不知道大家听说了没有,近年来,佛山变得越来越美丽了。其中,我觉得荷花世界的变化最大。
那天,我去了荷花世界玩。去到一看,我简直不敢相信自己的眼睛——变得更美丽了!居然建起了游乐园,还种了大量的波斯菊和鼠尾草!我不太相信这是真的——荷花世界建了游乐园?我看见那些小朋友见到通知后几乎兴奋得一蹦三尺高了!那些爱看花的人更是兴奋。我和哥哥租了一辆双人自行车转转体验改造后的美丽效果。
去游乐场首先要经过一条路,我看见原本的几棵小树,现在已经长得很高了。走在树荫下,不时会听见几声鸟鸣或是看见一些小鸟飞过,偶尔也看见一些淘气的孩子在追捕蝴蝶……到了游乐场后,我发现那里原本是有围墙封闭的,如今变成了一个又大又新的开放式的游乐场,有好多的机动游戏,玩的人真多。我觉得挺好的,种植波斯菊和鼠尾草的地方就在不远处。翻过一座桥,就能看见大片大片的花种植在道路两旁,鼠尾草的样子很像薰衣草,也是长长的,紫红紫红的。对面就是大片的波斯菊,中间隔着一条长廊。波斯菊很像太阳花和康乃馨,它的颜色可以说是五彩缤纷了。有红的,粉的,紫的,橙的,还有紫红的……好看极了!
荷花世界升级改造后可真美啊!
Most female consumers shop unwisely.
选好词汇之后,就选择搭配,但搭配的组合一定要与自己的观点相符:
influences我们通常都和positive / negative 搭配;advertisements也可以分为commercials和non-profit adverts;people可以用the general public替代,所以句子如下:
Commercials and non-profit adverts have both positive and negative influences on the general public.
这就是将简单句进行华丽变身的方法啦~最后环球君要给大家出个题目哦!
本周考题
Community service is helpful for both students and society.
这句话老师的扩句版本为
Establishing community service as a compulsory part in high school education is not only helpful for students but also meaningful for whole society.
今天,我游了三水的左岸公园,那儿真美丽!
一到左岸公园正门,我就看到了用黑色大理石做成的牌匾,上面刻着四个大字——左岸公园。
走进左岸公园,正面看到的是一条清晰见底的河涌。这条河涌在阳光照耀下变得银光闪闪,特别美丽,这就是我们美丽的西南涌。渔夫坐着小船在西南涌里捕鱼、摸虾,多么快乐!突然,水面上微微扬起了一点波纹,什么声音?我仔细一看,原来是一条鲤鱼,这条鲤鱼金黄色,鱼鳞也十分好看,我非常喜欢它。
走进右边的小树林,空气特别清新。在小路的.两旁有很多树木,紫荆花、榕树、桂花树、黄槐树......多得不计其数!在不远的地方,有一个凉亭,这个凉亭叫做四角亭,我数了一下亭子的角,果然有四个角。在四角亭周围的草地里,有许多紫荆花。原来冬天到来了,许多紫荆花的花瓣已经落下,草地变成了花毯,草地里的野菊花铺上了一层紫荆花花瓣后显得更加美丽。越走越进,我听到了几声细嫩的鸟叫声。我仔细观察树上,发现了一个小鸟窝,里面有三只小鸟探出头来,还有一只鸟妈妈和鸟爸爸,这两只大鸟正在轻轻抚摸着这三只可爱的小鸟,它们一家多么幸福啊!
过了好一会儿,我准备走出左岸公园。这时,一阵风吹来,银杏树上的树叶飘动起来,像一只只蝴蝶,仿佛在欢送我离开左岸公园,这样美丽情景真令我难忘啊!
这就是我们佛山市三水区美丽的左岸公园,我为拥有这样美好的绿化环境而感到自豪。
时间状语和地点状语,都是你的扩句好朋友,不信我们来看:
Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money in their early ages.(时间状语
Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money on luxurious purchases.(名词状语
Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money on souvenirs.(名词状语
即使是状语,也可以通过叠加将句子变得更加丰满。有能力的烤鸭当然可以通过状语从句定语从句等等来让句子更不一样。
一、何为“折衷观点”和“折衷方案”。
很多雅思写作考题的提问方式都是“Do you agree or disagree?”或者“To what extent do you agree or disagree?”。很多刚刚接触雅思的学生甚至是老师认为对于这种提问方式无非就是yes或no两种答案,所以文章的观点也就只能是同意或者不同意了。其实,对于这类提问,也可以采用“折衷”的观点,即“partly agree,partly disagree”(部分同意,部分不同意)。但是前提是一定要在文章中从支持和反对的两方面都阐述一些理由,而且最好再提出一种“折衷”方案。例如,考题问“现在很多人用动物做试验,你同意吗?”,考生可以在文中分别讨论支持和反对动物试验的理由,最后提出动物试验既有好处也有坏处,这就是一种“折衷”观点。除此之外,作者还提出了是否能用动物来做试验主要是取决于试验是否能给人类生活带来显著的改善(比如帮助人类发明治疗Aids的药物),这就属于“折衷”方案。
二、“折衷观点”和“折衷方案”的几种形式。
那么如何提出“折衷观点”呢?“折衷方案”又有哪几种形式呢?下面笔者将对常见的几种安排折衷观点和折衷方案的\'形式,结合相应的考题进行总结。
(1) 兴利除弊
“兴利除弊”应该是一种比较简单的折衷方案,在优缺点类文章中特别常用。即在分析完考题所涉及事物的优缺点之后,在结尾段提出“优缺点都有,我们要兴利除弊”这样的折衷方案。例如以下考题:
The advantages brought by the spread of English as a “global language” will outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
在讨论完英语作为全球性语言的利与弊之后,结尾段可以这样提出折衷观点:
To sum up, it is difficult to tell whether or not the advantages outweigh the disadvantages regarding the spread of English as a global language. What we may have to consider is how to accept this trend as positive while at the same time staying away from its drawbacks.
(2) 平衡发展
很多考题需要考生讨论两种观点,通常会有“discuss both views and give your own opinion”这样的提问要求。很多情况下,文中说到的两种观点表面上看来是完全相反,但其实并不矛盾,可以用“平衡发展”的思路来提出观点。例如考题:
Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion.
在讨论完发展旅游的必要性和保护文化传统的重要性之后,结尾段可以这样提出折衷方案:
We should find the right balance between tourism development and cultural protection and I believe the government has a very important role to play here. In my own country, for example, many tourist cities have made effective development plans to successfully attract large numbers of visitors while still preserving their distinct cultural traditions.
(3) 取决于……
有时在讨论完A和B两种观点以后,可以提出类似于“同意A还是B要取决于……”这样的折衷观点,前文讲到的动物试验是否可以进行取决于试验的性质就是属于这样的方案。再比如下面这个例子:
Some people think that the animals should be treated as pets; others think that animals are sources of food and clothing. What is your opinion?
在讨论完动物当宠物养的理由和动物当食物吃的理由之后,结尾段可以这样提出观点:
From my point of view, there is no absolute answer as to whether animals should be treated like pets or as sources of food and clothes. It largely depends on what kinds of animals they are. But what remains undoubted is that we should treat animals with a humane attitude and bear in mind that they are important in preserving nature’s ecological equilibrium.
(4) 解决方法
很多双边讨论型文章中所讨论的两种观点其实是可以通过某种方案来“化解矛盾”的,例如这道考题:
In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think new teachers and doctors should wok in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. Discuss and give your own opinion.
在讨论完“支边”的利(缩小城乡差距)与弊(年轻人丧失自由)之后,我们可以提出这样一种解决方案:
The best solution, therefore, is not to order, but to encourage. We should instill a sense of responsibility in young people and give more incentives to those who are willing to work in difficult areas, so that we can address the problem of urban-rural disparity while respecting whatever decisions new teachers or doctors have made.
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