一封封请战书,一枚枚红手印,写满了不畏生死,勇往直前的热血,它是一代人的“出师表”,它是一代人的“生死决”。
疫情当头,一批批医务人员请缨出战,有:“我是党员,我先上”的先锋同志,有:“敬佑生命,救死扶伤”的白衣天使,有:“若有战,召必回”的解放军军人,等等。他们是伟大的,他们展现了华夏儿女的拼搏精神,他们突显了炎黄子孙的责任担当。疫情当头,我们同舟共济,共克时艰。
大爱无疆,国士无双,84岁高龄的钟南山院士,73岁高龄的李兰娟院士,他们本该享受安逸,却再次选择挂帅出征。他们的实事求是,他们的敢医敢言,有他们,我们更安心。他们才是我们该要追逐的“明星”。
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
严重的疫情牵动着全国人民的心,这个寒假注定过得不安稳。原本公路上奔流不息的车辆,现如今仿佛消失了一样,原本热热闹闹的公园和广场也变得冷冷清清,原本可以和亲戚朋友一起聚会欢度春节,而现在只能呆在家里“望门兴叹”....
而造成这一切的罪魁祸首,就是新型冠状病毒感染的肺炎。
这种病毒潜伏期最长14天,以飞沫和接触传播为主,被传染的可能性极大。在重大疫情面前,最先挺身而出的就是我们的白衣天使,他们在这场没有硝烟的战争中为患者筑起生命防护之堤,让大家仿佛看到寒冬里的一缕阳光,洒在每个人的身上,给我们带来无限的温暖和希望。白衣天使们恪尽职守、临危不惧,穿梭在生死之间,用自己的生命挽救他人的生命。
在这个战场上,还有一位值得我们敬佩的80多岁的老爷爷钟南山教授。已经耄耋之年的他,依然挂帅亲征,奔波在抗战一线,与新型冠状病毒战斗,真令人佩服。
我们也要像钟南山教授那样,做一个有知识、有学问、刻苦钻研的人。知识不仅能改变我们的生活,还能救人于水火。当遇到困难,勇往直前,用知识战胜困难。
我坚信这次疫情在大家共同的努力下必将战胜攻克,正所谓“众志成城,共度难关”。
最后,我想说:每一个青少年都应该听从指挥,做好自己的安全守护,尽量避免出门游玩,尽量少去人群密集的地方,不添乱,为这次打赢疫情战役贡献自已的绵薄之力。
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文:
第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
一代代新青年,一股股新力量,他们是国家的前途,他们是民族的希望。疫情当头,他们奋力赶往一线,有“基建狂魔,与时间赛跑”的青年突击队,有“天下兴亡,匹夫有责”的青年志愿者,有“言传身教,共抗疫情”的上阵父子兵,等等。他们脸上的勒痕是永不褪色的荣耀,他们留下的汗水是不忘初心的结晶,他们才是大学生该有的样子。
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