五年级英语作文得分【一】
话说，唐僧师徒西天取经后，唐僧与八戒寻找工作，他们在此之间发生了许多事情……
在某年某月某日里的一个落后的村子里，唐僧正在闲逛，无意间发现了一则招工启事，唐僧上前一看，启事上这样写道：长年招收佛家弟子，工资面议，电话：1234567890，非诚勿扰。看完之后，唐僧暗喜，心想：这份工作就是为我准备的啊！完全符合我的特长啊！想完，他就打去了电话，一阵彩铃过后，电话那头说道：“你好，这里是乌龙寺，请问你来这的目的。”唐僧说：“我是来应聘的。”那人说道：“请说一段佛经。”唐僧一听，便把手机放在地上，掏出木鱼，坐在地上，对着手机说道”一切皆为虚幻不可说，色即是空，空即是色。’’那人说道；“你被录取了，请明日到乌龙寺来当一名佛家弟子，工资一个月20xx元。”说完便挂了电话，唐僧十分高兴，便回到了家，今晚，他做了一个幸福的梦。
在唐僧被录取的第二天，猪八戒来到了码头，他找到了工头，对工头哀求道；“求你让我在这打工行吗？多少钱都行。”工头说道：“你在这干活可以，先让我见识一下你的力气。”猪八戒说：“可以。”说完，他就来到了货物前，轮起袖子，轻松举起2袋朝货船走去，现场的人及工头看的是目瞪口呆，猪八戒回来后，工头说道；“你可以在这干活了，现在就干，工资一个月1500元，就这样，猪八戒也找到了工作。他也十分的高兴。
就这样，他们两个都找到了工作。
五年级英语作文得分【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：
互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文得分【三】
话说唐僧师徒四人从西天取完经后，互相告别，各自回到了自己的家乡，准备开始新的生活。我们今天的主人公——孙悟空即将登场，而他的故事又从花果山说起。
那孙悟空告别了唐僧后，便驾着筋斗云一路飞回了花果山。可是一路上，他却发现山前山后到处是工厂，每个工厂的烟囱也正冒着黑烟，人们一个个戴着口罩匆匆地走着。孙悟空也没太在意。回到了花果山，顿时令他大吃一惊。原来枝繁叶茂的花果山现早已不复存在了。远处，那瀑布上只有寥寥无几的一两滴水在往下滴，土地变得异常干涸，原来活泼可爱的小猴子也一个个不见了踪影。这时，从一棵早已失去生机的枯树后面传来了一个虚弱的声音:‘‘大……大王，您总算回来了。”孙悟空循声过去，只见一只老猴奄奄一息地躺在树下。孙悟空立即扶起了老猴，掏出一个大饼喂给老猴吃。老猴见了，狼吞虎咽地吃了起来，渐渐地也精神了许多。然后他便哭着告诉了孙悟空花果山这些年的遭遇。
原来孙悟空走的这些年里，各个地方都兴建起了一些化工厂，毒气的大量排放造成了连年的酸雨，花草树木随之失去了往日的生机。不久，瀑布的水也变得恶心发臭，最后渐渐被毒日头照得蒸发了。猴群们都忍受不了这种恶劣的环境，病的病，死的死，还有一些幸存的.猴子则背井离乡，寻找新的家园。只有这只老猴子坚持到了现在，为的就是再见到孙悟空一面，亲自告诉他这一切。
孙悟空听完了，顿时痛心疾首，他想要挽回这一切，却已无能为力。最后，他向全世界的人类大声疾呼：为了让这一切不再发生，请大家保护好地球，因为这是我们唯一的家园啊！
