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如何丰富学生课外活动的英语作文【一】

Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.

So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.

In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.

首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。

第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….

第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….

第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….

其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。

段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。

统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。

连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。

完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。

再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。

1. It has been shown that … …

类似句型：It is known to us that … …

It is said that … …

It is reported that … …

It is controversial that … …

2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。

3. enable v. 使…能够

I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.

4. in that = because

表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：

The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.

此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：

Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。

最后，提纯范文“措辞”。

1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。

2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的

形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions

a multitude of

a great deal of

a large amount of

plenty of

many a

3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。

I argue that … …

I maintain that … …

I claim that … …

I insist that … … = I think that … …

I hold that … …

I assert that … …

I assume that … …

4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的

hold negative view = hold opposite opinions

5. phenomenon n. 现象

social phenomenon 社会现象

natural phenomenon 自然现象

6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever

(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever

在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：

1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会

2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会

3. 我的看法

Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.

However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.

In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.

如何丰富学生课外活动的英语作文【二】

我们生活的世界多姿多彩，而海底世界更是丰富多彩。水在太阳光下反射出不同的光彩，那，一眼望不到边的海呢?那更是多姿多彩啦!海平面如此，海底是不是也这样呢?

最具有代表性的，那肯定是鱼儿们了!这些在海底的鱼儿们比海上的`鱼儿漂亮多许多呢!

有小丑鱼，调皮的游来游去;有剑鱼，顶着一把剑刃锋利的剑耀武扬威;还有令人生畏的鲨鱼，看见鲜美可口的鱼，它就会张大嘴巴，露出两排锋利的牙齿，冷笑一声，便贪婪地吃了起来…… 其实，还有许多鱼，我叫都叫不出名字来。

这些鱼儿随时都有着生命的危险，那些冷酷无情的大鱼会毫不留情的吃掉它们，这时它们就需要一个温暖而安全的家啦!

在许多洞里就住着许多鱼，不要贸然把手伸进去，说不定里面就住着刺豚鱼、海蛇或灯笼鱼。黑乎乎的洞在人们看来好像很危险，但对鱼儿们来说，这是它们最舒适温暖的家了。海底，还有许多植物，像海藻、珊瑚、海带等等。

不过，最让人惊讶的还是?海底的树!海底怎么会长树呢?真是稀奇。这些树没有叶子，但却有颜色;没有果实却有树枝……这些海底的树有些长的比陆地上的还要高，有的树居然长在石缝里，树没有充足的阳光怎么活啊?没关系，白天，太阳光是可以直射到海里的，这也是它们能生存下来的原因之一。

海底还有许多丰富的物产资源，像石油，在现代社会中十分重要;像珍珠，贵族人的代表，戴在脖子上，透出高雅的品质……

海底是不是也很精彩、也很奇妙呢?

如何丰富学生课外活动的英语作文【三】

我的暑假是丰富多彩的，今天我将以美丽的画笔构出一幅最美的暑假生活画。

暑假生活是明黄色的，天气给人灌注了无限的活力与热情。于是：呼吸着清晨带着一点点青草芳香的空气，我和伙伴一起在海山公园晨跑，汗水浸湿了我洁白的衣衫，矫健的步伐踩着轻快的节奏，唱想着青春的活力;下午，我和哥哥一起去海洋学院游泳，在水中我们像一条条小鱼，在水中欢快的嘻戏，这种快乐很短暂。夜晚，我们在海滨公园散步，看着老人跳舞，听着歌曲的播放声。吹着凉凉的海风，给人一种悠闲自在的感觉。

暑假生活是绿色的。哪怕在盛夏时节，家楼下仍十分清爽，十分清幽。四周虽然没有参天大树，但也能将刺眼的阳光全部挡住，投下大片阴凉。让人心旷神怡。我会在大树底下聆听治疗声，同时拿上一本喜爱的书，悠闲地进入书的世界，享受夏日里难得的一份清凉。

暑假生活是蓝色的，这是我将会拿起笔，开始融入学习当中。上午我坐在老师家里，听口音浓厚的纯正剑桥英语，让我们到东西方的文化差异。下午我坐在书房里，沉浸在书海中。在林海音的笔下感受她小时候的可爱和天真。

我的暑假生活，缤纷而多彩，它的多姿多彩永远铭记我心，永远回味无穷。