本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。
我来到了“植物小院”,小院里的植物数不胜数,有雍容华贵牡丹,有苍劲挺拔的罗汉松;有红得似火的海棠,但这些都无法引起我的注意,我的目光完全被那小巧玲珑的.山树给吸引了,这是一株刚刚萌发的、毛茸茸的山树,那样子真讨人喜欢。稍大的那一株,长得标致,像一位婀娜多姿的姑娘,在风中摇曳着。
山树的叶子是绿色的,反面的两边是白色的,整株往下看,像一束束绿丝带绑在山树上,风吹来,总能听见一阵阵铃儿般的笑声,那是山树在为秋天道贺呢!
山树的形状也是奇特的,呈五角星,五枝分叉。这独特的形状让我浮想联翩,我觉得它可能是有一个绿色的“五角星”梦想;有可能是让自己更加美观;有可能是保护着脚下那株小山树;也有可能是把自己的所有养分都给予小山树……
凉风再次吹来,它吹动了山树,山树在风中摇曳着。我觉得那就是一个个美妙的音符,这些音符在大自然的鬼斧神工下,奏出了美妙的音乐,周围的一切都那么的安静,只为深情地听那山树的演奏。
Some fish are forced to leave polluted water and are flying in the sky. But unfortunately, air is also so polluted that they have to wear masks. Each of them is crying, “Where is my home?” What a terrible sight!
Mankind has brought so much pollution. Waste is being poured into rivers and seas. Poisons to kill pests in farming and chemicals go into rivers and seas, too. Poisonous gasses from factories also make the air so dirty. The whole balance of nature is being destroyed as a result of our ignorance of the environmental protection.
Personally, man can not live alone on the earth. Should fish die from serious pollution, so would man! It is high time we did something to prevent such a scene from happening.
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