冬天来了,雪花像洁白的蝴蝶在天空中翩翩起舞。地面上覆盖着像轻轻的软软的羊毛毯子似的雪儿,闪烁着银亮的光芒。伴随着欢快的旋律,我就出生在这个寒冷的冬天。出生在这个又温暖又幸福家庭!
在我九岁生日的那一天,我请了同学们参加我的生日晚会,把自己最心爱的“百宝箱”放在客厅的桌子上,里面有最可怕的蜘蛛精,有最好听的音乐盒,还有我最爱的一只卡通钢笔......屋顶上的悬挂着五彩缤纷.各式各样的气球,门上有五颜六色的彩纸,我头上还戴了一个皇冠,像宫殿里的公主,桌子上放着一个精美的水果蛋糕,看起来很好吃,我的口水恨不得都流了出来。还有许许多多的零食,如:旺旺牛奶,还有红红的大苹果,黄澄澄的水晶梨......
准备好后,我蹦蹦跳跳地拿着一个棒棒糖来到阳台上,水灵灵的天空蓝得发亮,连羽毛大的一片云彩也找不到,太阳冉冉生起,于是空中金光万道,大地金碧辉煌。暖洋洋的阳光洒向大地,小草摆动着自己那柔软的身体,好像在为我祝福生日快乐,万事如意。梅花儿也展开了她那美丽的笑容,好像在对着我微笑。一阵微风吹来,花儿都散发出了迷人的香味。我感到今天的景色特别的.美!
“叮......叮......叮”电话响了,我拿起电话一听:
“我今天要去补课,不能来了”
“我要去看病,也不能来了”
“那好吧!”
我无奈地放下手中的电话,
我一屁股坐在地上,情不自禁的大哭了起来。妈妈微笑的抱起我,一只手轻轻地抚摸着我的头,一只手替我擦干眼泪:“同学们没来,他们一定有自己的理由,我会陪伴着你,不要伤心。”
“叮......咚......”
“快去开门吧!”
我慢吞吞地打开门一看。
“生——日——快——乐!”
“我们要给你一个大惊喜!”
我高兴地跳了起来。嘴巴里像被塞了一个苹果一样,久久地合不拢嘴。
礼物代表着长辈的关爱,礼物寄托着父母的关怀,礼物凝聚着朋友的祝福。
记得我生日那天早上,我兴奋地从床上跳下来。急忙让妈妈给我生日礼物,我都没有吃早饭,在外面等着妈妈。我们去沈阳的玩具城。里面的玩具可真多啊!让人目不暇接,有变形金刚、小汽车、遥控飞机……我最喜欢的是滑板,其他的什么也没有看就直接奔买滑板的地方去了。滑板的种类也很多,有大的、小的、两个轮的、四个轮的,有红的、绿的、橘黄的、黑的、棕色的……我左挑挑、右选选,挑的我眼花缭乱的。让我拿不定主意,最后我和妈妈商量了一下,说“橘黄色的我喜欢,我可以买那个吗?”妈妈笑着说“今天你是小寿星,你喜欢哪个颜的色的,就选哪个吧!”小小的滑板不起眼,但是它可不是那么好学的啊。滑板的中间有一个轴,下面有两个轮,如果掌握不好平衡,就站不稳摔跤。我对我的滑板爱不释手,我对妈妈讲我一定要学会滑板。从此,每天一有空,它就会陪在我身边。
直到今天,我的滑板还在陪着我,我在爸爸妈妈的精心照顾下,茁长成长。我的它,也在我的关心下完好无损。我很欣慰!我很喜欢我的滑板,我更喜欢我的家人,更爱爸爸妈妈!
每个人都盼望着自己的生日,因为生日那天可以得到很多礼物,还可以吃大蛋糕,而且那天怎么闹也不会得到惩罚,这就是所有小孩盼望过生日的理由。
还记得我八岁时的生日,我被唧唧喳喳的小鸟吵醒。我一抬头,我看到柜子上放着一块发光的东西,我揉了揉朦胧的睡眼,仔细一看,是一块金灿灿的手表。我心想柜子上怎么有一块手表呢?这时,爸爸妈妈进来了,大声的喊;“生日快乐!”我恍然大悟,原来,今天是我的生日啊!妈妈说:“这块手表送给你做生日礼物,快带上看看。”我连忙把手表盒打开,把手表带到手腕上,左看右看,感觉这块手表无比的漂亮,我搂了妈妈一下,向她表示感谢。知道妈妈送我这块手表是要我珍惜时间,珍惜生命,让我知道时间不可倒流。我以后一定珍惜时间,好好学习。
这是我的一个最难忘的生日,它让我感受到父母对我的期望和爱。
今年的生日,我本想和同学到外面去聚一聚,又怕妈妈独自一人在家会感到孤独。所以决定留在家里,跟妈妈一起过生日。
早晨醒来,以为妈妈把一切都准备好啦,但餐桌上一样食品都没有,连妈妈也不见了。我不禁失望了:早知如此,还不如和同学一起去外面热闹热闹,省得自己冷清清地呆在家里。我趴在沙发上,无聊地看着电视,心中不由得埋怨起妈妈来:我的老妈唷,你到底干嘛去了?怎么连女儿的生日都给忘了?看你回来怎么说!
直到中午,也不见妈妈的影子,于是,我无心吃饭,又看起了电视。时间一点点地过去,我又不免为妈妈担起心来:有什么事情要这么多的时间去处理?会不会……
我想吃点东西,再出去找妈妈。走进厨房时,眼前一亮,发现餐桌上有一张便条,上面写着:女儿,妈妈知道今天是你的生日,你不是说过,要找几个同学来聚一聚吗?如果妈妈夹在你们中间,怕你们受拘束,放不开,玩得不开心,所以妈妈一早就出去了。妈妈事先不告诉你,是为了让你一个意外的\'惊喜。哦,对了,蛋糕放在柜子里,还有一些食物放在冰箱里,吃时记得热一热,祝你生日快乐!
读着读着,我热泪盈眶……
不行!外面正下着雨,我得去找妈妈!我刚出门,就碰上了淋得落汤鸡似的妈妈。她笑盈盈地问我:“玩得开心吧?大家都走了吧?我回来得正是时候。”我忙拿了毛巾,替妈妈擦起脸来,又递上了一杯妈妈最爱喝的蜜糖水,还找出妈妈的替换衣服,让妈妈洗个澡。
晚上,我和妈妈一起分享了美味的蛋糕。
我永远不会忘记这个生日,永远!
这时,李小明看见一群人围着在说话,便蹦蹦跳跳地走了过去。一听,李小明伤心极了,因为他没有过过生日。他的眼泪在眼眶里打转。于是,他握着自己的小手,不让眼泪落下来。
李小明悄悄地回到自己的座位上,盯着窗外,心想:明天就是我的生日了,要是爸爸妈妈能回来跟我一起过生日就好了。
小华知道李小明的爸爸妈妈在外地工作。小华想让全班同学给他庆祝生日。小华就告诉他的同桌小兰,并和她一起商量跟全班同学一起为李小明庆祝生日。
李小明生日那天,全班同学为李小明表演唱歌、跳舞。有的还准备了礼物,还有的一起为李小明买了一个又大又漂亮的蛋糕。李小明开心极了说:“谢谢你们,这是我最难忘的生日。”
以前,我过生日,爸爸妈妈总给我准备许多丰盛的生日晚餐,妈妈却从没过过一次生日。
今天,是一个月的月底,我妈妈是个会计,又要到单位分工资。于是,我拿出我抽屉里的一大堆彩纸,剪了一束玫瑰花,用丝带捆在一起,又做了一张生日贺卡插在那束鲜花的缝隙里。
平常我过生日,妈妈总给我做面条。今天,我从冰箱里找到妈妈买的面条,做了一碗我发明的“豆角长寿面”。此时,我已大汗淋漓,身体也感觉筋疲力尽了,真想上床睡一觉。可是,为妈妈过一个愉快的生日,是我的最大心愿啊。
“铛、铛……”时钟敲了六下,六点了,妈妈该回家来了。“咔嚓”一声,门开了,我飞快地藏起来。妈妈看见餐桌上放着一束鲜花、一张贺卡、一碗面条、一双筷子,妈妈马上明白了一切,我也急忙跑到妈妈面前,对妈妈说:“祝您生日快乐!”
妈妈的泪水在眼眶里打转,对我说:“孩子,你真是长大了!”
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
今天是姐姐的生日,我非常开心,因为我非常喜欢姐姐。我快速的写完作业,爸爸,妈妈带着我和姐姐开车出发去餐厅。在路上,我看到沿途的风景异常美丽,到了餐厅里面,桌上已经摆好了各种各样的好吃的。
哇!简直太让我吃惊了。姐姐的蛋糕非常漂亮,像城堡一样,上面是一个大大的圆,像水晶球一样,下面是大蛋糕,感觉像黄金一样的装饰品其实是巧克力。等家人全到齐了,妈妈点燃了蜡烛,然后关上灯。我们大家一起为姐姐唱起了生日歌,美妙的歌声传遍了整个餐厅,我们纷纷对姐姐说了祝福的话。然后姐姐许了愿,吹灭了蜡烛,姐姐非常快乐,微笑浮上脸颊。开始切蛋糕,妈妈给每人都切了一块,真是人间美味呀,我们开心地吃起蛋糕来,在一片欢声笑语中,我们都把自己的心爱礼物送给了姐姐,不知不觉中,天色渐渐暗了,然后开开心心地回了家。
生日虽然结束了,但我希望姐姐每天都开开心心!
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