每每天天,这趟城乡之间的公交车便成了钱先生笔下的.“沙丁鱼罐头”,我们从校门口上车,就“近水楼台先得月”,最差的也能在后排抢到一个座位,免遭颠簸之苦,还能观察车内百态。
坐在我前面的是一位带小孩的妇女,不厌其烦地回答孩子一个又一个天真的问题;过道里站着两位时髦的青年,一位戴着耳机随着节奏晃动,另一位则神情专注地玩着手机游戏,不时向周围扫描;过道前面站着几位打工返乡的男子,一上车就彼此问候,热火朝天地讨论着今年的收人;其余的就是和我一样的中学生,不仅人数众多,而且声音最大,此起彼伏地高谈阔论,俨然自己就是车里的主宰。
车行至凹凸不平的乡间公路,颠簸起来,乘客们随着车身前俯后仰、左摇右摆,吵闹声也戛然而止。突然,戴耳机的青年在同伴的掩护下,迅速将手伸向一位民工的裤兜……打工者的同行都看见了,但一个个若无其事地将头扭向窗外;车厢内的不少学生也看见了,个个却张皇失措;平时一个个热血沸腾、见义勇为的男子汉顿时成了“小绵羊”;司机呢,也自然不愿得罪这些人,默不作声地后视镜压下去·····一时,车厢里忽然静得出奇。
我的心“扑通扑通”猛跳不止,要不要提醒那位民工一声?见义勇为是我们每个人的责任啊!可是,我的耳边又响起妈妈的叮嘱:“不关自己的事千万不要多嘴!否则,会引火烧身!”老师也反复告诫我们,要保护自己,万一他们找我报复……
“喜羊羊,懒羊羊……”几声极不协调的歌声打破车内的寂静。戴耳机的青年一惊,“扑通”一声,钱掉在地上,戴耳机青年的脸红一阵白一阵,却把目光转向车外,众人哄堂大笑,我的脸也一阵红一阵白。老师说,见义勇为也可以讲究方法,我怎么没有想到呢?
今天,学校组织我们初一、初二级的同学进行全面大扫除,为的,当然是给参加中考的考生一个良好的考试环境啦。这个,我是绝对的乐意。Because I really want the students to pass the esam。毕竟,再怎么地轻描淡写,也掩盖不了我对中考、高考的恐惧感。与其如此,倒不如真心地祝福初三的师兄师姐们顺利考上理想的高中,也给自己一个后盾嘛!老班大张旗鼓,在班上动员同学配合工作的开展。让近路的同学带来水桶、拖把,还有镰子等劳动的工具。至于我们这些远路的同学嘛,老班算是“恩赐”了——让我们每人带一块抹布,仅此而已。
然而,我却把这种宽容当成理所当然,甚至还不放在心上——忘带了!同桌故作惋惜状:“啧啧,老妹,同情你呀!”下午只上了一节自习课,便是劳动了。水,多亏男生们的心意,他们早在中午吃午饭之前,提着水桶把水备齐了。6、7桶大大小小的水,各色各样的水桶,分外漂亮。自习课刚刚上完,全体同学不约而同地把桌上桌下的书本啦、纸屑啦统统收拾完毕。老班站在讲台上布置劳动任务——男生们除草,女生们水扫教室,擦窗子。我跟随着小雯,两人一齐负责临窗的卫生。
其实,那一扇窗子,我在很久前就觉得别扭,原因很简单嘛——它的“心胸”超广,尽包容灰尘!一直找不到合适的机会。如今,哈哈,机会虽向我关闭了门儿,却向我打开另外一扇窗子!窗玻璃擦干净了,再擦。再好了,还擦!待到玻璃窗水干了的时候,却蓦然发现:与原来的情况差不了多少呀!更甚至,玻璃窗上残留下一道道磨擦过的痕迹!小雯爬上去擦窗沿,我一骨碌跳上椅子,也来个“尽情挥霍”。“灿曼呀,看能否顺便把窗外擦上。”老班见我在窗子边端磨,便加以建议。
实际上,窗外是用铁栅栏封闭的,手伸进去擦也是不可能的事嘛!擦好了窗,就在旁边溜达。烁儿与慕华两人也在齐心协力地擦着窗子。额,反正也没有事情可做,就做她们的助手——帮她们洗抹布。班上的'劳动工作在同学们的努力下,已进入尾声了。老班指挥着同学冲水,扫水,再重复如此的式样。并让完成工作的同学到走廊上休息,也不再让有同学踏着满是泥土的鞋子进来了。
后来,除了把桌底下的湿纸屑捡走外,便是等待级长的检查了。只要他说一声OK,那么就over了!他来了,他把头探进教室环视了一周:“嗯,不错!”可是当他看到窗外的铁栅栏时,略带一点忧郁:“如果这个地方做好的话,保证是非常棒的!”老班在一旁解释道:“学生也想打扫清理一下,可是力不从心呀,你看!” “怎么没办法,示范给你瞧!”级长提起水桶,往闭着的窗户就这么一泼,大部分的污渍就落下来了。比起我们在那里边花费的苦力,不知要好上几万倍呢!大扫除完毕,我只是默叹:终于好了!希望给参考的师长们一个愉悦的环境吧,但愿如此!
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
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