My favorite sports star------ Sun Yang
Born on December 1, 1991 in Zhejiang Province, Sun Yang is very tall and the height is 1.99 meters. He was from a sports family.
He won the China's first gold medal in men's swimming game. He worked a miracle. Sun Yang is not only gifted but also diligent. He keeps training and has tenacious willpower; these are worth learning by other people. Sun Yang is a new frontrunner at the sports worlds.
Sun Yang is very popular with the young. He is adorable, charming, childlike and cool. He is kind and has the vigor of youth, and he is a little shy. But Sun Yang is easy-going, always with a smile on his face when he faces our. He sings well and sounds beautiful. To my surprise, he likes dolls very much.
Sun Yang sets us a good example, and Sun Yang has set a new world record of swimming, of which the whole country’s people are proud
好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:
● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。
● 长短句结合。
由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:
I think …
I hope…
He does it.
He will take it
这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:
1.间或使用主从复句。
Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因
比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.
2.使用分词结构句。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.
3.使用不定式句。
To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚
To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申
To do it well, you must plan it well.
比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.
4.倒装句
Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.
5.失衡句
whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.
That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.
当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:
●As a creature, every one knows.
●Actions speak louder than words.
●Practice makes perfect.
Dear Admission Committee:
Miss Pan Bei requested a letter of recommendation from me to support her application for graduate program at your university. As her teacher, I am pleased to comply with her request.
I first got to know Miss Pan when she enrolled at university and I was the assistant director of her class at that time. Being a professor for several years, I noticed that due to the lack of self-learning ability, it is really challenging for students, even those performing excellent in senior school, to keep up with the college speed. However, as a diligent girl without any solid background in Computer Science before college, she adapted quickly to the especially competitive environment in our department. At the end of the first year, she earned the 5th rank in her class, while ranking 1st among the girls. I was fairly impressed by her self-learning technique and exceptional efforts. Hence, I believe, goal-oriented, not afraid of inchoateness and with persistence, she has the quality to make achievements.
What distinguished her among her classmates, I think, was that she went far beyond acquiring excellent scores in the exams and instead got her range of knowledge enlarged. In spring, 2006, Miss Pan took the course I taught named Algebraic Structures and Combinatorial Mathematics. This inquisitive and assiduous young woman was sometimes the last to leave after my class, raising novel questions related to the subject. I found that she understood the knowledge in depth and detail. Furthermore, I still remember during the spring vocation in May, due to the break-down of my mail box, I missed her mails to discussing some questions. But the following week during the course time, she asked me directly. Her zeal for knowledge and the spirit to explore answers really leave me a deep impression. Finally, she was among the few students who got almost full marks in every test in class which showed her exceeding grasp of every chapter. Thus, I gave her 98/100 for the excellent performance in my course.
In summary, I have every reason to believe that Miss. Pan will make outstanding performance at your university as a graduate. I would appreciate greatly if you give her a favorable consideration. Please feel free to contact me directly if more assistance is needed. Faithfully yours,
Wanling Qu, Professor
Department of Computer Science and technology Peking University
Email: qwku.edu.cn
September 16
Dear Zhang Hong,
How is everything with you I hope things are going well.
There is not much news here.I just go to work every morning and come back to my apartment every night.Shanghai is crowded with people,but I don\'t really know any of them.I don\'t like the city,but my job is quite interesting,and the pay is quite good.
What are your plans for National Day If you don\'t have anything special,I hope you can visit Shanghai.Come and share my apartment.It is quite large and it is near the theatres,museums and stores.
Write soon,and say you can spend the holiday here.
Sincerely yours
Li Hua
My favourite swimmer is Sun Yang.He swims very fast.He took part in the last Olympic Games.He is my hero.
He is 21 years oid.He is very tall.He is 198cm tall.He is cute.I love him.
He is good at swingming very much, He has had all-round success in his study olypic games.
我有一个小伙伴,标准的瓜子脸,一头浓密的黑发,两只浓眉大眼,再加上一副黑色的眼镜,看起来很有学问的样子,他就是我的好朋友刘阳。
前几天,风和日丽,阳光明媚,万里无云,一年一度的学校运动会在区体育场拉开序幕。同学们怀着激动的心情来到了看台上。我既高兴又紧张又兴奋,因为我马上要参加400米竞赛了。
“请六年级参加400米的同学到主席台集合”,听着广播中的通知,我知道终于到我大展身手的时候了。我心想,400米是我最擅长的项目,只要发挥正常就一定可以取得前三名。我在心里默默给自己加油打气,同我一起参加的还有刘阳。他比我跑得慢,但它同样不容小觑。我们在一起在起跑线做准备活动。
“砰!”只听一声枪响划破了长空,顿时我的杂念飞到了九霄云外,奋力地迈开大步奔跑起来。在一开始的时候我稳居第二名,落下第三名好远,但我定睛一看,第一名竟是刘洋,他怎么可能跑第一名?不行,我一定要超过他,不然会被同学们笑话的。比赛进入了白热化阶段,其他选手都渐渐没有了体力,而我却暗暗自喜。哼,我还留着体力呢,我一定要超过刘洋取得第一名。
正当我想加速时,脚底下突然拌蒜,我诶呦大叫一声,重重地摔在了跑道上。看台上的观众发出一片惊叹,我感到尴尬极了,脸涨得跟苹果一样红。正当我想挣扎起来时,只见一双温暖的手把我搀扶起来,我抬头一看,正是刘阳。他对我说:“你没事吧?有没有受伤?”我被他搀着,一瘸一拐撤出了跑道。这时,第三名已经冲到了我们面前,一眨眼到了终点。我握着刘洋的手,那不争气的眼泪像断了线的珍珠一样,涌出眼眶。刘洋为了看看我有没有受伤,失去了几乎到手的第一名,这是多么伟大的友谊呀。赛场上想起了热烈的掌声,刘洋笑着安慰我说:“朋友比第一更重要”!
这就是刘阳,我的好兄弟,我的好伙伴!
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