五年级关于北京旅行的作文英语【一】
今年嘉兴是个暖冬，气温较高，没下雪也没结冰，所以妈妈就带着我去了北京感受北方的冬天。
我曾经听过一句古话：冰冻三尺非一日之寒。我一直不能完全理解这句话的意思，但是当我站在北京后海25厘米的冰面上的时候，我似乎感受到了这句话的意思。
我们戴上温暖的手套，穿上厚厚的羽绒服，套上暖和的鞋子，就出发了！到了后海，远远望去一群小朋友在冰面上欢快地玩耍，几缕阳光洒在冰面上，折射出耀眼的光芒。走近冰面，我看见有的人在冰面上骑车，有的人在滑冰，还有的人在玩电动小汽车。我的心里蠢蠢欲动了。
在冰面上的感觉可真好！我不禁感叹到。我在冰面上，摸一摸它冰面上有一些融化的水珠，冰上滑滑的。我又用冰锄去戳它，虽然有戳出几个小洞可还是不能把它戳破或者裂开，毕竟它也有25厘米厚。我远远望去一位4，5岁的小姑娘也在摆弄着那块冰，刹那间让我想起了五年级下册的一首古诗《稚子弄冰》。后来我找来了一辆冰上自行车来骑，一下子变得有趣了许多。我们快速飞奔在冰面上。我从没想过我还能在这么大的冰面上骑车，并且速度可以如此之快，我开心极了。我们还看见几位老大爷在寒冷的水中游泳，看的站在岸上的我都瑟瑟发抖呢。后来我跟冰场的管理员询问得知，需要一个月30天，不停地冰化了再结，每天结一层，才得到这厚厚的25厘米冰面，我们才能安全的在冰面上玩耍。
至此我懂得了：冰冻三尺非一日之寒的意思，也就是说冰冻三尺厚也不是一日就能形成的，它是需要日积月累而成功的。就像我们读书一样，学习得到好成绩也不是你一天两天的努力就可以的，它是需要你经过不停的努力得来的成就！
五年级关于北京旅行的作文英语【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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