下午放学的时候,老天却毫无征兆地下起了倾盆大雨,我飞快地背起书包,向雨中冲去。渐渐地,雨水模糊了双眼,唯独家的轮廓依旧清晰。
离家还有十几米远,就看到母亲拿着两把伞,脚上只穿了拖鞋,就朝我这边奔来。她急忙为我打开伞,又把我已经完全湿透的书包背在肩上,书包上滴下的水珠已然将母亲的衣服浸湿。“妈,把书包给我吧。”“不用不用,快回家吧,雨太大了。”
我沉默了,却有一丝感动涌上心头。
一到家,鞋还没换,母亲就开始催我:快点把湿衣服换下来,别冻着。母亲却没有换衣服,而是急忙去了厨房。当母亲走出厨房的时候,身上已然不再是湿衣服,而是***;脸上滴下的不再是水珠,而是汗珠。
“来,吃碗喷喷香的牛肉面!”不知道何时,妈妈出现在我的身后。
我接过那碗牛肉面,吃的'正香,抬头一看,母亲竟一直在看着我。“妈,你尝尝。”“不,妈不吃,我吃不来这牛肉的腥味。”说罢母亲又去操劳别的事。吃完后,我便回房写作业。写着写着,听见房门外传来一阵声音,细听,便听见一阵喝汤的声音,紧接着传来一阵对话。妈对爸爸说:“这牛肉汤真鲜,下次我也给你弄碗。”突然间,鼻头一酸,泪水浸湿眼眶,那汤不正是我吃牛肉面剩下的吗?
夜色已深,雨还在,妈妈的忙碌还在,那些温暖的画面还在。
透过玻璃窗,只见母亲在收拾碗筷,已渐渐有些弯曲的背在不停移动,瘦小的手在拖着四个大碗,显得甚是沉重。细望去,母亲似已有几根白发,眉眼间略有淡淡的皱纹。这就是一个伴我14岁的女子——我的母亲啊!
“准备一下,好睡觉了!”一阵熟悉而又温柔的呼喊声再次响起我耳边,将我拉回现实。
窗外,雨已不再下,一轮皎洁的明月照亮大地,显得格外温暖……
农历五月初五是端午节,端午节是为了纪念伟大的爱国诗人屈原的,每当节日时人们就会吃香喷喷的粽子和赛龙舟。
每到端午节我的家乡可热闹了,一次端午节村里又举行了一年一度的龙舟大赛,是在奶奶家门口的小河举行的。天刚蒙蒙亮我们一家子就来到小河边集合了,大约七点半龙舟大赛开始了,小河旁人山人海,一位小弟弟突然叫起来:“龙舟来了!”我放眼望去,看见五艘龙舟驶来。龙州狭长,细窄,船头饰龙头,船尾饰龙尾,龙头的颜色分别有红、黑、灰等色,姿态不一。龙舟上还有锣鼓、旗帜或船体绘画等装饰,真是壮观啊!
随着战鼓雷鸣般的响声,龙舟比赛开始了,各村的人都来为他们助威,那声音简直都可以惊动天上的神仙了。船上更是热闹,只见我的爷爷正边卖力地敲鼓边大声喊:“加油,我们是最快的!”船员们听了爷爷的话更起劲了,他们一起划桨,同心协力,不言不语,竭尽全力地在奋勇前行!只见你追我赶,此起彼伏,真是竞争激烈,最后我们村的龙舟最终获得了第一名,当时我的心情非常激动!
一天后,我不得不告别家乡回到城市去上学。我告别了家乡的亲人,在我的脑海里一直都还保存着那段记忆。
我喜欢端午节,同学们你喜欢端午节吗?
端午节到了,一年一度的赛龙舟也跟着到来了!人们高高兴兴地来到河边看赛龙舟比赛,河边人如海,声如潮。比赛正在如火如荼的进行中。
大家喊着号子、流着汗、划着龙舟,龙舟在水面上飞快行驶。正在最关键的一瞬间,红方对蓝方说:“你们瞧瞧我们多快”。虚心的蓝方一句话也不说。
结果蓝方胜了!蓝方一片欢声笑语,真是虚心使人进步啊!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
我的家乡湖北秭归有很多传统文化,今天我们来谈谈划龙舟——龙舟赛。
东周末期战国时期,农历五月初五那天,楚国(今湖北秭归)大夫屈原含恨抱石投江,楚国人民因舍不得贤臣屈原死去,于是许多人争先恐后划船追赶拯救,后来每年五月初五,人们以划龙舟纪念屈原,借划龙舟驱赶江中之鱼,以免鱼吃掉屈原的尸体,便一直流传至今——龙舟赛。
可惜我从小一直在外地,只能在电视上和从爸妈口中了解龙舟赛的精彩过程,每年五月初五那天,江面上,上百只龙舟随着响起荡气回肠的“招魂曲”,竖起“魂兮归来”的招魂幡,以白龙为首的龙舟在江中缓行环游,深情的声声“我哥回”呼唤着爱国诗人屈子魂归故里。
招魂仪式结束,几十只比赛龙舟迅速在江面上的起点位置一字排开,指令枪响起,来自全国各地的队员们立即进入竞技状态……水花在整齐的船桨间奔腾,岸上山呼海啸般的呐喊声也迅速在峡谷回荡。
如今,秭归屈乡儿女不仅自己年年赛龙舟,还把龙舟划出了秭归,划向了全国乃至世界。
去年的端午节。在老家,我舅舅参加了我们老家的赛龙舟。他是最后一名。他上龙舟之前,还给我们打了个招呼。赛龙舟开始了:舅舅将桨在水里划的水花四溅,也不顾头上的汗,就拼命的划。两岸的人民震天动地地喊着:“加油!”龙舟在不断的滑行。岸上的人们是人山人海啊!
到了比赛中间,大家喊累了,就静静地看着比赛,似乎无人在喊叫。但只有人在拍手。表弟们拍的手都红的要死。到了比赛中间,舅舅在的那艘龙舟速度减了不少,大概留在最后冲刺。可我估计应该冲刺不了,因为,龙舟只有划才可以游动,不划,就倒了下去。
比赛中间,也是很难划的,只能奋力地划。水花不断地溅到了各位选手的衣服上,只剩下“咚咚咚咚锵”的声音了。我们都停止了拍掌,等着比赛的结尾,突然有两条龙舟划地飞快,我舅舅所在的那艘龙舟马上在后面赶。两岸的人们开始快活地喊叫起来了。又是震天动地,喊的耳朵都“聋”了。比赛马上接近结尾,龙舟更是加快了速度,我舅舅所在的那艘龙舟,保持着第三名的速度。所有龙舟只奔目标,“咚锵”“咚锵”“咚咚锵”的声音敲响了。龙舟们到得了目标,我舅舅那艘龙舟是第三名,共有4艘龙舟,这个成绩还是相当的不错的。
上次说了射击比赛,这次我们来说说十分传统的比赛——划龙舟。一般都是在端午节看到龙舟。史书记载,龙舟是为了纪念爱国诗人屈原而兴起的。现在划龙舟成了人们的一种水上体育娱乐项目。我国的运动员在许多比赛中获得金牌,当然划龙舟也不会示弱的。
现在,我来说说昨天中午的女子250米比赛。裁判一声口令GO!比赛开始,鼓手有节奏地敲击“咚!咚”声音十分有气势。刚开始身穿黄色的衣服的中国运动员动作都十分一致,处于领先位置。印尼队与泰国队也不甘示弱,紧追这中国队。不一会儿,印尼队的运动员开始用出她们全部力气,赶超了中国队。泰国队也开始更加努力地划,也超越了中国队。可是,中国队没有放弃,鼓手敲鼓的节奏敲击的非常稳,让队员不要紧张,更努力地划桨。不一会儿,中国队又是领先于第一位的位置。领先了两三个桨位的位置。划手们热气程度非常高,比赛的气氛十分激烈,只要中国队再坚持一会儿,龙舟冠军就会是中国队了。让我们一起为她们加油吧!中国最后一个猛冲,获得了本次比赛的金牌,真是一件好事啊!
最后,在颁奖仪式上,中国队员都身穿一身红色外套,手举一束花,脸上面带笑容,此刻,她们应该感到十分开心吧!
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