Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
在日常生活或是工作学习中,大家都写过作文吧,作文是人们以书面形式表情达意的言语活动。那么,怎么去写作文呢?以下是小编精心整理的夜晚,我一人在家_作文,仅供参考,大家一起来看看吧。
一天晚上,我正在看电视,突然,妈妈急急忙忙得从厨房里走了出来,对我说:“儿子,刚刚我接到了单位上刚刚来了一个电话,要我现在去单位上加班,你一个人在家一晚上,好吗?”我听了妈妈说得话,心里有一万个不愿意,因为爸爸又出差去了,如果妈妈再一走,我不是就要一人在家吗?但一想到妈妈又必须去上班,就答应了妈妈说:“好,妈妈,你一定要回来啊!”妈妈听我答应了她后,便方心得上班去了。
“嗵!”妈妈走了,这时我还不害怕,开心得玩着,想:妈妈走了,我可以想好久睡就好久睡了,哈哈哈哈。10分钟后,我高兴得兴致全没了,因为这时8点半了,天也黑了,我害怕得把屋里得灯全部都打开了以后,我就没那么害怕了。不久后,灯突然全熄灭了,我又害怕了起来,于是我立即跑到了床上,害怕得用被子盖住了自己,不久后,我立刻意识到是停电了,于是我下了床,开始找蜡烛。我的.周围黑漆漆的,伸手不见五指,我就只有用手在周围乱摸,突然我摸到了一个长方形带圆柱体的东西,冷冷的,我以为是鬼,我又一个箭步冲到了床上,再次用被子盖住了全身,这是,我平时看的鬼故事和恐怖片都浮现在了我的脑海里,这令我更加害怕了,我全身在不停的颤抖,突然,我听到了门外有脚步声,那脚步声越来越进了。“咚咚咚”我听到这敲门声,这时,我的心脏提到了嗓子眼儿上,都快要跳出来了,所以我不敢去开门,不一会儿,我听到门开的声音,因为这是夏天,天气非常热,再加上我十分紧张,所以汗都把衣服打湿了,我想:我也是家里的一个小男子汉,所以我壮着胆子,去确认是不是真的有人进入了我的家里,我穿上拖鞋,一个箭步冲到了门前,“咦,没人?”我顿时长长得舒了一口气,我想,一定是隔壁有人在敲门,我也不害怕了,又开始接着找蜡烛了,这次,我又摸到了那个东西,我放开胆子摸,咦?怎么这东西像柜子啊,我打开了这个柜子,里面竟然放的是几根蜡烛,我欣喜的找到打火机点燃了蜡烛,顿时四周明亮了起来,我再也不害怕了。可是,我刚点燃了蜡烛,灯突然亮了,这下了我一跳,我十分高兴,但又很气愤,我气愤我辛辛苦苦找来的蜡烛竟然没派上用场。哎~~~
经过这件事后,我再也不害怕一个人在家了。
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