在论证中,文章的几个层次,段落之间的关系是平行的,就是并列式。这是经常使用的一种结构方式。
写作时,根据需要,大体有两种情况:
1、是为了论述方便,说理清楚透彻,把文章的论点进行分解,分成几个分论点。这些分论点之间的关系是平行的,并列的。
2、是在论证过程中,为了充分摆事实,讲道理,把几个论据并列起来。
并列关系的顺序安排可以灵活,但是应该考虑并列关系的几个方面的轻重程度及其相互关系。一般的说,应把最重要的放在最前面。当然,有时几个并列的方面并没有程度的差别,安排顺序时只要符合一般的思维习惯就可以,不一定有严格的次序。
从形式上说,为了使读者一目了然,几个并列的层次或段落,可以在前面标以“第一”、“第二”、……或“首先”、“其次”等。
文章各层次之间是层层深入、步步推进的.关系,各层的前后顺序有严格要求,不能随意改动,这就是层进式的结构。“提出一个什么问题,接着加以分析,然后综合起来,指明问题的性质,给以解决的办法。”这样的顺序,大致体现了层进式结构的一般思路。
为了使文章富于说服力,又容易被人接受,我们写议论文时常常按照由浅入深、由简单到复杂、由具体到抽象或由抽象到具体,由读者熟悉的到读者不熟悉的顺序展开论述。
An ant is walking by the river. He looks at the river and says to himself, "How nice and cool this water looks! I must drink some of it." But when he is drinking, he slips into the river.
"Oh.Help!Help!" The ant cries,
A dove is sitting in the tree. She hears him and throws him a leaf, "Climb up that leaf," she says "and you will float bank."
The ant climbs uo onto the leaf, and the wind blows the leaf to the bank. And the ant is saved.
"Thank you, Dove. You're so kind," The ant says and runs home, "You have saved my life, and I wish I could do something for you, Goodbye!"
"Goodbye!" says the dove, "Be careful. Not to fall into the river again."
After a few days, the dove is building her nest. And a man is raising his gun to shoot her.
The ant sees this, and runs quickly to bite the man's leg. "Ouch! Ouch!" The man feels pained and drops his gun. The dove hears and flies away. So the man picks up his gun and leave.
The dove comes to her nest. "Thank you, my little friend," she says, "You have saved my life."
The little ant is so glad, because he can help the dove.
一只蚂蚁在河边散步。他看见喝水自言自语道:"这河水看上去真清凉啊!我要去喝点。"可是他在喝水的时候,一不小心滑进河里了。
"啊!救命!救命!'蚂蚁叫喊着。
一只鸽子正呆在树上,听见呼救声,就扔给他一片树叶。"快爬到树叶上去。她说:"你会漂到岸上的。"
"谢谢你,鸽子。你真善良。"蚂蚁一边说一边向家跑,"你救了我的命,我会报答你的。再见!"
"再见!小心别掉进河里了。"鸽子说。
几天后,鸽子正在筑巢,一个人举着枪要打鸽子。蚂蚁看见了,迅速地跑过去,在那个人的腿上咬了一口。"啊呀!哎呀!"那个人疼得扔掉枪。鸽子听见了,连忙飞走了。那个人只好捡起枪,走了。
鸽子又飞回巢里。"谢谢你,我的小朋友。"鸽子说,"你救了我的.命。"
小蚂蚁可高兴了,因为他也帮助了鸽子。
寓意:有些朋友也许平时看似微不足道,但却有可能在我们身处困难的时候提供巨大的帮助。
Country Garden and Me
On the way from Panyu City to Shunde City and approaching the conjunction point of both cities, a big advertisement board of the infamous Country Garden will catch your eyes. And on the board, a lovely girl gently holds a little white pigeon.
She looks at everybody with a sweet smile. Who is this girl? Let me tell you later. Country Garden is located at the Beijao town, Shunde City of Guangdong Province. Ten years ago when my Dad and Mom took me as a baby to Guangzhou, it was a wasteland here. But what does this piece of wasteland look like nowadays? Country Garden has been developed and enlarged rapidly on the ground of this land, and a great number of high-quality houses and apartments have been built up within the garden. Over the past decade, other nine country gardens with various unique designs have been erasing around the great city of Guangzhou. The construction and management of several gardens have engaged the devoted contributions from my Dad and Mom.
Country Garden has grown up together with me, and I am one of the witnesses of its growth and development.
Father had a family of sons who were perpetually quarrelling among themselves. When he failed to heal their disputes by his exhortations, he determined to give them a practical illustration of the evils of disunion; and for this purpose he one day told them to bring him a bundle of sticks. When they had done so, he placed the faggot into the hands of each of them in succession, and ordered them to break it in pieces. They each tried with all their strength, and were not able to do it.
He next unclosed the faggot, and took the sticks separately, one by one, and again put them into their hands, on which they broke them easily. He then
addressed them in these words: "My sons, if you are of one mind, and unite to assist each other, you will be as this faggot, uninjured by all the attempts of your enemies; but if you are divided among yourselves, you will be broken as easily as these sticks."
在论证中,把两种事物(或意思)加以对比,或者是用另一种事物(或意思)来烘托某一种事物(或意思),就是对照式。
运用对照式,目的是通过两个方面的对照,突出说明其中一个方面的正确性,因此。写作中往往是对一个方面用墨多些,做为论述的重点,另一方面却起烘托、陪衬的作用。
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