五年级英语作文描写小猫的【一】
那天早上我起床后，看见我可爱的小猫咪正在墙角边津津有味地吃一束嫩绿地青草，吃完以后，猫咪又呕吐起来。
我看见后，感到非常奇怪。猫平常不是挺喜欢吃新鲜鱼吗？今天，它怎么会突然吃起青草来呢？既然吃的那么有兴致，为什么有吐呢？是不是因为吃青草中毒呢？它吐时地样子十分地丑，那样丑的脸，还弯着腰，吐得东西是那样难闻，害得我拔腿就跑。
我带着这一串疑问忙不迭地对妈妈说：“妈妈，咱们家地小猫刚才吃青草来着，吃完又吐，它肯定要死，你块救救它吧。我要小猫咪，小猫咪是不能死的。”
妈妈听，“扑哧”笑出声。我看见妈妈还笑，急得差点哭，没好气地埋怨她：“人家都快急死，您还笑。”妈妈笑着对我说：“傻孩子，猫吃青草是自己为自己治病呀。”我听后，更加奇怪，猫也会给自己治病？我奇怪的问妈妈：“猫咪得什么病？它问什么偏要吃青草，而不吃别的东西呢？”
妈妈收起笑容，耐心的给我解释：“猫咪得的是肠胃炎，它感到肚子不舒服，就吃青草，吃青草后‘呕吐’，肠胃炎就好，你知道，小猫咪不但能捉老鼠，还能自己开方。吃药，是个不错的医生呢。”她停停，又接着说：“不光是猫咪有这种本领，好多动物都有这种自疗的本领。”
我听，自己也不禁笑起来，世界真奇妙。小猫咪吃青草原来是位医治肠胃炎的。
那天，我很高兴，不仅为小猫咪“高潮医术”高兴，也为自己发现一个科学道理而高兴。
我从小猫咪“高超医术”得到很大启迪，我最爱偏食，爱吃鸡。大肉之类的食品，所以体弱。爱生病。平时要从食物中吸取丰富的营养，多吃天然绿色食品，平衡营养，不再做“小馋猫”，要做一个“高超医术”的营养专家。
五年级英语作文描写小猫的【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文描写小猫的【三】
星期六，小猫起来，小猫说：“我觉的头晕。”，小猫的爸爸，给小猫量了体温。小猫爸爸说：“小猫你生病了。”小猫听见了，小猫很难过。小猫又问，几度呀，小猫爸爸说，40度。要去看病。 小猫爸爸带着，小猫来医院。小猫非常怕看病。 小猫爸爸对医生说：“小猫生病了。”医生说：“叫什么名字呀?”叫艾莉。医生在本子上写上名字。医生又问艾莉几岁?小猫说5岁。医生写上5岁。医生又给艾莉，量了体温。显示40度，小猫爸爸说：“在家里也是40度。”要打点滴。小猫非常非常怕。所以不敢睁开眼睛。要一个小时。 过了一个小时，大好了。小猫爸爸又给小猫量了体温39度好像有效。小猫爸爸告诉了医生，医生也高兴。小猫每天都打点滴，很快病好了。小猫又可以玩耍了。小猫的病好了，其他的朋友开心极了。朋友们开心的跟小猫艾莉玩了。
五年级英语作文描写小猫的【四】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
五年级英语作文描写小猫的【五】
炎热的夏天，小猫敏敏和小伙伴一起在墨绿的草坪上玩耍。
到了中午，大家都回去了。敏敏玩得满头大汗，回到家，好渴啊!喉咙干死了，投上还挂着几滴晶莹的汗水。敏敏想喝水。这时，她在桌上发现了一碗生水。敏敏很开心，她拿起碗，“咕噜噜”地一饮而尽。
