好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:
● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。
● 长短句结合。
由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:
I think …
I hope…
He does it.
He will take it
这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:
1.间或使用主从复句。
Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因
比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.
2.使用分词结构句。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.
3.使用不定式句。
To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚
To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申
To do it well, you must plan it well.
比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.
4.倒装句
Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.
5.失衡句
whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.
That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.
当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:
●As a creature, every one knows.
●Actions speak louder than words.
●Practice makes perfect.
我的家乡在建南,是个山清水秀的好地方。自然也少不了各种各样的美食。我最喜欢吃的还是我们建南的咸菜。
记得有一次,我感冒了,什么也不想吃。这可急坏了爸爸妈妈,他们给我买来了许许多多好吃的东西,我却吃不下。恰好,奶奶从老家带回一些咸菜。妈妈问我:“想吃吗?”我说,“试试吧!”我夹了一小撮,就着一些白米饭。刚进口,感觉脆脆的,紧接着就有种咸咸的、酸酸的、辣辣的味道。这种滋味实在是太美了!不知不觉间,一碗米饭不见了,盘子里的咸菜也都吃光了。我胃口大开,不到两天,我的病全好了。就这样,我爱上了我们建南的咸菜。
从那以后,不论走到哪里,我都忘不了建南咸菜。渐渐地,我对咸菜的做法也产生了浓厚的兴趣,也有了想自己亲手做咸菜的***。于是,我便跑去问奶奶,奶奶告诉我:“首先要在大晴天砍下整棵青菜,上杆晾干后,装进大盆用温水泡洗,用竹刷刷净叶缝土泥垢。晾干后,把菜剖开分为若干等份,将花椒、辣椒、食盐、姜末等佐料包进半剖开的菜茎中,放入土陶坛中密封,三月后就能吃了。”我又问奶奶,“那吃法呢?”奶奶说,“吃法很多啊,可以做咸菜汤,咸菜面条,咸菜炒腊肉——吃起来美味可口。”我又问:“为什么都是咸菜,一样的做法,一样的吃法,不同时候却有不同的味道呢?”奶奶不厌其烦地说:“乖孙子,你不知道吧!咸菜不与其他菜相同,其他菜讲究新鲜。咸菜就是放上一至三年的时间也好吃。三到五月的新鲜咸菜看起来黄金亮色,味道鲜美。一至三年的咸菜看起来不好看,但绝不会腐烂变质,而且吃起来美味绝伦!做酸菜鱼、洋芋咸菜汤就离不开这陈咸菜。等你们放星期的时候,我们一起来做吧!保证你吃了还想吃!”奶奶的一席话,让我直咂口水。
朋友,如果你来建南,我一定让你品尝咸菜,我会亲自下厨,给你做一顿咸菜大餐:煮一钵洋芋咸菜汤,炒一盘咸菜腊肉丁,再加上一盘咸菜笋丝,最后再端上一锅热气腾腾的咸菜鱼。让你一顿吃个够,让你吃了还想吃。
想尝尝我们家乡的美食——咸菜吗?那就快来我们利川建南吧!
一个好的主题句是文章成功的一半。不仅文章有主题,段落有纲,句也必有中心。文章失却主题,就会不知所云;落无纲,则一盘散沙,句缺中心,就无意义。所以,在立足于篇章时,一定要首先明确文的主题;在发展段落时,也要首先写好主题句。从PETS三的特点来考虑,主题句最好是置于文首或段首,这样让人一目了然! 以下就是两个实用的开门见山式发展主题句的方法。
●To begin with, we must attach the greatest importance possible to this issue/fact (key word.
●As is well known to all, it is now high time that we took this (topic word into serious consideration.
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