五年级英语作文5句话冬天【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文5句话冬天【二】
冬天又来临了，理所当然，纷纷扬扬的雪花也随着天气的变化，从阴沉的天空中飘落了下来。散布在这个城市的每一个角落。
第二天早晨，一缕缕阳光从彤云密布的天空中撒落下来。一群穿着大棉衣、戴着大棉帽子，像一个个大面包似的孩子们嘻嘻哈哈地跑向了公园。
只见公园里静得出奇，连鸟叫声也没有。地上、光秃秃的树枝上、路灯上、到处都是一片白，像是给大地穿上了一件白色的大衣。就连冬夏常青的松树和柏树也被一层蓬松松的白雪覆盖了。
可不一会儿，孩子们的到来又显出了公园里的另一番景象。他们有的在堆雪人，有的在打雪仗，还有的想用照相机把这美丽的景色记录下来。瞧，站在雪人旁，头扎一个红蝴蝶结的那个小姑娘就是我，我和小伙伴们正在热情洋溢的为胖雪人“修补”身体。旁边的小伙伴也在满脸微笑地“锻炼身体”，头上那大滴大滴的汗珠也滴了下来。
也许同学们会说，冬天有什么好？寒风吹得人直发抖，还很容易生病，而春天则让人觉得阳光明媚，十分温暖。但是，这样的季节，难免会使人觉得太舒服了，一点也不想锻炼身体。冬天就不一样，天起越冷，你就越要运动，而正是这样，你的身体也会越来越好。
我是多么想再过一个大雪纷飞的冬季啊！我爱冬天的公园！
五年级英语作文5句话冬天【三】
尔姥姥野的邻近就是奥林匹克森林私园妈妈和我在早春时每个周六皆会往那面走徒步。
一走入森林公园的南门，就会看到一块又大又宽的深灰色的大石头。每次来的时候，我都会在那儿和敌人们玩会儿捉迷藏，我总会避在那块被小草蜂拥着的大石头后面等着他们来找我。
相互找到了躲着的搭档们当前咱们就持续返前走，在途径的二旁就会望到一片片高大的红皮松矗立在一块“铺”谦了松果跟松针的地上，这就像是一块充满了花纹的地毯似的，这块被大天然展没的“地毯”可实漂亮呀！
走功松树林，我去到一座玉红色的石桥上。从桥上去下看去，可能瞅到一片还未完整熔化的湖面一全体是未经融化的湖水，还有一局部是未融化的冰。残暴的阳光照耀在水面上，水面即时变得像镜子一样把阳光“弹”了归去。刺眼的阳光泼撒在炭点上，冰就变成了水晶，晶莹剔透的。冰变成了金子，在阳光的照射下披发着点点的金光……
我边走边观赏着景致，眼中那些俏丽的气象已经让我把腿上的疲劳完齐忘却了。我爱森林公园，我爱我的故乡！
五年级英语作文5句话冬天【四】
人生的滋味丰富多彩，有酸甜苦辣咸，有赤橙黄绿青蓝紫。
——题记
今天我们干了一件很甜的事，那就是去森林公园上作文户外课。
几分钟后，我们来到了曲靖烟厂四生活区的足球场上。我和毛杰玩起了玩起了摔跤，几个回合都不分胜负，我们打了个平手。
离开足球场，我们进了树林里。我和“大部队”走着着，听着干树叶被踩碎的声音，一路上有说有笑。不知不觉，我们就走到了一群鸽子前，有的同学就去喂鸽子，听鸽子发出的“咕咕咕咕”的声音叫声。
让我记忆最深刻的还是“水帘洞”。这不是《西游记》里的水帘洞吗？但是这个洞很小很短，洞里什么都没有，我想这里要是有瀑布和猴子就好了。水帘洞虽然短小，但我在里面了跑进跑出很多遍，就像地鼠一样。洞旁还有一条小溪，水中有四五块大石头，可以踩在上面过河。
之后，我和李治颖来到一片松林里，看到一座木头做成的小房子，原来是一座鸽房。它们的身子胖乎乎的。有的是雪白色的；有的是墨绿色的，脖子上有一圈金黄色的绒毛；有的是一块白一块黑，头上还戴着一顶“小灰帽”。
这个公园真是个休闲的好地方。
