我每天用二元五角,把剩下的存人小盒里。有一天, 老师对我们说:“同学们,今年新洲县要办一所希望小学,我们学校组织了‘手拉手,献爱心’活动,希望大家积极捐钱。”我想:“就捐五角,应付算了。”便只捐了五角。放学了,我兴高采烈地跑回家,把这件事告诉了妈妈。妈妈说:“你是一个少先队员,应该帮助失学儿童重返校园。”我说:“我没有那么多钱。”“你不是每天都在存钱吗?”我听了很惭愧,便急忙打开小盒子,一数里面的钱,正好十元,我一口气跑到了学校,把钱交给了老师,老师还表扬我是个好学生。
几个月后,,爸爸对我说:“‘这几天,展览馆举行图书展卖会,你去看看吧!”爸爸还没说完,我便风风火火地跑向了展览馆,我进去一看,啊!这儿的书真多,有《米老鼠和唐老鸭》,有《故事大王》,还有四大名著等等,书太多了,我看得眼花缭乱,真想把这些全买回去,可我只带了十元,我便买了七本书。看着看着,我看见了《动脑筋爷爷》这本书,里面全是动脑筋的题目,我一看价钱,呀!:;:套要3 8元,吓我一跳,这么贵呀!我只能拿着已买了的书往家里跑。回到家,,我已气喘吁吁了,爸爸问我:一‘你哪儿来的钱买书?”我做了个鬼脸,说:“天机不可泄露。”爸爸一本正经地说:“雷颖同志,到底是怎么一回事?”我笑笑说:“同志’这个词我可担当不起,好吧!我告诉你。”我把事情一五一十地告诉了爸爸,原来是这样:我把每天存的钱拿出来买龄幫。我还把想买《动脑筋爷爷》这本书也说了出来。爸枣丫里拿出40元钱,递给了我,对我说:“去买吧,就算给你的.一点奖品。”我说:“我可不要那么多钱,我只要20元。”说完,便把另外20元还给了爸爸, 又在小盒里拿了1 8元,对爸爸说:“我自己有钱,是我自己的零花钱!”
;我三步并作两步地跑向展览馆,买了那本书。回家的路上,我边走边想:“零花钱啊!你不仅让我学了知识,还让我养成了存钱的好习惯。
例如:“太阳离我们有1.5亿公里远。到太阳上去,如果步行,日夜不停地走,差不多要走3500年;就是坐飞机,也要飞二十几年。”这些具体的数字,说明了太阳离我们很远这一特点。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
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