暑假,我有幸游览了天下第一山——黄山。
素闻那千峰隽秀、万壑藏云的黄山,不仅以奇松、怪石、云海、温泉着称于世,还以那七十二峰、二十四溪、十六泉、飞瀑、岩洞等胜景而吸引着游人。许多美妙动人的神话传说,又给黄山染上了一层神秘的色彩。
下了汽车,就见逍遥溪水清澈见底,两岸青松翠竹,树影婆娑。仰首望去,峰峦耸立云天。听人说倘遇宿雨初晴的日子,就能看到云雾像美丽的轻纱,时而填满千峰万壑,成为海天一色;时而推出万座峰峦,显得苍浑深远。可惜我们未能得见。穿过观鱼亭,登上桃花峰,一处飞瀑从峰上的洞口飞溅而下,好像珠帘垂挂在洞前,因而得名“水帘洞”。我们拾级而上,享受着沿途如画的奇景。第一个小憩的地方是慈光阁,阁的四周群山环抱,茂林修竹掩映,环境幽静清凉。路过立马桥,绝壁上刻着几丈高的大字:“立马空东海,登高望太平”,显得刚劲有力。在桥上可看到青鸾峰腰上的冰川擦痕,抬头还能遥望天都峰上的“鲫鱼背”。
走了一路,又累又渴,就在天门坎小憩一会儿。这里山峦奇秀,怪石嶙峋,“金鸡叫天门”、“天鹅孵蛋”、“松鼠跳天都”、“五老上天间”等怪石,个个栩栩如生,惟妙惟肖。特别是天梯旁亭亭玉立的石人,像一古装仕女。她正面有块矮小的岩石,像一位跪地下拜的童子。啊!那是闻名于世的“童子拜观音’。还有那些在波澜壮阔的峰海中正争相崛起的怪石,好似无数明珠撒落其间,使黄山越发显得绮丽动人。这些奇石千姿百态,逼真有趣,似人,似海,似禽,似兽,简直是立体的画,无声的诗。有的气势磅礴如“鳌鱼戏海”;有的小巧玲珑如“孔雀开屏”。过了“天上玉屏”,就见一巨石横架于两山间,白云浮腾,称之“天桥”。过了天桥就是天都峰最惊险的一段——“鲫鱼背”,长十几米,宽不到一米,两边悬崖绝壁,曾有:飞鸟难落脚,猿猴愁攀登”的佳句作证。一上“鲫鱼背”,虽有铁索保护,我们还是小心谨慎,惟恐一失足成千古恨。这时我们头顶蓝天,脚踏烟云,俯瞰群峰,有的矗立天际,有的沉入“海底”,脚下云雾像潺潺的溪水,欢快的鹰雀在眼底飞翔。登上天都峰顶,看到“登峰造极”的石刻。不错,极目远眺,云山相接,江河一线;俯视群山,千峰秀色,松涛呼啸,如惊涛拍岸,顿觉心旷神怡,其乐无穷。
游罢天都峰,经原路返回峰脚,穿“一线天”,过“蓬莱三岛”。在玉屏峰上有一棵破石而长、寿逾千年的古松,仿佛在向我们挥手致意,这就是驰名中外的迎客松,它是黄山的象征。松多是黄山的特点,素有“无峰非石,无石不松”之美称。黄山松针叶短粗而稠密,顶如平削,干曲枝虬,常年苍翠。它们或立,或卧,或仰,或俯,百态千姿,引人入胜。那陪客松、送客松、望客松、探海松等都神奇而秀丽。特别是在北海散花坞中,有一石峰矗立于松涛中,像一枝粗壮的毛笔,其“笔端”有一奇松从石缝中盘旋而出,宛如一簇盛开的鲜花,所以称为“梦笔生花”。目睹此景,不少游人连声赞道:“妙!妙!妙!”黄山松不仅有奇特的形态,壮观的气势,还有更令人叹服的坚忍不拔的性格:不怕风霜,不畏严寒,郁郁苍苍,四季常青,而且只需少量沙土,就能顽强生长,盘根错节,青春焕发,多姿多彩!这既颇具哲理,又那么富有诗情画意。
离开文殊院,告别迎客松,穿过百步云梯,来到“云海”。一股山风吹来,云雾时而消失,时而聚拢,时而向左,时而向右,时而回旋,时而舒展,变幻无穷,绰约多姿,恰似身缠丝绢半遮面、婀娜多姿惹人爱的少女,而自己也仿佛置身于云雾缭绕的“仙境”中。俯首望去,眼前却又是另一番景象:云铺深壑,絮掩危岩,汪洋无际,真是“妙在非海,而确又似海”了。那远近大小的峰峦,隐现于云雾之中,似海中“岛屿”。那虚无缥缈的云雾,随气流快慢缓急,忽儿平静,忽儿荡漾,拍打着无数暗礁岛屿,使人如置身于“祥云缥缈绕灵鹫,霞光喷射冲斗牛;奇花异草馨瑶池,龙吟凤舞度千秋”的幻境之中。
难怪陈毅元帅在饱览黄山之后,赞不绝口,把黄山推为“天下第一山”哩!
1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ……
2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus.
3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.
4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ……
5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……
6) Never in our history has the idea that …… been so popular.
7) Faced with ……, quite a few people argue that ……
8) According to a recent survey, ……
9) With the rapid development of ……,
10 When it comes to…, (当说到…
二、列举观点
I.Some people think/believe that…,
Other argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true
1.Obviously television has both advantages and disadvantages.
2.Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages.
3.Compared with cars,bikes have their advantages and disadvantages. ,
4.Although computers bring people a lot of convenience,they have many disadvantages.
5....has many advantages.For example,…
6. However,just as every coin has two sides,…has it’s disadvantages.
II…play(san important role/part in……
1.Computers play an important role in science and technology.
2.Computers play a more and more important role in our life.
3.Computers play an increasingly important role in our studies.
4.Education plays an important part in developing our mind.
5.Addiction to alcohol and drugs plays a role in homelessness.
6.Advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life.
7.In the past,letters played a decisive role in long-distance communication.But now,telephone,email,and fax have taken their place.
III.With the development of…
1.With the development of our economy,many Chinese families can afford a car.
2.With the development of our economy and society,pollution is more and more serious.
3.With the rapid development of Science and technology,people can get a college degree by taking online-courses at home.
4.With the current social and technological developments,employees with more knowledge and higher academic degrees are needed.
5.With the rapid increase of China's population,housing problem is becoming more and more serious.
6.With more and more women entering the society,people's attitude towards women is changing.
7.With the deepening of Chinese reform and opening up, an increasing number of (a growing number of,a significant number of
families can afford a car.
三、陈述自己观点
There is probably some truth in both arguments/statements,but…
四、批驳
1)It is true that ……, but one vital point is being left out.
2) There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact.
3) Some people say ……, but it does not hold water.
4) Many of us have been under the illusion that……
5) A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.
6) It makes no sense to argue for ……
7) Too much stress placed on …… may lead to ……
8) Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that ……
9) Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that ……
10) No one can deny the fact that ……
11) The idea is hardly supported by facts.
12) Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ……
13) Recent studies indicate that ……
14) There is sufficient evidence to show that ……
15) According to statistics proved by ……, it can be seen that ……
五、结尾句型 :
英语议论文多以简要总结全文或对所讨沦的问题提出解决办法来结尾。总结全文时除常用到in one/a word,generally speaking,to conclude等外,没有固定模式。提出解决办法时却常使用下一句型:
1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ……
2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ……
3). We should take measures to control the rapidly increasing world population.
4). We’d better take effective measures to prevent students from cheating on exams.
5). The government decided to take strong measures against drug abuse.
6). Urgent measures should be taken to prevent terrorists from carrying out further attacks.
7) It is necessary that steps should be taken to ……
8) In conclusion, it is imperative that ……
9) There is no easy method, but ……might be of some help.
10) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ……
11) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.
12) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.
13) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ……
14) Taking all these into account, we ……
15) Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear……
六、其他句型
I、There be结构
There+be+主语+(修饰成分,表示客观存在的\'人或事物。 There must be a lot of fuel in the tank.
There remains nothing more to be done.
There is no point in talking about it again.
There is something you don't know.
There is not enough time to do the work. .
II、名词化结构
名词化结构用以表明抽象思维的逻辑性和概念化,从而使语体更加正式、更加具有书面语风格。
1.由of连接主谓关系
That the earth revolves around the sun causes the changes of the seasons.
名词化:The revolution of the earth around the sun causes the changes of the seasons.
2.由0f连接动宾关系
One of the most important natural phenomena is that energy is transmitted from one point to another in waves.
名词化:One of the most important natural phenomena is the transmission of energy from one point to another in waves.
3.用of连接含有by的短语,把简单句转换成名词短语
My favourite swimmer is Sun Yang.He swims very fast.He took part in the last Olympic Games.He is my hero.
He is 21 years oid.He is very tall.He is 198cm tall.He is cute.I love him.
He is good at swingming very much, He has had all-round success in his study olypic games.
Dear Sir/Madam:
As a teacher at xxxx school, I am writing to provide you a recommendation for Miss/Mr.xx so as to help you assess her/his application for acceptance into your program and consideration for financial aid.
Considered a promising student with originality and sophistication in her/his thinking, (she/he was asked, in the spring semester of 2008, to develop a subsystem of a DBMS project for her B.S.thesis, for which I was the chief leader. T
his subsystem was designed to manage the information of materials in NO.1 Foundry Plant of Dongfeng Auto Works.To do the job, she/he read many books about software engineering and took some courses in Database Principles and Management. Keenly aware that the design of a DBMS decides the quality of the whole software system, she did her/his utmost from the beginning of the project.(参加过什么活动. From analyzing users requirements to designing the whole system, from the detailed designing to the final programming, she was very level-headed and full of innovation every step of the way. Taking full advantage of her ability and creativity, she firmly focused herself on her objective and gnored all distractions. She successfully reached her goal. In the final software testing, only a few bugs were found in her subsystem. My appreciation of her talelent was thus confirmed.Miss is a very personable woman, friendly and helpful, and she has always been a team player in her work.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could give her application for candidacy to your Ph.D. program favorable consideration. Should you need any further information in your deliberation, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Sincerely xxxx
一进屋,我就闻到一股香味,啊,原来外公外婆在我们来之前就已经准备好了饭菜等着我们。等外公外婆把菜端上桌,哇啊!一桌子荤菜和蔬菜,有鱼、鸡、肉、鸭……我馋得直流口水,我们洗好脸洗好手、换好拖鞋,就开始大吃起来。
下午,我们玩搅和泥巴浆的游戏,首先我们三个人把外婆后院里的南瓜叶子摘几片并撕碎放在瓢里,放点清水,拿起铲子挖点土放在每个人的瓢里,然后用树枝在瓢里搅和,边搅和边说:我们得把泥巴搅和得特别浓,这样就可以做“药”了。就这样不知不觉一天就过去了。
第二天一早,瑄瑄和他爸爸到集市上去了,回来给我们每人带了一个气球、一只小鸭和一只小鸡。我对两个妹妹说:我们给它们取个名字吧。我的小鸭叫莉莉、小鸡叫饼干;瑄瑄的小鸭叫花花、小鸡叫彩虹;涵涵的小鸭叫乐乐、小鸡叫蝴蝶。我们一整天都在陪小鸡小鸭玩。小鸡非常调皮,总是跑来跑去,我们想把它们追回家,可是很难办到。相比较小鸭比较乖巧,我们喜欢抱抱小鸭,摸摸小鸭,天气热了我们还把它们洗洗澡呢,再在太阳底下晒晒,然后把它们带到阴凉的地方乘凉,训练他们走路。就这样反反复复地洗澡训练,大家都觉得很开心。可是到了第三天,不幸的事情发生了,瑄瑄的.小鸭花花突然死了,瑄瑄用餐巾纸把它包裹起来,把它埋葬在场边,做成了一个小小的坟墓,上面***一棵小树枝,我们在纸上写上祝福的话,用石头压在坟墓上。希望花花升上天堂,过上好日子。
后来,瑄瑄把涵涵的小鸭抢走了,并且给它换了一个名字叫毛毛,涵涵哭了,我们怎么哄也哄不好,弄得大人很好笑。结果在大人的教导下我们三人都集聚在一起玩小鸡小鸭才算平息风波。
玩了几天后,我们随着车子依依不舍地离开了外婆家。一路上脑海里总是在不断地回味着这几天的快乐时光。这真是一次难忘的旅行啊!
My favorite sports star------ Sun Yang
Born on December 1, 1991 in Zhejiang Province, Sun Yang is very tall and the height is 1.99 meters. He was from a sports family.
He won the China's first gold medal in men's swimming game. He worked a miracle. Sun Yang is not only gifted but also diligent. He keeps training and has tenacious willpower; these are worth learning by other people. Sun Yang is a new frontrunner at the sports worlds.
Sun Yang is very popular with the young. He is adorable, charming, childlike and cool. He is kind and has the vigor of youth, and he is a little shy. But Sun Yang is easy-going, always with a smile on his face when he faces our. He sings well and sounds beautiful. To my surprise, he likes dolls very much.
Sun Yang sets us a good example, and Sun Yang has set a new world record of swimming, of which the whole country’s people are proud
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