高中英语作文评分表【一】
In everybody’s eyes, I am a good girl, because I make the good marks in the exams and help my parents to do things. Unlike other students, who will go against their parents, I follow my parents’ words. I don’t think that to do something goes against the adults is the wise choice, but I do want to do something new. Recently, I want to cut my hair and make the short style. My mother doesn't agree with me, because she thinks a girl should have the long hair. This time, I insist on my idea. Finally, she supports me. Trying something new makes me feel happy and be myself. The short hair makes me look like a cool boy and I like this style. My friends admire me to have the courage to change my image.
在大家眼中，我就是一个好女孩，因为我考试成绩好，还帮助父母做事。不像其他学生，会和父母作对，我很听父母的话。我认为做一些违背大人们的.事情是不明智的选择，但我想做一些创新。最近，我想把我的头发剪了，留短发。我妈妈不同意我的做法，因为她认为一个女孩就应该留长头发。这一次，我坚持我的想法。最后，她支持了我。尝试新事物让我感到预约，做我自己。短发使我看起来像一个很酷的男孩，但是我喜欢这种风格。我的朋友都羡慕我有勇气去改变自己的形象。
高中英语作文评分表【二】
When students finish their high school, most of them will to go study in college, the first thing they do is to choose the major. Choosing the major is a big problem for every college student, not only for Chinese students, but also for the students around the world. Students will face the factors such as their interest is more important or the future of the major worth being first concerned.
当学生读完高中，大部分人会去大学学习，他们要做的第一件事就是选择专业。选择专业是对每个大学生来讲都是件大事，并不仅仅对于中国的学生，对于全世界的学生来说都一样。学生仍然面临着他们的兴趣更重要还是专业的将来更重要的问题。
On the one hand, most parents care about the future of the major. When students decide the major, parents will interfere with their own opinion, they want their children can have a bring future, so they care much about the needed talent of the society. Thus the children can find a promising job and earn more money.
一方面，大部分父母关注专业的未来。当学生选择专业时，父母会干涉，他们想要孩子有一个光明的未来，所以他们很关注社会需要什么样的'人才。这样孩子可以找到一份有前途的工作，赚更多的钱。
On the other hand, students want to choose the major that they are interested. This is often contradicting with their parents’ opinion. Some students want to learn art, but most parents won’t be allowed it because it is hard for students to find a job. Everyone admits that interest is the first factor, with it, students will feel happy.
另一方面，学生想要选择他们感兴趣的专业。这经常和父母的意见相左。一些学生想要学艺术，但是大部分父母不会同意，因为这很难让学生找到工作。每个人都觉得兴趣是第一个要素，有了兴趣，学生才会感到快乐。
When choosing the major, students should considerate their parents’ opinion, most parents are open-minded, they will respect the kids’ willingness.
当选择专业的时候，学生应该考虑他们父母的意见，大部分父母是开明的，他们会尊重孩子的意愿。
高中英语作文评分表【三】
There are a small number of people called “the moonlight clan” in our society, who always run out of their income each month and have no plan to save money. Concerning with this kind of consumption conception, some consider it as a fashion while other oppose it.
在我们的社会中有一小部分人叫“月光族”，他们每个月总是没有钱剩余也没有存钱的计划。关于这种消费观念，有人认为是时尚而其他则持反对态度。
Those who are in favor of this kind of consumption conception point out that being moonlight clan let them have more chances to enjoy lives and live in a high-quality life. However, the opponents argue that it is not a kind of rational conception because those called “the moonlight clan” may have no ability to cope with their rainy day. In addition, this kind of consumption habit put a premium on extravagance and waste to some extent.
那些支持这种消费观念的人指出成为月光族让他们有更多的机会享受生活，过高质量的生活。然而，反对者则认为那不是理性的概念，因为那些所谓的“月光族”在他们低迷的时候可能没有能力应付。此外，这种消费习惯在某种程度上形成了奢侈浪费。
Taking the two opinions into consideration, I am inclined to agree with the latter one. From my point of view, the life of the moonlight clan is more luxurious or high-quality but they may be lack of sense of security, especially in their rainy day. Therefore, I still advocate that all of us should keep some money at any time so that we will not be too difficult in our rainy day.
考虑到以上两个观点，我倾向于同意后者。从我的角度来看，月光族的生活更豪华或质量更高但是他们也许会缺乏安全感，尤其是低迷的时候。因此，我仍然认为我们所有人在任何时候都应该存一些钱，这样在困难的时候就不会过得太艰辛。
