六年级优秀的英语作文【一】
当阳光从窗前照过，
当麻雀从房顶掠过，
当花香从盆里飘过，
我捧着书，静静地细读……
身临其境的美妙，山与水的萦绕。在这个神奇的故事中，一切都很美好。
这是一部惊秫而又美丽的小说﹕
年近十一岁的温妮，家境尤其的好，她家有一片林子，但是谁也不知道在这个林子里有一个不老的泉水，如果人喝了的话，时间就会停止不前。
很多人都做梦想长生不老，可这般好事，却让塔克一家给遇上了。这件事令塔克一家百思不得其解。这天，温妮在林子中游玩，走到了那棵白蜡树下，饥渴难忍的她望见了树下的一眼清泉，她仿佛见到了面包一样，捧起一捧，便想往嘴里倒。这时，迈尔斯急速跑过去阻止她，温妮很惊讶。梅﹑杰西和迈尔斯奋力将她带到了山顶，又把他们一家的神奇经历告诉了温妮，温妮似信非信，因为她从不相信长生不老这一说。梅一家告诉温妮，这事万万不可外露，不然，生态就会被破坏。可谁知，正有一双邪恶的眼睛盯着她。
梅一家把温妮带回了她家，一向干净的温妮很不适应这肮脏的环境。
当然，温妮的失踪也令她的妈妈十分着急，而那个神秘的黄衣人却知道温妮的下落，并提出用温妮家的林子交换温妮。第二天，警察赶到了，非说塔克一家绑架温妮。梅怕此时泄露，便打死了那个神秘的黄衣人。因此，梅要被视为死刑，但塔克一家都知道，梅是不会被打死的。
塔克一家再加上温妮，4个人齐心协力，终于把梅救了出来。
几十年以后，因为一场大火，林子被毁于一旦，温妮最终也没喝那泉水。一切仍是那样平静、祥和……
是的，人如果只活不死，就和路边的石头一样。人的生命只有一次，所以我们不能虚度光阴。珍惜生命，让生活更加多姿多彩！
六年级优秀的英语作文【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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六年级优秀的英语作文【三】
假期里，我有时写作业，有时玩乐，但我总忘不了看会书。这天，我捧起了《不老泉》这本书。
一个炎热的天气里，11岁的温妮由于无聊和闷热，独自悄悄跑进丛林中探险。在那里，她遇见了长生不老的塔克一家。17岁英俊潇洒的少年杰西和他哥哥、父母，他们因为误服可长生不老的泉水而永远年轻，他们为了保守这个秘密而东躲西藏。但还是有许多人在寻找他们，想知道长生不老的秘密。
一个人喝了一口泉水，他就会永远不老，即使年龄已经很大了。虽然可以一直生活在地球上，但也是有麻烦的，比如：文中的迈尔斯喝了泉水之后，跟一名女子结了婚，不久，那名女子发现迈尔斯一直不老，就带着孩子离开了……
主人公温妮，是一个乐于助人、见义勇为的人。在帕克一家人遇到困难的时候，温妮便挺身而出，救了他们一家。
我们的生命就像一根燃烧的蜡烛，用光阴发光发热，最后燃尽，这就是生命的轮回。喝了不老泉，虽然可以长生不老，但就尝不到生活中的酸甜苦辣，也体会不到生命的自然规律，就如同路边的石头一样没有活力。故事里的帕克一家就喝了这种泉水，活了好多年。光阴被卡住了，眼看着时光轮回，自己却一点儿不变，永远也尝不到从年轻到年迈的滋味了。所以，自然的生命最神圣！
