春天是个美丽的季节,也是我最喜欢的季节。
一到春天,就百花盛开、莺歌燕舞。美丽极了。
春天的大山可美了,绿绿的,黑里透绿的。山上的树,郁郁葱葱的。飘在山上的云,一会儿像一条威武的龙,一会儿像棉花糖一样。白云是个神秘人呀!
山下的稻田绿油油的,里面种着胡萝卜、高丽菜、葱、蒜等许多味道鲜美的蔬菜。
草地上盛开着五颜六色的花朵,红的、黄的、白的、紫的,真像个美丽的大花坛。草地上的小草嫩嫩的、脆脆绿绿的,可爱极了!
湖水清可见底,像被周围的绿树绿草染过似的。
啊,春天你真美丽!我爱你,美丽的春天!
立春早已过了,可春雨却姗姗来迟。细雨蒙蒙,滋润着休息了一冬的花草;微风徐徐,吹醒了还在梦中的小生灵。
你看!草坪上,小草伸出了头,懒洋洋的,似乎还在梦中遨游,有几丝不情愿。桃园里,桃树冒出了粉红色的花苞,花苞太多紧闭着,也许正在准备挑一个好日子百花齐放呢;性急的却等不及了,独自盛开在枝头,引得众人瞩目,出尽风头。河边,柳树上点缀着无数的新叶,弯弯曲曲地垂下头来,如少女般柔顺的'长发。微风一吹,它们尽情的舞动,似乎在炫耀春姑娘对它们的钟爱。此时,我不禁想起了古人的诗句:“碧玉妆成一树高,万条垂下绿丝涤。不知细叶谁裁出,二月春风似剪刀。是啊!温暖的春风把柳叶吹出,多么像神奇灵巧的剪刀!
春风像慈母般的手抚摸着大地,小草被春风吹得翩翩起舞,好看及了,小动物也被春风吹得浑身舒服。
仰望天空,已有南归的燕子也来凑热闹了!伶俐的小燕子扇动着俊俏轻快的翅膀,翘着剪刀似的小尾巴从很远的地方飞来了,好像是在告诉我们:“春天来了,春天来了!
春天的确来了,不是吗?太阳照着大地,照在人们的身上,暖和极了。微风轻轻吹拂,让人感到那么舒服,那么高兴。
啊!春天,你不像冬天那样寒冷,也不像夏天那样炎热。古人云:一年之计在于春。在这个充满希望,快乐的季节里,作为祖国花朵的我们,将会紧随春天的脚步,开得更鲜艳,更灿烂!
“冬天来了,春天还会远吗?”这是英国诗人雪莱说过的一句话,如今,寒冷的冬天已经过去了。温暖的春天也来了,而春天不是单一的只有温暖,还有她的美——
你瞧!春姑娘展开了她那美丽的笑脸,于是,花开了,草绿了,一切生命都在春姑娘的笑脸之下诞生了,小鸟也迎着春姑娘的笑脸飞向北方。柳树舒展开了黄绿嫩叶的枝条,在微微的春风中轻柔地拂动,就像一群群身着绿装的仙女在翩翩起舞。夹在柳树中间的桃树也开出了鲜艳的花朵,绿的柳,红的花,真是美极了!
在地上,青青的小草,破土而出,偷偷的从土里钻出来,嫩嫩的,绿绿的.。在公园里,到处都可以看见这一些生命力顽强的小草。五颜六色的小花各不相让,争奇斗艳,红的、黄的、白的、紫的,各种各样的花在一块真像一个美丽的大花坛。
在空中,鸟儿在空中不知疲倦的歌唱,麻雀、黄鹂,杜鹃在一起叽叽叽叽的叫着,就好像一个大乐团在歌唱似的。燕子穿着他那黑色的燕尾服站在五线谱上指挥着这个乐团,尖尖的小嘴还不时的动着,好像在说:叽叽,没有我乐团就瘫痪了!柳絮在空中飘着,仿佛就在讲述柳树妈妈的慈爱,空中,地上,树上这些美丽的景色,让春姑娘构成了一副美丽的画。
春天真美!美得让人痴迷,让人沉醉……
爱发脾气的冬爷爷才刚刚离去,文静美丽的春姑娘就伴着柔和的春风来到了人间。
春姑娘的步伐多么轻盈!她悄悄地来到了广场。你瞧,一棵棵梅花树姿态各异,一朵朵梅花竞相开放。放眼望去,几棵喷红吐翠的梅树,风摇花枝,广场飘香,宛如片片彩云,铺落在芳草茵茵的草地上。它们又像一群热情奔放的姑娘,向着贪恋梦乡的花卉,大专地呼唤:春天回来了!春天回来了!不远处的那一棵粉色的梅树,花苞像棵棵宝石一般,镶嵌在翡翠似的绿叶上,犹如一条粉色的绸带。这时,一阵清风吹来,那梅花散发出一阵沁人心脾的清香,让我心旷神怡!
春姑娘的步伐多么轻盈!她悄悄地来到了广场。你瞧,一棵棵银杏树高大粗壮,那粗壮有力的枝干让我们感受到春天的活力,仿佛什么时候就要把它一冬天蕴藏的精神、力量都尽情地释放出来。不远处,那几棵枝繁叶茂、四季常青的香樟树令人赞叹,那青翠玉滴的枝叶和那高大的身躯,令人仰慕。
春姑娘的步伐多么轻盈!她悄悄地来到了广场。你瞧,一朵朵纯净疏淡的玉兰花,润泽透明,白里透黄,黄里透黄,像琥珀或玉石雕成的,真有点冰清玉洁的韵致。绽放的玉兰花像个个小喇叭,奏响了春天的赞歌。玉兰花与梅花遥相呼应,一起谱写着春的乐章。
春姑娘的步伐多么轻盈!她悄悄地来到了广场。你瞧,到处都有山茶花的踪影,周围落满了花瓣。我终于领略到落红不是无情物,化作春泥更护花的含义了。月季花一般在四五月份开放,一到冬季就要剪短,听说是让它来年长得更旺。
春姑娘的步伐多么轻盈!她悄悄地来到了广场。你瞧,一棵棵小草从醋梦中醒来,它们破土而出,舒展着它那幼嫩的绿叶。草色遥看近却无真是一点不错。
温暖的春风吹化了残雪,吹绿了树枝,吹起我们心中的春天!
送走了寒冷的冬爷爷,我们迎来的是美丽的春姑娘。你瞧,她正带着雷弟弟和雨妹妹来报道了呢!
雷弟弟一声哄,把沉睡的一切生物都叫醒了;雨妹妹一摇头,使大地一片绿色,充满生机。
你瞧,小草儿从土里探出头来,嫩嫩的,绿绿的,似乎在寻找春的消息。柳树姐姐伴着雷弟弟的舞蹈跳着舞呢!田野里,那金灿灿的油菜花,在微风中摇弋着自己的身躯,希望得到更多的营养。远方的小草坡上,有一些小花儿装点着。粉的,黄的,蓝的,紫的……显得格外美丽。大地上的一切,都贪婪的吮吸这些。
雨停了,小动物们都从自己的巢穴里出来了。你看,号称“春江水暖鸭先知”的小鸭子正悠然自得地游着泳,小溪边,小河里,到处都有它们的倩影。“勤劳的劳动者”——蜜蜂嗡嗡的闹着,大大小小的蝴蝶飞来飞去。还有美丽的蜻蜓,时而点一点水,时而躲在芦苇丛中歇息。
美丽的春姑娘,我爱你!
教学目标:
1、引导学生如何把句子写具体、写生动,
2、指导学生抓住景物的特点,描写春天的景色。
3、培养学生乐于写作的兴趣和良好的写作习惯。
教学重点:
抓住景物的特点,描写春天的景色。
教学难点:
引导学生把句子写具体、生动。
教师准备:
反映春天特征的课件。
学生准备:
1、利用课余时间到附近去寻找春天,并记录春天的特征。
2、作文本一本。
教学过程:
一、创设情境,引入课题。
1、引入,说关于春天的词语。
2、 春天,天气转暖,万物复苏。这节课让我们写一写春天吧。(板书:春天)
3、播放有关春景的课件。
4、看了这些图像,你想用什么词语来形容春天的景色呢?
二、说景物特点。
说说你看到了什么景物?(板书:植物、动物 天气 人物)
三、写作方法指导。
1、指导学生把句子写具体生动。
(1)比较句子。我们怎样把看到的、听到的、闻到的事物具体形象地描写出来呢? 有两位同学分别写了一句话,我们来作个比较看谁写得最形象最具体?(课件出示)
甲:春天来了。
乙:春姑娘悄悄地来了,她给大地妈妈穿上了一件漂亮的花衣裳。
(2)学生回答。
(3)师小结:乙既写出了春天悄悄来的特点,又写出了春天给大地带来了什么样的变化,还用了拟人的手法,这样的句子才显得形象生动呢。我们写作文的时候要多用这样的写法,使用恰当的修辞手法的把句子写具体。
(4)自由选择一句,练习围绕一种景物把句子写具体:①小草绿了。②桃花开了。③小鸟叫。
春妹妹踏着轻盈的脚步,来到了江南水乡,使这里的每个角落都散发着春天的气息。老爸老妈带着我去寻找春天。
一路上,小草告诉我,春天在这里,它是醒目、稚嫩的绿色。桃花告诉我,春天在这里,它是希望、热情的红色。油菜花告诉我,春天在这里,它是兴奋、活泼的金色……我看到山上的茶农们身上背着竹筐,在茶树前辛勤的劳作,我们来到了无锡的踏青农庄,这里是个远离城市的好地方,有小溪,有田地,有游乐场。
咦?他们在干什么?小溪上吊着几条绳子,人们一个接一个的从这一头走到那一头。好奇心导致我也想去试一试,可是我看到由于这次上的人太多,绳子都被压得都到小溪里了,当人们走到河中央时,呵呵,他们的裤子和鞋子全都被洗了,在旁边看热闹的人都哈哈大笑起来。我也庆幸自己没有跟着他们一起走。老妈推着我让我去玩,我赶紧跑到一边,我可不想变成“落汤鸡”。瞧,那边又有两个大人上了这个绳子,说起来也真倒霉,其中一个胖叔叔,才走了六分之一的路就被洗了鞋子,他只能一步步往回退,我估计如果他还往前走,肯定能洗个澡。
接下来我们来到了田地里,老妈准备采些马兰包饺子,这时,我看到好多叔叔阿姨都在采一种毛毛的菜的尖头。哇!他们都采了一大袋子了。阿姨告诉我,他们无锡人都叫这种菜“毛尖头”尤其是野生的,特别鲜。于是我和老妈也跟着采了起来,茶树下,这种菜特别多,老妈说可能这菜就是茶树的附属品吧。有一些菜都长上了又黄又大的花,阿姨说这个也可以吃,我沉浸在自己采摘的快乐中。我们也采了满满一大袋子,准备回家凉拌着吃。
老爸像个老顽童,在游乐场里玩踩高跷,结果一屁股摔在了地上,在老爸的搀扶下,我第一次玩踩高跷,它比我想象的难多了,脚就是带不动只能用手一点点的提起来走。如果没有老爸搀扶,我早就摔了一跤了。
我在踏青农庄找到了春天,这里的春天桃红柳绿,万紫千红,每种颜色都散发着春天美好的气息,充满了生机与蓬勃。其实只要用心体会,春天就无处不在。
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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