Chen, Bao Zheng. There is a flood in the Xijiang River, there is a black wood drifting to the village, they put it back in the river, who knows the downstream water, the wood back to the village. When this happens again and again, people find it very strange and consecrate the black wood. Jiaqing four years the court to exterminate the corrupt He Shen, the society set off anti-corruption of the wind. As a result, people naturally want to get like that to clean Bao governance officials. Put the wood carved like BaoQingTian, build package at. The package at baomo garden predecessor.
There are many baomo garden Koi, we bought a bag of feed into a koi, the door to see there are many Koi under the bridge. We stand on the side of the bridge into the water with a feed, some from our past news Koi wags its tail to swim over, see here are also other Koi feed the gathering in crowds and groups swam, their mouths, tail slapping the water, as if eager to feed them we'll plant more points, very energetic.
Go down as if you are in the ancient garden, everywhere south of the Five Ridges classical architecture, bridges, will reveal pavilions, terraces and open halls, the heritage of Chinese culture, which baomo garden there are many precious cultural relics, there are many different periods of jade collection, calligraphy and painting etc.
一年级作文批改语【二】
老师看着我们疑惑不解的表情，就宣布了游戏规则：以开火车形式说关于“笑”的词语，如果火车在哪里断了，就请那位同学上台表演节目。我们听了，都跃跃欲试。
游戏开始了，首先是第一组列火车先开动。“冷笑”、“爆笑”、“大笑……”一个个词语好像珠子一样从同学们口中迸出来，第一组顺利过关。接下来是第二组，前面的同学很顺利，但轮到睿希时，她说了几个词都是前面的同学说过的，老师让她上台抽签，准备表演节目，看她那一脸忐忑不安，便知她有多紧张，我们都替她捏了一把汗。她抽到了“哇哇大哭。”睿希很难为情，小脸憋得红红的，站在那里，一动不动。我想：睿希平时那么文静，可能不会做这个动作。出乎意料，她犹豫了一会儿后就握紧拳头揉着眼睛，哇哇地“大哭”起来。演得真像！教室里掌声雷动。游戏继续进行。钦鑫的.运气也“不好”，他冥思苦想，嘴巴像塞了棉花似的一声不吭，只好上台抽签。抽到的是什么？是“哈哈大笑”。这个表情容易，我恨不得冲上台表演。但是他做的表情很奇怪：张开嘴巴，又愁眉苦脸，好像在哭，又好像在笑，同学们都被他逗得哈哈大笑起来。
游戏在欢笑声中结束了。这节课我们不仅学到了许多词语，还收获了无限的快乐。
一年级作文批改语【三】
Yesterday I saw the school first class, feeling very deep. This year's theme is beauty is near. Beauty, a very common words, we are literally think beauty is beautiful. So, what is the true meaning of beauty?
With the question I look up, the first lesson is to find beauty. How to find? It makes people lost in thought. When everybody zhang two monks confused, host "shenzhou" 9 astronaut liu Yang, please tell for you. Liu said, the universe is endless, much bigger than she had expected: long, on the other side of the galaxy, the star vega, mercury, Saturn... . All panoramic view. Time is the most interesting of weightlessness, everyone one by one all floating in the air, pens, book ah of what are messy, can be fun. Finally, she concludes the essence to find beauty, love sports, and more to find the beauty around, so beauty will show in front of you.
LiuLiLi mountain elementary school teachers as the second class of the bell took to the podium, she is only 20 years old this year, in this flower age, many girls are enjoying, who will suffer poor mountainous areas! Can't liu, she is out of the mountain, liu with great love for the children's happiness, she hold the children art, gymnastics and other mountainous area children can't learn knowledge. Liu planted beauty, transfer the beauty. Let the beauty of the mountains germination, results. So she right because when people called the most beautiful teacher, this is to create beautiful?
Gymnastics team player Chen yibing showed also in the field. His contribution for our country in the London Olympic Games, the host asked him why he is going to win? His answer: before the race, they are seen as a failure. But because of his companions support each other, encourage each other. Make them very first champions league. The companion's encouragement is beauty.
Yu Dan is the most let me have a feeling of the teacher's words. She hit a harmonious beauty, for example, put eggs, tea, carrot in boiling water, eggs, hardened into the fragrant tea, tea radish was soft. That means what? Hardened eggs tend to be the kind of person who are "really low on agreeableness, and most men are single minded and turnip are too weak, they couldn't get hold of degree dating, so don't be understood, so being bullied. And the tea? It combines with water, this kind of person is good at unity collective, so they are best represents the harmonious beauty.
The school first class with only an hour and a half, but let me benefit a lot.
