人生的道路多彩多姿,面对不同的道路,必然有不同的态度对待它。微笑是人类乐观积极的体现。
很久很久以前,在贫困的小县城里有一位平凡的人,在他读完高中的时候,名列前茅,可由于家庭经济收入不多,不能继续读书,只好无奈地外出打工。他来到一个经济稍发达的城市,可是他比较穷,一身衣服要破了才会考虑是否应买新衣服。由于刚到一个陌生的城市,只好流浪街头,可他每天睡醒都有不同的学生从他身边走过,同学们的谈笑让他感觉陌生不解,因为,他找不到笑的理由。这样的日子,他仿佛觉得每天都天气昏沉。
他忧郁地走在马路上,沿着一条大路低头走着,突然一个奇怪的人吸引了他的注意力,那个奇怪的人双腿已断,孤伶伶地坐在轮椅上,此时的那个人(外出准备打工的人呆呆地站在那里,目不转睛地盯着轮椅上的人,直到轮椅消失在拐角处。
为什么他盯着轮椅上的人不放呢?那残疾人虽然身体缺少了一些东西,但那残疾人微微上扬的嘴角引发了年轻人的思考。他身有残疾,为何能笑得如此轻松?于是,他紧锁的眉头忽然放松,面部的表情稍微润泽了一些。此时的天上,又开始焕发太阳的光芒。
另一天,他就要开始自己的任务了。他去市场上买了一稍微看得上眼的衣服,他穿上后是相貌堂堂啊。于是他去哪里都有了微笑。在他去找工作时,老板看到他很喜欢微笑,就让他做了一名服务员,随着时间的推移,他的职位也越来越高。
自从他看到残疾人之后,对人生的态度就改变了,他不再为自己的处境而困惑,他突然明白,笑其实是一种无味的药,让人感到世间美好的药。
他的人生有了很大变化,因为他笑对人生。
四级英语很快就要到来了,英语是占据重要的部分,快来看看下面的范文及写作指导吧。
下面请看一篇漫画式命题的作文预测题:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should express your views on the impact of air pollution. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
【参考模板范文】
The Impact of Air Pollution
The cartoon vividly reveals the phenomenon of air pollution or the decline of air quality. In the cartoon we can see the air pollution is so serious that the earth can't bear it.
What exactly contribute to this phenomenon? Possible reasons can be listed as follows: firstly, vehicle exhaust gases could be one of the most leading causes. With the improvement of economy and people's living standard, urban inhabitants in mounting numbers own their private cars. More automobiles will inevitably generate more exhaust gases. Additionally, household appliances widely used in cities also release a great amount of carbon dioxide gases, which further intensifies air pollution. Last but not least, many factories around the cities emit large quantities of untreated poisonous gases, which should also be responsible for the decline of air quality.
Definitely, air pollution will exert a detrimental impact on many aspects of people's life. For example, many diseases such as cough, skin problem and lung cancer are caused by it. Perhaps it is high time that we should adopt some measures to solve the problem of air pollution.
英语漫画作文写作指导
第一、读图审题
四级漫画作文中的漫画通常反映一个社会现象或生活哲理,要求考生根据自己对漫画的理解来写作。因此,要写好四级漫画作文,审题格外重要。考生在下笔之前要仔细看漫画,弄清漫画的寓意,这是文章切题的保证。此外,在本次四级考试的三道写作题中,Directions部分都给出了写作内容的大致方向,这也为考生把握漫画寓意提供了帮助。下面笔者就来逐一梳理2013年6月四级作文的三幅漫画及其传达的寓意。
第二、谋篇布局
在把握文章的主旨之后,考生就可以构思整篇文章的架构了。四级漫画作文的写作可以分为下面三个段落。
第一段:开门见山,简要描述一下漫画内容,并指出漫画的寓意。描述漫画内容是为了揭示其中的寓意,是手段而不是目的,所以描述要简洁明快,一般来说一句话足矣。需要提醒考生的是,写作的Directions部分虽然给出了大致的写作主题,但是也要求考生对漫画进行简要描述,因此考生切不可抛开漫画内容直接展开议论。
第二段:表达考生对漫画寓意的看法,这是文章的重心所在。比如,就第一道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段阐述阅读文学作品的重要性;就第二道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段论述为什么凡事必须从小事做起;就第三道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段论述掌握基本技能的重要性。
第三段:指出漫画的寓意对大学生的教育意义,或者提出解决问题的建议。考生需要注意的是,结尾段一般并不需要实质性的分析,其主要作用是总结和升华,使文章结构完整。所以结尾段的写作要简明扼要,点到即止。
第三、论证方法
漫画作文的\'第二段要表达考生对漫画寓意的看法,这是文章的核心段落,也是作文字数达到要求的关键。因此,考生在这一段要浓墨重彩,写深、写透。在写这一段时,考生要尽量摆事实、讲道理,避免空泛的议论。针对这一核心段落,笔者在此推荐以下三种展开议论的常用方法,希望对考生有所启发。
1.条分缕析
在写作第二段时,考生可以从2~3个方面对观点展开论述,这种写法可使文章显得层次清楚、条理清晰。例如,本次四级作文第一道题目的第二段需要阐述阅读文学作品的重要性,考生就可以从以下两个方面展开:第一,相对于电子媒体,文学阅读更能培养人的想象力;第二,阅读文学作品能够帮助我们更好地了解社会。请参考下面的范文。
There wasa time when children could relish (欣赏/ 也可以使用appreciate 替换 literature. But childrentoday can enjoy the sounds and action on a TV or computer screen. “So why bother reading?” some ask. The reasonis obvious: It enriches our imagination. When we read apiece of literature, we are living the life of RobinHood or starting an adventure with Tom Sawyer. In addition, literature is the mirror of society,whether it be poetry, drama or fiction. We know thesociety better through literature.
2.举例论证
如果漫画所传达的是抽象的人生哲理,那么考生在论述时最好能举出具体的事例,尽量避免空洞的说教。比如,就本次四级作文第二道题目而言,考生可以在第二段中举出一些成功人士如何从小事做起的例子。笔者下面提供的范文中用到的是哈兰·桑德斯上校从一个小吃店做起,最后缔造出遍布全球的肯德基快餐帝国的例子,用以证明只有从小事做起,才能成就大事。请看下面的范文。
Everything is smallbefore it is big. A good example is KFC. In 1930 Colonel Harland Sanders beganserving food to his service station customers in Corbin, a city in Kentucky. He fried chicken in his own kitchen andperfected his secret recipe there. From the small roadside eatery, he went on to build an empire of fast food.
3.类比论证
如果漫画中的寓意不容易通过具体的事例来证明,那么考生还可以使用类比论证的方法,即通过打比方来论证一个抽象的道理。比如,对于本次四级作文的第三道题目,考生可以在第二段中用学习打篮球的过程来打比方。学习打篮球时,只有先学会了投球、运球、传球这些基本技能,才能进一步学习高难度的技能。以此类推,无论做任何事情,只有掌握了基本的技能,才可能取得更大的成功。此外,考生还可以举出统计数字,用具体的研究结果来证明论点。请看下面的范文。
Simple as they mayseem, basic skills serve as the first link in the chain of success. Thisis analogous to learning to play basketball. If shooting, dribbling and passing are not mastered,learning advanced skills will become difficult, if notimpossible. A growing body of research has also documented that such basicskills as reading, writing and computing are highlycorrelated with success later in life. A 2012 study surveyed 300 CEOs ofFortune 500 companies and found that 87% attributed part of their success tothe basic skills they learned in primary school.
人生必然会遇到各种各样的挫折。大的挫折如投资失败,身患绝症;小的如失败,走路摔一跤。面对形形色色的人生挫折,我们都应该以微笑去面对,用顽强的意志,乐观的心态去战胜它,只要能“熬”过去,光明就在前头。
现代社会,竞争加剧,挫折更是无处不在,无时不有。面对挫折和失败,我们应该想到:挫折是人生最宝贵的财富,挫折是人生最值得骄傲的体验,挫折时人生最美好的回忆。正是挫折才让我们人生有了前进的动力,正是挫折让我们积累了宝贵的,获得了通往成功的阶梯。伟大音乐家贝多芬,五十岁时双耳完全失聪,对一个音乐家来说,是一个多么沉重的打击啊!但贝多芬却抬起了他雄狮般的头颅,发出了“我要扼住命运的咽喉”的呐喊,创作出了最辉煌的第九交响曲《欢乐颂》。贝多芬面对挫折的精神,成为后人学习的榜样。
许多人在挫折面前放大了自己的痛苦。有的人相信这是命运的安排,不能改变,从此就意志消沉,一却不振。有的人无法接受失败和打击,丧失理智,变成了一个仇视社会和人类的变态者。这些人永远无法从挫折中走出来,永远是一个失败者。比如一个男青年喜欢一个女孩子,遭到拒绝后,心理不平衡,先***别人全家,后自***,它不仅害了自己,还害了别人。这样的\'面对挫折,只能成为大家的笑料和反面教材。
人最难战胜的就是自己。只要你能战胜自己,你就能面对挫折,笑对人生。
The Role of Mobile Phone in People's Communication
The popularity of smartphones has exerted great influence on the way people communicate, so much so that an increasing number of individuals contend that face-to-face communication is being replaced by texts and images on the mobile phone.
There are more than one angle to consider this phenomenon. On one hand, it is pleasantly acknowledged that smartphones shorten the distance between families and friends. Even people from different sides of the globe can share pictures, feelings and thoughts through various types of apps on the phone, thus building a long-distance connection. On the other hand, as the picture warns us, too much smartphone addiction interferes with people's real-life communication. Statistics show that over 70 percent of face-to-face communication consists of facial expressions and body language, which is why people should stay away from mobile phones when they have the chance to actually talk and communicate with others.
In a word, mobile phones act as an appropriate platform where people can always stay in tough however long the distance is, but a wise man should know when to put down his phone.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a student of our university, who often spend my spare time in our library. Generally speaking, our library provides quite good service. However, I still have some suggestions for you to upgrade the quality of your service.
To begin with, I would like you to prolong the open time. In the daytime, most students are having classes. To continue, some books are too old/ are out of date. It would be better if you could replace them with updated materials.
I sincerely hope to have a comfortable library. And I would be highly grateful if you could take my suggestions into consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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