一个星期天,妈妈上班了,爸爸又不在家,我做完作业,感到很孤单。
突然,我灵机一动,妈妈平常很累,不如帮妈妈做点家务吧!于是,我帮妈妈干家务了。
首先,我帮妈妈扫地,我拿起笤帚,二话不说就开始扫。先扫的是客厅,我把沙发底下、茶几底下扫得一干二净。后来,我又扫了卧室、餐厅等等。我累得汗流浃背,不过我还是坚持干活。
扫完地后,我又帮妈妈拖地。我拿着拖把涮了涮,就开始拖地。我这次先拖餐厅,把餐厅拖得一尘不染,我又拖了客厅、卧室等,整个屋子被我打扫得亮堂堂的.。
妈妈回到家里大吃一惊,夸我真能干,我的心里美滋滋的。今天的事情让我真开心呀!
我的舅妈是一位教师,个头中等,下颏略方,神情和蔼,性格开朗。因为舅妈是教语文的而且平时文章写得不错,所以我每次写了作文都通过网络传给舅妈指点修改。舅妈总能找到我的薄弱环节细心地写上修改意见。每当我的文章在学校获奖时,第一个想到的就是舅妈,因为是她让我走上了领奖台。但是每当我在写作过程中因为粗心出错尤其是老毛病重犯时,她也会严厉的批评指正我,让我一条条的记住不该犯错的地方。她的指点总是非常切实,言语也深入浅出。这种能力让我崇拜。
记得有一回,我写了一篇《畅游香港迪士尼》的作文传给舅妈评价,过了一会儿,舅妈上QQ对我说:“你这篇文章格局不错,内容丰富,细节处理的很好,但错别字太多,希望以后能注意。”我听了心里别提有多高兴了。因为以前我的作文一直处于中下,总是错误多于好评。但这次一向对我要求严格的舅妈也多了赞誉之词了,怎不叫人高兴呢。我把那篇作文保留在文件夹里,时时刻刻都让我知道,这篇文章是我第一次受到舅妈的表扬。当然,因为我的懒惰,并不是所有的文章都在进步中,比如近来有次我写的一篇作文受到了舅妈的严厉批评,原因是字数太少、结构太乱、没有总起和过渡句。当时怪自己太粗心,没有好好检查,才会写得乱七八糟。我真希望那时时光能倒流,让我回去好好反省一下。
上个月,舅妈给自己开了个博客,我也有幸拜读,她的文章、诗句,情感饱满。我在上面也发表了两次评论,也有别的读者在上面评奖。我听说有些人建立博客之后总是不告诉家人,也许是他们喜欢放什么隐私上去吧。舅妈的博客很明朗,她说有时就是将自己发表过的文章存在里面,有时将一些小小随感放置其中,不搞什么标新立异的东西所以也不怕家人看到。舅妈说以后我要有什么好文章就把它放在她的博客上去。我心里暗下决心,以后一定要有一篇作文被舅妈赏识放在上面,我相信我一定能做到 。
这就是我和蔼又严厉的舅妈,有了她对我的鞭策,我的文章以后肯定能够不断进步。
Winter grandpa quietly come to earth, a day and a night under the swirl of snow, the white snow, like the earth mother clothed with a robe.
Morning, dong dong and cc a listen to mom said its snowing, go and dress they wake up face, and then immediately ran into the yard and the children playing together.
The yard good lively! Some kids skiing in joyfully, some in jubilantly make a snowman, and in a snowball fight fiercely, its interesting! Dong dong and he also joined their ranks, cc to roll a big snowball, while others are responsible for the snow together, dong dong vigorously piled the snow together. He stood up, yi? As a something! So she quickly ran home, running said: "I go home to take something!" After a while, he was holding a small bag excitedly ran out. First she mysteriously from the bag took out two round and the little black button in the lovely face of light snow person, then took out a root long thin carrots in below the eye, and then take out a piece of red pepper do snowman mouth labeled, then on the ground to find two young trees on both sides of a fork in a snowman, a lively and lovely snowman was born. Last winter winter took off his scarf and hat to wear of light snow person, snowman has become more lifelike.
Spring is coming, winter winter and cc after learning home found that accompany the yard daily snowman is missing, they were very sad. Mother cant bear to see them so sad, and told them: "light snow men afraid of you sad just wrote a letter to you, quick to see!"
Winter grandpa left, and I began the New Year, I thank you gave me life gave me dressed up so pretty! Accompany I had a great winter! I really dont want to leave you! See the next winter.
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