mytrip英语作文五年级去长城【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：
互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：
mytrip英语作文五年级去长城【二】
长城，是我国古代军事防御的一项宏伟建筑，它的建筑历史悠久，工程规模之大，堪称世界历史上一大奇迹。于1987年被联合国教科文组织列为世界文化遗产。整个长城穿梭在崇山峻岭当中，像一条长龙腾云驾雾。
俗话说：不到长城非好汉。我特别喜欢这一句，每一次读到时，我心中感到十分自豪、十分骄傲。
整个长城结构合理，高大坚固，由连续的城墙、关隘、敌台和烽火台构成。城墙为长城的建筑主体，关隘用于屯驻重，是长城防守的重要根据地，敌台供士兵射击、观察、掩蔽用，是城墙上的主要战斗设施。如今，它们仍然魏然屹立、蜿蜒起伏于高山之中
看到这前不见头，后不见尾的万里长城，我便想起，那时候没有火车、汽车、没有起重机，古代劳动人民用无数双手、无数肩膀抬着这一块块两三千斤重的条石，再一步步登上陡峭的山岭，是多么不容易啊!我心想，长城体现了古代劳动人民顽强的毅力和聪明的才智，如今长城显示了中华民族的悠久历史，展示了中国古代建筑工程的伟大成就。
啊!万里长城，中华人民的骄傲，全人类共同的财富，我爱您。长城，我心铭记!
mytrip英语作文五年级去长城【三】
星期六，我和妹妹在爸爸妈妈的带领下去儿童乐园游玩。
我们乘车来到儿童游乐场，儿童游乐场十分美丽，游戏的节目众多。有碰碰车、淘气宝，还有恐龙世界，真是举不胜举。
我们首先来到玩碰碰车的地方，只见小伙伴们开着五颜六色碰碰车，让我看得眼花缭乱。我和妹妹迫不及待地坐上一辆红色的碰碰车，由我来操控方向，妹妹控制前进和后退。忽然，有一辆绿色车夹住了黄色车，我也去凑凑热闹，快速上前夹住了绿色车。这时，还有一辆红色车趁机而入，把我的车夹住了。我们都使劲想把对方撞开，结果不成，结果都被撞了出，玩碰碰车真是带劲。
玩好了碰碰车，我们又来到淘气宝玩。这里面玩得东西真不少，有“马”、“房子”、“楼梯”和“障碍”等等。我玩起“打鬼子”的游戏，我成为中国的勇士，我奋勇战斗，总算把“鬼子”打败。我正玩得尽兴，妈妈催促我去别的地方玩，我只好恋恋不舍的告别了碰碰车。
接下来，我们来到了恐龙世界。我看到一只大恐龙，这只恐龙是给游人们玩的。我便不由自主地来到恐龙面前。只见恐龙的头不停地撞着铁，我忍不住大笑起来。其他游人听见笑声也纷纷跑过来看，涌上前去，争先恐后地玩了起来，场内不时传出欢声笑语。真是开心极了！
时间不早了，我们依依不舍地离开了儿童游乐场。
mytrip英语作文五年级去长城【四】
上个星期天我去了嘉年华玩。
那天天气不错，阳光暖和，万里无云。爸爸妈妈带着我和妹妹一起去嘉年华游乐场，我和妹妹高兴地蹦了起来。一进门，就看到很多玩的项目，有小火车，大龙船，旋转木马等等……都发出悦耳的音乐，仿佛在向我们招手，要我们去和它们玩。首先，我们玩了赶鸭子，我和妹妹每人一把水枪，利用水的冲力将漂浮在水上的鸭子一个个赶进洞里。
但是如果瞄不准的话，调皮的鸭子会遛出来。我和妹妹成功地赶了很多鸭子进洞。接下来，我们上了高高的龙船，龙船就象一个大秋千，把我们荡得很高很高，特别是荡上去和冲下来的时候，我很害怕会被摔下来，紧紧地抓住了把手，一串串尖叫声伴随着龙船的前后摇荡，最后一个小男孩吓得哭了起来，而我和妹妹并没有，看来我们两个还是很勇敢的。之后，我们乘了旋转木马和猴子爬树，都很好玩。我们离开的时候还有好多项目没有玩，我们依依不舍地离开了嘉年华。希望下次还能到嘉年华去玩。
