Tiger is one of the most valueable animals to human beings today. It is somehow like a cat, but much bigger than it. It lives in the forest, and feeds on small animals.
Nowadays, the number of the wild tiger is becoming small and small. Maybe there will be no tiger any more if people continue cutting the trees, destorying the living environment or hunt the tiger just for the skin. We must stop all these mistakes. We should protect them, because the world without tiger is not a completed one.
Tiger is one of the most valueable animals to human beings today. It is somehow like a cat, but much bigger than it. It lives in the forest, and feeds on small animals.
Nowadays, the number of the wild tiger is becoming small and small. Maybe there will be no tiger any more if people continue cutting the trees, destorying the living environment or hunt the tiger just for the skin. We must stop all these mistakes. We should protect them, because the world without tiger is not a completed one.
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
我走在大自然的森林里,各个动物都怕我,因为我是老虎,王中之王,但是我决定做个善良的老虎,不然没有朋友会跟我玩的。我走在森林的土地上,阳光照耀着我那舒服的皮毛,我躺在悬崖上,眺望着那美丽的树林。
早上起来,吸着清新空气,我已经好几天没有进食了,我艰难地生活着,不时还得躲避偷猎者的子弹,现在我最恨偷猎者了,他们常常把我一个个朋友打死。直到有一天,我实在饿的没办法了,就用我敏捷的身躯捉到了一只小鹿,哎,动物生存必须得这样啊!我喜欢在大树下睡觉,
我经过了很多地方,受过很多痛苦,而那些人类偏偏不懂我们动物的心情,直到有一天,我实在没办法了,我把一个偷猎者给拍死了,现在很多地方都想捉拿我,我又过上了凄凉而又流浪的生活。所以我站在悬崖上,幻想着飞在天上的狼!多么想变成一只小鸟啊!可以到处飞翔,不怕被受伤害,想去哪里就去哪里。
事情是这样的,我跟我的好朋友狼一起赛跑,虽然我们不是一种动物,但是由于多年的亲情,让我们变成了好朋友,但这段时间并不是很长,有一天,我们一起赛跑的时候,那个偷猎者用枪打到了狼的腿、胸,但是狼还是挺了过来,我把它拉进洞穴里,第二天不久就去了。
现在的人类实在太霸道了,我希望人类不要再猎***动物,这样人类也会被灭绝。我们动物实在是会忍受不了的!
我们都知道“百兽之王”这个称号的来历吧,它源自于兽王老虎,那就是东北虎。
东北虎头上有一个王字,十分威武霸气,它的耳朵能听到来自四面八方的声音,可谓非常的灵敏。它的脸上有几根胡须,可以洞察危险。它的眼睛十分的敏锐,不管多远都能看的一清二楚。它的鼻子更是特别的灵敏,嗅觉也是在动物界中数一数二的,它的嘴巴长的甚是可怕,牙齿无比的锋利,就像一把把小匕首一样,能够轻轻松松的咬破猎物的喉咙,也能轻轻松松的撕碎猎物的肉。它的皮毛是黑黄相间的,可以隐蔽在草丛中蒙骗猎物的眼睛,从而更好的捕获猎物。爪子十分锋利,能划破任何坚硬的东西,它的肉垫儿和猫的差不多。能使它捕食抓获猎物时悄无声息,肉垫成为它捕食的最佳辅助工具。
东北虎是猫科动物,它们不喜欢群居,所以它们通常会用尿液,爪印等标记它们的领地,如果有入侵者进入,那便会上演一场老虎大决斗,十分的精彩。
别看它们捕食猎物十分残忍,可是对待幼崽那可是充满了浓浓的爱意,从幼虎生下来,母虎就会省吃俭用,把大多数食物都留给幼崽吃,让幼虎快点儿长大,自己却挨饿。等幼虎长大后,母虎就会严格要求它自己捕食,如果幼虎捕食成功,母虎会十分开心。如果幼虎捕食失败,那么母虎则会去立即去捕猎,回来给幼虎吃,生怕幼虎挨饿。
或许有人会问我为什么喜欢威风凛凛的东北虎呢?因为我要像老虎的吼声一样,震天动地。现在好好学习,长本领。在将来的一天,我的才能也将震天动地。
小伙伴们,以后我们要爱护和保护野生动物,因为它们正濒临灭绝,正需要我们人类的保护呢。
我喜欢东北虎,因为它威武霸气!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
这个寒假,我们一家去东北旅游,度过了难忘而有意义的七天。
东北的平均气温为-20摄氏度,而室内温度却达20度!正所谓冰火两重天,那么现在,我就带大家去见识一下吧!
哈尔滨是我们北国之行的第一站,它的特色,莫过于冰天雪地了,而马迭尔冰棍更是特色中的特色,它不需包装纸,更不用藏进冰箱,室外的温度足以使它冰冻,还会结起一层甜霜。
睡火炕则是旅途中一大囧事,用一个比喻,那就是“韩式烧烤”。我们如一片片牛肉和鱿鱼,在“烤炉”喜欢系姆······到下半夜,“烤炉”熄火,我们一下子被丢进冰冷的调料中,被人食用······噩梦终于结束了。
第二天,我们就将穿越东升雪山,我们一行中共有4个小孩,我们享受了特权:坐一辆马车到山脚,再徒步上山,大人们可要全程徒步呢!一路上,我们风景看尽,笑话说翻,这才到达山脚。爬坡途中,我耐不住大人们的慢性子,一马当先,那玉树银花与我擦肩而过,向我身后退去,显出朦胧之美。脚下的奇特干雪如澳洲黄金海岸的金沙一般,又如四月的绿草地,踩起来棉柔舒服,但一捏,却又清凉无比。在团队中,我第一个到达山顶。眺望远方,整个雪乡银装素裹,分外妖娆。我在雪地上唱啊跳啊滚啊,妈妈用相机记录下了那些美妙的瞬间。下山时我重新归队一路上边走边滑,因为雪被铲雪车铲出两道小路,只要稍一用力,就可自己顺着山路滑,毫不费力。
东北之行的趣事不止这些,待我向你慢慢道来。
我非常喜欢老虎,虽然只是在动物园中见过它,可即使是被关在笼子里,我仍然能够感受到它“百兽之王”的'强大气势。
瞧,这只老虎体态匀称,身体健壮,身上黄黑色条纹相间,额头上一个鲜明的“王”字证明了它的地位。它长长的尾巴有时拖在地上,有时威武地在空中一扫,真像一国之君。
该吃午饭了,饲养员刚把一盆肉放入笼中,这位“国君”便一摇一摆地走过来,用正宗的“狼吞虎咽”式吃了起来,不一会儿的工夫,就把肉吃了个一干二净。可这只老虎似乎还没吃饱,饲养员只好又上了一道“新鲜菜”——活兔子。兔子刚进笼时还不知道危险正在向自己悄悄靠近,等听到一声震耳欲聋的虎啸,它才知自己被关入了虎笼。兔子吓得“抱头鼠窜”,刚开始几次还能勉强躲过老虎的进攻,可后来就有些力不从心了。老虎一个猛扑,一掌按住兔子的尾巴,谁知兔子右脚一蹬,正好踢在老虎的脸上。老虎气急败坏,使出大绝招“饿虎扑食”,双掌死死地按住兔子的身体,然后便大口地撕咬了起来。“酒足饭饱”之后,“国君”也满意地卧下休息了。
老虎精力旺盛,一会就恢复了精神,于是饲养员带它去活动场所舒展舒展筋骨。它喜欢在泥潭中打滚,直到弄得全身脏兮兮的,才肯去水池里洗澡。洗完澡后,饲养员投给它一个小皮球,它推着皮球满地跑,开心极了!瞧,一位威武的“国君”竟变成了一个调皮可爱的孩子。
说句心里话,我还是希望有朝一日它能够回到自己真正的生活乐园——大自然中去。
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