八年级语文写景作文评语【一】
那天，雨下得很大，我在老师家上素描班，看着窗外淅淅沥沥的雨丝，我已无心提起画笔，琢磨着该怎样回家，盼望着老天有眼，早些停雨……
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雨越下越大，丝毫没有欲停之意，玻璃窗上如瀑的雨水使窗外的一切变得那么模糊。
下课了，我急切地走下了楼，朦胧中，我看见了一个熟悉的身影，虽然隔了几米远，但我还是能闻到那股沁人的肥皂香。——是妈妈！我立刻向那股幽香冲去，“蹭”地跳上了妈妈骑过来的那辆自行车。听着自行车“吱嘎吱嘎”地唱着歌，闻着妈妈身上特有的`肥皂香，我已忘却了雨给我带来的烦恼。雨滴无情地在妈妈憔悴的脸上划过，而我却在自行车后座吮吸着那份幽香。在妈妈的呵护下，雨滴不曾在我身上滴落。
从前，我曾为妈妈的唠叨而烦恼，甚至当着面指责过她，而妈妈总是一笑而过，从未责怪过我。
借此机会，我想套用一句经典台词：
曾经有一声声唠叨缭绕在耳边，我没有去珍惜，等我知道错了的时候才后悔莫及……如果上天能够给我一个再来一次的机会，妈妈，我会对你说三个字“对不起”！
“滴水之恩，当涌泉相报”，更何况是自己的母亲呢？！母亲对你的关爱，你一辈子都还不清，但母亲却从来没有索取过任何回报，这样的爱难道不值得用生命去珍惜吗？！
评语：这篇叙事散文情感真挚，叙事条理。题目“难忘雨夜，难忘幽香”，富有诗意。文章主体部分叙述了妈妈雨夜骑自行车接我回家的事件，字里行间充满了对妈妈的爱。感情在结尾处得到了升华：“滴水之恩，当涌泉相报”，更何况是自己的母亲呢？！母亲对你的关爱，你一辈子都还不清，但母亲却从来没有索取过任何回报，这样的爱难道不值得用生命去珍惜吗？！
八年级语文写景作文评语【二】
昨天，老师带我们在音乐厅看了一部电影名叫《忠犬八公》，这个故事说的是教授在火车站捡到了一只狗，并取名为小八，日子一天过去了，教授越来越老了，而八公也越长越大，还养成了一个好习惯，每天早上去火车站送教授上班，晚上去火车站把教授接回家。一年如一日，一共过了25年。但是有一天，教授去一个很远的地方演讲，在演讲的时候，教授倒下了，再也回不来了。而八公却一次一次的在那个接送他主人的火车站门口等，一天如一年，一年复一年。就这样，八公在火车站前面的台子上等了9年，就连八公的晚年也是在那里度过的，八公有过失望，有过伤心。但一直期望它的主人会出现。一直到临终，也未能等到它的主人，抱撼而终。八公的这种忠诚的精神被所有的人赞美。
我们应该学习八公那种坚持不懈的精神。还有忠诚。看后令到我很是感动!
八年级语文写景作文评语【三】
昨天，跟妈妈一起看了《忠犬八公》的电影，看了以后，觉得是一部很平淡的电影，一位教授、一只八公狗，还有很长时间的火车站的场景，但是当我看到电影的高潮的时候，从教授不幸死后的每一分每一秒，小八都在火车站等着教授，我也从那时候起，泪流满面，妈妈也哭了起来，我们顿时控制不了自己的眼泪。
小八的坚持，小八的\'忠诚……这不禁让我想起了小八在想什么，九年，整整九年，小八都在等待，没有一刻休息过的，除了晚上睡觉，早上继续道火车站等着。我希望小八的每一天都是幸福的，小八每天希望教授的出现，可是最后又是失望，一天又一天，一年又一年，整整九年，最后的场景是小八变得十分苍老，也许这就是小八生命的最后一天了，教授夫人坐着火车回来了，看到小八还在等待，简直无法相信，就对它说：“我和你一起等下一班车，好吗?”这个时候妈妈和我又一次控制不住的情绪，大哭了起来。最后，小八慢慢地合上了眼睛，它在梦中肯定等到了它的主人，在回忆美好的生活。
多么忠诚的秋田犬，狗是人类的朋友，我们应该好好对待它们。希望人类不要暴力对待狗，因为它是我们忠实的朋友!
八年级语文写景作文评语【四】
107分钟的电影，前半部分看的感觉比较慢，不知道故事如何发展，等到上野秀三郎这个伟大的农学教授死后，故事的最精彩部分才慢慢展开，然后我也跟着镜头，不停歇的留下眼泪。的确，狗有狗的权利和感情，默默的在火车站不停的等待着一个不可以归来的人是那么的痛苦和遗憾。或许人类遇到这种事情，还有人可以诉说和开脱，可可怜的\'狗儿呢，阿八，却只有一次次失望。
感动于一个画面是：火车站旁的卖饭的夫妇，对阿八的特殊感情，特别是因为一个客人说狗的一些亵渎的话的时候，男老板和客人打起来的时候，那个片段是如此的揪心。
突然想到了小时候经常陪我们去上学的“摆摆”，那是我们家人倾注最多情感的一条狗，故事的结局也是有点伤感，以至于我们家人不愿意再给狗取名字，也不愿意倾注更多的感情，在喂养的动物身上。
世上的万事万物都是有感情和道德的，关键是养育他的主人给与了他怎么的行动和支持。
一部感人的电影，总是那么的值得回味和感动。
八年级语文写景作文评语【五】
The story is rearranged by a real story. Hatchi is an unusual dog which belongs to akita. The real Hatchi, the dog in this story, was born in Odatr Japan in 1923. As soon as his master Dr. Eisabour Uero, a professor at Tokyo University, died in May 1925. Hatchi returned to the Shibuya train station the next day after professor died and for the next nine years to wait, until Hatchi himself died.
In the movie Hatchi crossed an ocean and thousands of miles of transportation by train, and then he met Parker (the main actor in a snowy day. Because it was snowing and the dog, Hatchi, was lost. Parker took Hatchi back to his home, and then kept it. Parker treated it very well and so did Hatchi. When Hatchi had grown up, he fetched parker to work everyday.
All these years they played together, bathed together, slept together and Parker gave Hatchi full-body massage everyday. They just look like a couple. Parker looks happy because Hatchi is happy, and Hatchi’s happy due to Parker being happy. But Hatchi never fetched ball for anyone even Parker, so he went to his Japanese friend, Ken, for help. Ken told Parker that the akita will never get the ball unless there are some special reasons. However, Parker didn’t notice what Ken told him. In the morning of last day of Parker’s life, Hatchi felt that something bad would happen to Parker, and it tried his best to stop Parker going to work, and Hatchi fetched ball for Parker to tell him to stop. But it was pity that Parker only paid all his attention to Hatchi’s first fetching and ignored the special reasons of fetching. He said “Come on boy, I have to go to work or I’ll be late. See you at 5. Stay! Go home! Go on.” Finally, the old professor, Parker, hadn’t come back as he said, and he will never come back. He broke the engagement he made with Hatchi. He left everybody on the earth up to heaven. As the old professor’s friends and relatives nobody could accepted the fact that Parker has dead. As the result, professor’s wife, Kate, escaped all the staff which will let she recall the memories about Parker, so she sold the house where they used to live and was away from the small town. Meanwhile she sent Hatchi to her daughter, but Hatchi always ran out of her house, and try its best to back to station, because Hatchi and professor had a deal to meet each other. He’s so firmly persisted on the engagement that Parker’s daughter, Andy, had to gave up and let it go. While, have you ever noticed the detail that how unwilling Hatchi was when it left professor, because Hatchi can’t apart with Andy, too. But he missed Parker too much, he had to Andy and his warm home.
Then Hatchi spent ten years waiting for his master, his only friend coming back. Ten years time, maybe it is just one-tenth of a human life, but for a dog that means its whole life. During those years Hatchi hadn’t exact place to live, just come and go to the train station everyday at the same place and time.
Have you even considered why Hatchi spent all his life just for waiting? After a long time consideration, I find the answer in the end. The only reason is that Hatchi have nothing but his master. The happiest time of Hatchi is the time with Parker; the most enjoyable time of Hatchi is the time fetching Parker to work.
Just one year after Parker’s death, Ken came to the station and had a look at Hatchi. He felt as sorrow as Hatchi. He tried his best to persuade Hatchi to leave because Parker’s never coming back. But he didn’t succeed, and said “If Hatchiko wants to wait, then Hatchiko should wait. You want to wait for him, didn’t you? Then, you most have a long life.”
Then ten years past, Hatchi became a dirty and rather old guy. Over these years, everything had changed but Hatchi’s endless waiting and loyalty had never changed. One day Parker’s wife backed to the small town and saw Hatchi was still stand there waiting. She cried and said “You, old thing, you are still waiting, let me wait for the next train together with you please.” Hearing these tough words and seeing the loyal dog I cried sadly.
This is Hatchi’s whole life. He almost spent all his life only doing one thing—waiting for its only friend Parker, waiting to complete the uncompleted engagement.
Hatchi’s story showed how great the power of loyalty and love is with all his life. He tell us what the real loyalty and true love is. Because of the real loyalty and true love Hatchi spent all his life waiting; because of the real loyalty and true love Hatchi sacrisficed all his youth just for waiting; because of the real loyalty and true love Hatchi abandon the warm house of Parker’s daughter. I think that is the real loyalty, the ture love. However, in our human life, how many of us can be as loyalty as an animal; how many person can be loyal to another one for even ten years? I think nobody can.
In the end of the film Parker’s grandson asked Kate “Where did grandpa found Hatchi?” She answered “I suppose that Hatchi happened to found your grandpa.” I believe that as soon as Parker and Hatchi happened to meet, Hatchi had already found its own destination, and then the loyalty and love was built.
Loyalty isn’t mean to be that I love you and it won’t change in the next ten thousand years; loyalty isn’t mean to be that I will wait for you for the rest of my life; loyalty isn’t mean to be that I love you beyond myself. However, loyalty is a sense of responsibility; loyalty is a sense of selfness, loyalty is a sense of concern.
The word “loyalty” is consisting of 7 letters, and I think each letter stand for different meanings:
L —— Life
O —— Obligation
Y —— Yes
A —— Attention
L —— Love
T —— Total
Y —— You
Actually, to be loyal to someone is easy is easy to say, but hard to do. To be loyal, you should never forget anyone that you loved.
八年级语文写景作文评语【六】
今天，是环球国际英语组织夏令营的第四天。晚上，老师给我们看了一场电影——《忠犬八公》。讲的是：
主人公帕克在车站捡到一只毛色金黄的小秋田犬，并把它带回了家。帕克的妻子十分不满意，总是让帕克送走小狗，但似乎是命中注定，这只小狗竟没人要。于是，妻子勉强同意了。帕克用小狗项圈上的数字给它起名“小八”。
一天，帕克和女儿正在院子里给小八练习捡球，妻子趁机打电话给朋友，问她要不要一只小狗，这时，妻子看到帕克脸上那可爱的笑容，突然对朋友说狗已经被送走了，就挂掉了。从此，小八就留了下来。
这几天，小八都在车站等主人帕克下班。有一天，帕克正要去上班，不八突然有点不祥的预感，从来不捡球的它叼起飞奔到帕克身边，不让他去上班。可帕克还是去了果然，帕克心脏病突发，死了。但小八依然坚信他会回来，依然每天在车站门口等他……
看到这里，我的眼泪不禁涌出，是小八对帕克的爱感动了我!看完这部电影后，我想，其实动物有时比人更懂爱，只是动物不善于表达爱!
八年级语文写景作文评语【七】
107分钟的电影，前半部分看的感觉比较慢，不知道故事如何发展，等到上野秀三郎这个伟大的农学教授死后，故事的最精彩部分才慢慢展开，然后我也跟着镜头，不停歇的留下眼泪。的确，狗有狗的权利和感情，默默的在火车站不停的`等待着一个不可以归来的人是那么的痛苦和遗憾。或许人类遇到这种事情，还有人可以诉说和开脱，可可怜的狗儿呢，阿八，却只有一次次失望。
感动于一个画面是：火车站旁的卖饭的夫妇，对阿八的特殊感情特别是因为一个客人说狗的一些亵渎的话的时候，男老板和客人打起来的时候，那个片段是如此的揪心。
突然想到了小时候经常陪我们去上学的“摆摆”，那是我们家人倾注最多情感的一条狗，故事的结局也是有点伤感，以至于我们家人不愿意再给狗取名字，也不愿意倾注更多的感情，在喂养的动物身上。
世上的万事万物都是有感情和道德的，关键是养育他的主人给与了他怎么的行动和支持。
一部感人的电影，总是那么的值得回味和感动。
