上个星期,是我们班竞选班长的日子,我非常激动,因为我也要参加竞选,真想马上当上班长。终于等到班队活动课,竞选班长活动开始了,一听到姚老师说:”谁先上来演讲。“一开始我不够自信,真怕走到讲台上。等到第五位,我才走上讲台,讲台下有60多位同学的'眼睛和姚老师期待的目光。我心里怦怦直跳,我想我不能当逃兵,所以我拿起竞选稿子,大声演讲,我说完后下面响起了热烈的掌声,我想我一定是成功了,因为爸爸妈妈说过:”只要你站在讲台上,你就成功了。“我的心好象放下了一块大石头,非常轻松。
一个星期过去了,班队活动课是给我们竞选人投票的日子。当时我的心别提有多紧张,就像有一面大鼓在”咚咚咚“的敲着。后来一看是我的票数最高,我兴奋极了,差点一蹦三尺高,真想大喊几声!老师和同学们,我一定不会辜负你们对我的期望,请你们相信我的能力!
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
敬爱的老師、亲爱的伙伴:
大家好!
我叫林骏豪,今天我第一次站在讲台上演讲,而第一次演讲就是竞选班长,此时此刻我很激动,也很紧张。班长是一个许多同学向往的职位,需要一个有能力有爱心的人来担当,我相信我有这个能力。我在一二三四年级都没有当过班长,大家是不是继续给我这个机会呢?让我童年的里留下为全班同学服务的无比美好的回忆吧!我热情开朗、热爱集体、团结同学、拥有爱心。我的缺点是爱玩游戏,不爱听别人对我的劝告,在未来的日子里,我将改掉这些毛病。
假如我竞选成功当上班长,我将用旺盛的精力、清醒的头脑来做好这项工作,我将举办一系列活动如朗诵,当然还有很多我就不多说了。我想我们都应该当个实干家,不需要那些美丽的词汇来修饰。假如我落选了,说明我还有许多缺点,我将继续自我完善。
工作锻炼了我,生活造就了我。戴尔卡耐基说过“不要怕推销自己,只要你认为自己有才华,你就应该认为自己有资格提任这个或那个职务”。
同学们,信任我、支持我,请投我一票,谢谢大家!
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
大家好,我叫庄宜佳,我今天想要竞选做班长,有些人就想问我为什么一个在班里不是前三名的人还要来竞争,我虽然不是一个非常完美的人,但是我其他方面都还行,可是你们为什么都不接纳我呢?语文老師经常夸我,我那有什么错吗?我好伤心。
直到今天,我想对大家说:“我想当班长。”记得又一次,我们班的陆睿鼻子流血了,我积极的带着她去水龙头那里帮她清理了伤口,她非常感激我,要送我一个大熊猫,我委婉的拒绝了她,因为老師有着拾金不昧的精神,我要向她们学习;还有一次,老師要找人背着一个超重的东西,没有人敢去,只有我一个人背着这个东西,老師在课堂上夸了我,下课就有人说我装的,我不明白他们为什么要这么说呢?
敬爱的老師和亲爱的`同学们,我希望你们能选我这个一直在你们旁边默默帮助你们的人,希望你们投我一票,我一定会比以前更加努力的。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
各位老師好,同学们好!
在过去的日子里,我们团结友爱,互帮互助,好好学习,天天向上。老師如一位辛勤的园丁,用辛劳和汗水培育着我们,使我们在阳光下茁壮成长,谢谢您,老師。
我是徐冯丝曼,今年10岁,曾在班上担任英语课代表、美术课代表、语文补充习题课代表等等。我非常荣幸,也非常愿意为同学们服务,帮助大家。
我课外活动爱好广泛,爱打乒乓球、羽毛球,喜欢骑自行车、滑旱冰、打篮球,我还喜欢画画,弹钢琴,阅读各种课外书。这些活动能让我得到更多的锻炼,增长更多的见识,我也非常愿意和大家一起活动,丰富我们的课余生活。
为了能更好的服务大家,帮助大家,我参加此次班长竞选。如果我是班长,我会以身作则,处处起到带头作用,每天带领同学们朝好的方向发展,遵守纪律、热爱劳动、热爱学习、关心同学、团结友爱、互相帮助,积极参加各种活动。我会发扬不怕苦,不怕累的精神,尽自己的最大努力帮助同学,为同学们服务,以前的我是这样做的,以后的我还会做的更好。
我是徐冯丝曼,希望各位老師和同学能支持我,给我一个机会,谢谢!
大家好,今天我走上讲台参加竞选班长职务。我相信凭着我的勇气和才干,凭着我坚强的毅力和勇于拼搏的决心,一定会成功。班长是一个许多同学向往的职位,需要一个有能力有爱心的人来担当,我相信我有这个能力。我在一二年级都当过班长,大家是不是继续给我这个机会呢?让我童年的里留下为全班同学服务的无比美好的回忆吧!我热情开朗、热爱集体、团结同学、拥有爱心。我的缺点是看不起差生,不爱听别人对我的劝告,在未来的日子里,我将改掉这些毛病。
假如我竞选成功当上班长,我将用旺盛的精力、清醒的头脑来做好这项工作,我将举办一系列活动如朗诵、演讲等等,当然还有很多我就不多说了。我想我们都应该当个实干家,不需要那些美丽的词汇来修饰。假如我落选了,说明我还有许多缺点,我将继续自我完善。
工作锻炼了我,生活造就了我。戴尔卡耐基说过“不要怕推销自己,只要你认为自己有才华,你就应该认为自己有资格提任这个或那个职务”。
同学们,信任我、支持我,请投我一票,谢谢大家!
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